swasan ff: ek chooti si bhool part 5 updated pg.11 - Page 4

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Tani very Interesting dear..

Felt bad for swara...

Loved the part...

But egar to now the past..

Tnx... harshu... 😳

Originally posted by: Kaveetha

Wow.. Tani you are writing a ff..?? I didn't see it earlier. Just read the prologue & part 1.. That was awrsome..👍🏼 Loved it. Length of this part is ok.. No problem. But if you can, make it more long dear. Update the nxt part soon.😃

Tnx... kaveeta 😳 will update soon

Part-2

I know swara that you are hurt... but try to understand me also. Trust me swara I never wanted to hurt you. But situation was not in our favour swara if I would not have married you than GOD knows what would have happened next. I promise you swara I will never force myself on you. We have reached at the main gate of MM and she is shivering right now. We entered at the main hall where one more blunder was already ready... my mom...

Sujata- ke chori aaj kithe gul khila rahi thi... tu aapni harkato se baaz na aayegi na pata nai aaj kiske saath rangraliya banane gayi thi.
(Hey, miss where were you at this time... you will not change i believe...GOD knows today with whom you were spending your night.)

Sa- baas maa... baas kariye aapni ye bakwas aapko andaza bhi hai aap kya bole jaa rahi hai..
(Stop it mom... stop this nonsense of yours right now... do you realize what are you saying)



Sujata- Kya galat keh rahi hu mai... je chori ne samaj me aapne gharwalo ki naak to katwa hi di hai...ar ab tune isse shadi karke hamari naak katwa di hai samaj me.
(What... what wrong am I saying... this girl has spoiled her family reputation... and now by marrying her you have spoiled our image in our society)

Sa- baas maa... chup ho jaie aap... aapko dikh nai raha ye bechari toot chuki hai andaar se..
(Stop it maa... just shut your mouth right now...cant you see she is broken from inside)

Sujata- aisse kaand karegi to yahi hoga na...
(The way she behaves this is the least thing which could have happened with her)

Sa- chup ho jao maa... swara chalo yaha se...
(Shut up maa... swara come along me.)

How can mom behave like this cant she see that swara is soo brooken. From the time we came out from car she is total blank. She was just standind there at hall listening to mom's taunts just bending her head. GOD just help me, please show me some way to help her please GOD...

Sa- swara... please mom ki baaton pe dhyan mat dena... mai abhi aa raha hu aapna khayal rakhna kissi cheez ki jarurat ho to mujhe phone kar lena...
((Swara... please dont pay any heed to mom's nonsense... i am coming in a while... be comfortable... if you need anything please call me...)

Life was never easy atleast for me. Life has always been a puzzle for me its knots was never easy to open. I never thought I would have loved anyone but I did. And now I am broken the one's who clamied to love me has broken me to the bottom. I have seen how my moyher used to live alone I always used to miss my baba..but never bothered her... and I was okayy with that also I had co operateed with the situations... but life never wanted me to rest... just in a second I came to know that sheakher uncle who used to live in our neighbour was our father. The thought of having a family maa...baba...ragini...dida...dadi ...n dadaji made me sooo brave that me n ragini fought with the whole world. To join our parents destiney we become swaragini from swara n ragini but then a blunder entered in our life when laksh alliance got fixed with ragini. We four sanskaar... lakshya...ragini n me used to study in same college. We four never knew each other...but then one day...

Guys i m busy... right now but will update tommorrow nxt part...plss leave ur comments...

Tani

Tani darling this is superb but small update... Nicely written... Hmmm laksh marriage fix with Ragini... Then how Swara came in between... It like serial... Im loving it...

Loving it

Originally posted by: sneharay

Nice update.. Well written

Tnx sneha... 😳

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Tani darling this is superb but small update... Nicely written... Hmmm laksh marriage fix with Ragini... Then how Swara came in between... It like serial... Im loving it...

With love...

Kam..

Tnx...kam di... 😳

Originally posted by: kritz4ever

Loving it

Can you pm when you next update

Tnx...kritz... 😳 will sure pm u... 😳

Suru is like the show..
Poor Swara..
Felt bad for her