SWASAN SS - LOVE IS BEAUTIFUL[LAST PART PG 39 ON 25/08 ] - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Harshada dear...

Terrific part...felt short...but overall nicely written..so swara confessed...shocking sansku...now have to wait for his reply..update soon..

Talia


Thank you so much talia dear.
Glad you liked it,
Will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Unres for 5 and 6 on page 29 dearest Harshu 🤗. I'll be back for 7!


Thank you so much dear...
Not a problem...read and comment when time permits😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Res:)

I know I am very late Harshu and I need to comment on 5 and 6 so am marking my spot and will unres as soon as I get a moment to type a proper comment:). Please bear with me X

Unres:

I am sorry I am late Harshu dear but things are really crazy for me at the moment 😕. I read and enjoyed both 5 and 6. 5 of course marks the start of the real step change for SwaSan's relationship with Swara having encroached so firmly into his home just as she has unbeknown to them both in his heart too 😉. I liked how Sanskaar is so solicitous about her comfort and he even went as far as to give her clothes he had bought for Kavita 😲 as those must have had painful associations but he saw beyond that and later when he saw her he was mesmerised by her and it was not tainted due to past association 😳. 6 of course was a truly powerful chapter- full of pain that you portrayed so beautifully. You said you were worried about it but you needn't have fretted. Sanskaar's past highlights so well why he is/ was the way we saw in the beginning 😭. How much can one man suffer, especially beginning since childhood with such callous parents and then that stupid bimbo he thought he loved 😡😡. But in some way of course this had to happen- that wound had to be bled to let out the festering poison and now the real healing can take place and Swara can truly make her place in his heart 😳. Just the fact that Sanskaar told her so much and opened up is proof enough of where things lie. So looking forward to see them progress in the next chapter and I have yet to read 7 so will come back on that in a separate post 😃

Love,

Shru xoxo



Shruti dear🤗
Don't apologize my dear...I told you I absolutely know and understand that everyone is struggling for time...even I myself is trapped in a very hectic schedule...so no need to say sorry at all...
Hope things ease up very soon for you dear😳
Thank you so much...
I am glad you enjoyed reading 5 and 6

Ohh dearest...I so love your choice of words...they are amazing...way more than my update...😳😳😳
Swara had finally gotten into Sanskar's home and she would be soon in his heart too
He had kept the clothes because he could not throw them away...he somewhere knew that someone would come who would value them...
Swara indeed is a breathtaking beauty...how could he get his eyes off her...

You made me relieved by saying this dear...as I mentioned I was very much anxious about that one...but if you are saying it came out nicely then I am very happy...
I wanted his past as strong as the reactions we have seen from him so far...I wanted to justify his character the way I have showed it till now...

He ofcourse had suffered a lot...the pain which no one can really understand...
true...he had to open up to her...what he had inside from his child hood was needed to come out...now swara will heal his every wound...soothe his every pain...how she is gonna do that, that's what we have to see.

Have a read in free time dear...
Dont exhaust yourself much...
EVen after being so busy, you are reading that's more than enough for me.

Thank you so much.

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Trisha_magnet

Nice
Plz continue fast
That was to small


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will do
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kavita_b_2004

Superb... Love is seriously beautiful... it will heal Sanksar's pain...


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sahakinju

Yes I like this part very much.
Swara direct love confession was shocking for me also.
Waiting for next part dear.
Love your work


Thanks a lot dear.
Glad you liked the update.
WIll update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Awesome Harshadha... I'm stunned with her love confession.


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Anu18



Loved this part Harshada. The love confession was so sudden. Waiting for Sanskar's reaction and thanks for the PM.

- Anu



Thank you so much dear.

Glad you liked it.

WIll update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Res Harshu.😳
Unresed.😃
Sanskar's past was so much painful!!!😭 Even Swara's friend Mahi's pain was so much that she ended her life.😭 Swara's sudden love confession surprised me.😳 Let's see how Sanskar reacts to it and when he accepts it.😃😉 Update soon.😳 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.



Dear Aheli,
Yes his past is too painful to bear...
Swara could somewhat relate to him as she has seen her friend's condition too...
Her confession is something I love the most in this story...
Will update soon my dear.

Love
-Harshada
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kricket

This chapter was beautiful... Please post the next chapter ASAP... cant wait😊



Thank you so much dear...
Glad you liked it...
Will update soon

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