SwaSan FF:Behind Their Masks(Epilogue (2) on pg 137 [15/03/17]) - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago


See i updated quick enough for you..Hope it doesnt disappoint you ..Thanks for the quick Res Talia dear🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Nita, 😊
This is the first story by u which I'm going to read as we became buddies recently. 😳
So, res for all the 4 chapters. 😃
Will unres as soon as I finish reading them. 😳
With love,
Aheli.



Really.😳..Your first story of mine.I am curious to know you take 😃.Yeah i know we become buddies recently..Take your time with the unres dear.. 🤗


And here is the link for all my Others works as well

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4693740


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: NitaReid




Really.😳..Your first story of mine.I am curious to know you take 😃.Yeah i know we become buddies recently..Take your time with the unres dear..🤗


And here is the link for all my Others works as well

https:// www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4693740




Yayy!!! 😃 Thanks for the link of all ur stories siso!! 🤗 Yes, will try to unres soon. If not today, then tomorrow. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nita🤗

I knew it ..its ragini ..😡...
Chapter 3 -- That story and bond between swasan ..Its so sweet and the concept of birthday gifts😳

Chapter 4 - I am sure swasan will definitely uncover ragini's secret ..and I hope sasnkaar gives a chance to swara and who is his wife ..?? I am curious..kavita ..sorry If I missed something in between ..birthday party/surprise sanskaar's plan for swara ..loved it ..but out of all I totally loved the suspense factor you held through out updates ..its superb nita ..👏👏

Will wait for next update

Love
Lucky

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98


Yayy!!! 😃 Thanks for the link of all ur stories siso!! 🤗 Yes, will try to unres soon. If not today, then tomorrow. 😳


Please no thanks was required.. Take your time with the unres.. Do it when you are free..
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Posted: 9 years ago
@Lucky - will get back to your lovely comment tomorrow dear... Currently so sleepy.. But your comment still made me want to start working on the next chapter like now.. See your are all my motivation and confidence boosters..
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Posted: 9 years ago
res dear friend
unres
Another beautiful update dear
so ragini is behind all this misery in swara's life ragini such a pathetic i ever known she did & doing for her haq right dear.🤢🤢
swasan heart belong to each other mr. maheshari how much u denied u can't get rid of swara so better u accept.
Thanks for the update
love u
bye
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the res showrav.. Take your time with the unres.. I can wait.. 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hooo. Kitna suspens he.
Par maja bhi a raha he read karne me.
Waiting for another suspens type part or dekhte he tension kam hoga ya badhega.
Waiting for next part nita.
Love your work always
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry !!! I missed from chap 3...

Omg...sissy such a thriller and suspense story...now my mind completely engrossed in the fact who might the culprit and reason behind it...just I'm half sure it may be Ragini but still doubts are revolving around my small brain..I need to read laksh pov and one more please reveal sanskar wife story has I want to know its murder or accident...its also create more drama to witness... 😆

But seriously...you maintained that thriller based story ver well akka.. Frankly Iam amazed while reading it sissy..starting from swasan childhood incidents..the way sanky narrated its just fabulous..and mall part omg its just amazing while swara felt someone following her..i felt I was some thriller movie..just hats off..my eyes suspicious about Ragini behaviour..but when sanskar tried to blurt out from Ragini...she didn't fall in trap...hope so soon she spit out the secret ..and raglak jakada...you creating lot of doubts sissy..but it needed for story..and you did gr8 job by making readers curious... 👏

Nice birthday party..but heartbroken my sweet swasan...but I'm affected for it..coz I want to know the real person for whole mess..same time I thank full coz of HER swara /pari landed at sanskar's world... 😳

Doubts: Why sanskar villa has security..and located at isolated area...so lots of confusion /tackles are coming...waiting for sanskar past..anyways it will create lot of doubts..and last part main person pov is given wow..well planned ,person in MM... Want swara to stay away from maheswari why??? Sissy please update soon

Well written sissy..superb...keep going.. 😃

Love

Lekah
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