swasan ff: ek chooti si bhool part 5 updated pg.11 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Tani ji superb start 👏
Divorce 😭
Update soon


Tnx sujay ji 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -CRJ-

mast che tani.. love ya 🤗


Tnx konu... lub you tooo... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting prologue..
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sneharay

Interesting prologue..
Thanks for pm
Update soon


Tnx sneha... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Tnx ahana... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

A girl was walking aimlessly on the middle of the road. She was having some flashes of marriage n someone calling a girl kallank. She was so engrosed in her own world that she didn't saw a speeding truck was moving toward her. Before she could collapse with truck two strong hands pulled her back to the side of road.

Sa- ye kya karne jaa rahi thi tum swara... tumhe kuch ho jata to...(what were u trying to do swara... if something wouldhave happened to you then)

She jerked him...

Sw- door raho mujhse sanskaar... mai ashudh hu... mujhe chune se tumbhi asudh ho jaoge...( stay away from me sanskaar... I m impure... if you will touch me you will also become impure)
Sa- ye tum kya keh rahi ho swara... chalo ghar chale...(what r u saying swara... come lets go home)
Sw- ghar... kaun sa ghar sanskaar... jiss ghar ne mujhe dhakke maar ke nikal diya(home... which home sanskaar the hone whose doors are tightly losed for me)
Sa- nai swara... mai tumhare maa- baba ki ghar ki baat nai kar raha... mai mere ghr ki baat kar raha hu... hamari shadi hui hai swara...( no swara I m not talking about your parents home... I m talking about my home... we r married swara)
Sw- shadi... shadi to meri lakshya se hone wali thi na... mai usse bahut pyaar karti thi sanskaar...pr usne... usse to chod hi do sanskaar jab mere gharwale jo mujhe saaloon se jaante hai unhe mujhpe bharosha nai to lakshya to phir bhi paraya hai...( marriage... I was getting married to lakshya , sanskaar but he didn't believed me. Leave him sanskaar whenn my parents who know me since ages didn't believed then he was a mere stranger to me)
Sw- ar ye kaha ka insaaf hai sanskaar... ki ek bhai ne chod diya to doosre ne pakd liya...(what kind of justice is this sanskaar that one brother left my hand and other one held my hand)
Sw- nai manti mai iss shadi ko... mujhe tumhare ehsaan ki koi jarrurat nai hai chale jao yaha se...(I don't believe in this marriage... I don't need your help go away froom here)
Sw- ek minute... ek minute tm to hamesha se yahi chahte the na ki mai tumse shadi karu...taki tum mujhe hasil...( wait a minute you always wanted this to happen na sanskaar as you u wanted to )

Before she could compelete her sentence she felt a burning sensation on her cheeks...

Sa- just shut up swara... and come with me...

She was dragged until they both came in front of sanskaar car... she sat in car after sanskaar shouted on her to sit. The whole journey swara was sobbing looking out of ythe window. Sankaar was feeling like killing himself when he saw red marks on her cheek...


how can I slap her what have I done. Its obivious that she will not listen to me as she had suffered soo much since 2 days I should have understood her but I slapped her.O God you know why I did this but I have to punish myself for this.
Edited by elsanna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
O god seriously guys i tried to write a big part 😭
Bt i dont know why i end up in so short updates... now i m literally crying...😭

Do leave ur comments...

Tani

And ya since the dailouges r in hindi as well as english. Please tell me if it is alright or not...
Edited by elsanna - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
It was really good looking forward for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update
Poor swara 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Nice update tani...
Tune mujhe dara diya tere story se...

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