swasan ff: ek chooti si bhool part 5 updated pg.11

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prolouge

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Sw- sanskar please calm down... shant ho jao...
Sa- shant ho jau swara... pr kyun
Sw- sanskaar ye koi tarika hai kissi se baat karne ka pagal ho gaye ho kya
Sa- mai pagal ho gaya hu swara... haaa haaa swara mai pagal ho gaya hu
Sw- sanskar itna hyper kyun ho rahe ho... ek baar meri baat to sun lo
Sa- nai swara mujhe tumhari koi baat nai sunani hai
Sw- pr kyun sanskar
Sa- kyunki tumne mujhe dhoka diya hai...

Her world collapsed in a second... he is not beliveing her... who have always respected her and her desicions... he who have always listened to her be whatever the conditions be is calling her a cheater...

Scene 2

Unkown person- swara i love u...
Sw- ... muted ...

Scene 3

Judge- divorce granted...
Sw- kya yehi manzil thi mere pyaar ki
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So here is d brand new pagalpanti of all who know me n r really close to me their gudiya...
Bt those who dont know me
Hiii i am tanishka u all can call me tani 😳

If interested like d post
If anyone wants pm can buddy me n mention in their comments about pm...

Since i am already writing an ff... so u all will have to wwait for updates... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX

part1- pg.1
Part 2- pg.5
Part 3- pg. 7
Part 4- pg. 9
Part 5- pg. 11
Edited by elsanna - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue is interesting..
Swasan divorce...
No plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice prologue.. continue soon
swasan divorce no plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tani darling.. big hug.. i understand 95% of dialogues... Yayyyeee... But it's request to wrote in english... Mmmuah..
Wonderful prologue little bit scary...

With love...

Kam.. RLM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tani ji superb start 👏
Divorce 😭
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Prologue is interesting..
Swasan divorce...
No plzzz


Tnx rocking bhardwaj... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinnni1992

nice prologue.. continue soon

swasan divorce no plzzz


Tnx chinni di... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Tani darling.. big hug.. i understand 95% of dialogues... Yayyyeee... But it's request to wrote in english... Mmmuah..

Wonderful prologue little bit scary...

With love...

Kam.. RLM.


Aww... kamila di love u too...
I will write the dailouges in eng in brackets for u 😳

Yours
Tani... uttu

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