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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Res'ing for part 3 and 4. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Loved both the parts so much!! Sanskar's and Laksh's POVs! 😆 Sanskar and Sahil phone convo! 😆 Swara's and Ragini's POVs. 😳 Finally SwaSan and RagLak met!! 😃 😃 LOL! SanLak's 'nahau yaa naa nahau' was hilarious! 🤣 Finally SanLak and Sharma Saab face off. 😉 SanLak in full tashan! 😉 Sharma Saab, tu toh gaya ab with SanLak's challenge. 😛 Update soon. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harsh baby,
🤗. Take care. Health comes first. Swasan kiss . And sahil and sanlak bond bhi acha hai. Jiju-saale bond. And then swasan and raglak part was so nice. Their fb 😆. Swara was behaving stubbornly but at last she accepted. Sanky and lucky are scared of cold water 🤣. But yeah, hot water is much better. It gives a fresh feel to us. Sanlak are all set to manao their asur --oops--sasurji. Pata nahi kya karne wale hain. They even challenged shekhar. Hope swasan and raglak unite soon.
Waiting for the next part. 🤗 For the pm.
Love u loads
Nivi
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harshu...
Hillarious update..🤣few part were soo funny...enjoyed loads...sharma saab night suit part made me all crazy..n that nahau k nhn...paani thanda hoga was fantastic.🤣.laughed soo much dear...climax was good..challege given by sanlak to sharma saab...loved it...it was a treat

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44
Yeah full on tashan mode whoopieweee...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it
n tnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#46
Fantastic update
loved it
plzzz cont soon ... eagrly waiting


thnks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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liked it
superb update👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sharma Saab
Part 5
Sanskaar POV-
We walked out. I brushed my fingers through my hair. I tried removing all the tension. Sharma Saab had to be a tention be it school or college or now my marriage. My phone buzzed. It was Swara. I picked it up.
Sa- hello
Sw- how dare u talk to papa like that?
Sa- is it something new to u? Y r u getting hyper?
Sw- Hyper?? I will kill u.. n yes no need to worry!! U better go back to New York. I will marry the boy of my father's choice and not u.
Sa- what the?? Kya kehlata rahi ho yrr.. r u serious.
Sw- I am R8 just get lost. Don't dare to call again.
Sa- but y?? Listen.. hello.. hello.
I tried calling back but she didn't respond.

"What the f**k!!!" I shouted and narrated Everything to Laksh.
He gasped.
"Oye what happened to her. . She never behaved like this. I mean we used fight with Sharma in the college as well." Laksh said.
"Phew god know. Well u come we have to tell everything to dad" I said and we reached our place.



"Great!!" Dad exclaimed. U came all the way to marry Swara and Ragini n now u r crying.
"Sanskaar Laksh u both are my eligible sons u need not to bother about Sharma and his daughters. I have more eligible girls." He advised
"Kya papa. What the hell?? We love them. C'mon we r not letting them go; swara she was angry and issiliye bola hoga yrr. Other wise she never does like this !!" I explained to my dad.

"DO as u wish tell me what I have to do?" He gave up any further debates.

"Okay then just coem and bless us at our wedding." Laksh said.
"Huh.. Wedding.. Ur brides are angry at u n going to marry someone else and U feel like I should come and bless u!! U idiots have some respect for my name atleast don't elope and marry. " He taunted.

"Then what should we do. Sharma is the same Kabab mein haddi" I argued.
"Oh hello what u mean what we're u planning to do ?? Elope and marry Swara n Ragini" Laksh cut in b/w.
"Na re. I thought we should kidnap Swara and Ragini from the marriage venue and marry them. Because they both are angry upon us they won't agree!!" I shared my plan.
"I feel like beating the shit out of u both " dad roared.
"We r obliged. " I vowed my head.


"Aree sochlo yrr.. get away from the shit and marry someone else. Wese bhi Swara and Ragini denied marrying u na then y r behind them." He adviced again.
"Areee only Swara denied him, Ragini didn't say anything" laksh again cut us.
"Ohohoho..Him marry her. When she will beat u with her dad's cane na then tell me did she say a word or not. Swaea's decision is Ragini's. Samjhe!!" I brought him back to reality.




Tensed we are here at our old tapti having tea. We are clueless what to do?? We tried reaching Sharma Saab tearce to meet Swara n Ragini. We wanted to convene them but Swara welcomed us very respectfully by throwing her chappal at me. She lashed the door. And didn't open it till we have to return emty handed. Ragini I know she isn't angry at Laksh but Swara is hell angry at me. Ragini is just following the fashion.

We sipped tea. When I could see Sahil grinning at us.
"Kya h, ja apne jija k pass. Those idiots" I taunted him.
He sat in b/w me and Lakh.
"Aree Aag Lage unko yrr u N only u both r my jijus" he tried flattering us.
"Oho .. ese kese teri behna ne chappal marketing bhagadiya" Laksh attacked him

"Aree thoda toh chalta h. Abhi shadi hogi Swara n Ragini wese bhi tum dono ko Marengi Abhi se practice karlo." He said smiling.
"Shut up, if u don't have a solution then get lost" Laksh coldly shut him.
"I Have" he said with brightly gleeming eyes.
"Seriously" Laksh said.
I was sitting uninterested at first but then I sipped my tea and spoke -" tell us " I demanded.
"Will tell u soon jiju I am ur Angle in disguise" he replied.
I coughed and tea was spilled out from my mouth. Laksh patted my back.
"U know what when u get so good then something is definately fishy." I pointed him.
"Trust me once atleast. " He said Making a puppy face.
"Don't make puppy faces u dog. U can never look cute" I insulted him on his face. It kind of gave me relief.
"Whatever u lute pitw Aashiq need my help or should I go" he insulted back n earned us along.
"Huh.. okay okay .. tell me" I replied.
"Ask with some respect!" He demanded.
"Be thankful Abhi gali nahi diya h." Laksh snapped at him sipping the tea. I smiled and Continued to sip tea.
"Okay, good bye ex jijus" he replied , shrugged his shoulders and started to leave.
"Oye sun. Oye.. oye Sahil " I shouted but he continued to walk.
It was the truth things were slipping out of our hands and we just had him as a ray of hope. We both left our tea cups n ran behind him...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49



Part6


Sanskaar POV-
We ran behind Sahil.
"Oye Sahil. Pls yrr what u want atleast u don't behave like this!!" I shouted
He halted and turned back.
"First with due respect appollogise to me and ask for help" he demanded.
Laksh let a sigh out. It was clear that he was irritated.
"Sahil ji. We r really sorry pls pls pls help us" Laksh said with a tinge of irritation.
"That's like a good jiju" he appreciated.
"But Sanskaar don't u want to marry Swara?" He questioned or indirectly asked me to request him as well.
"Bhai yrr ab toh do ghumake iske muh p chappal" laksh shouted.
"Dekh oye help karni h toh kar warna get lost, Challo Bhai no need to appollogise. " Laksh Continued and joined his hands with a sound "Apki aapke naye jiju mubbarak!!" He taunted Sahil and we turned and began to move.


"Aree!!! Wait I am coming !!!" This time he ran behind us. We smirked.



"I find something strange about those two brothers" Sahil said while sipping tea with us on the taffre.
"What?? " We quized him.
"Idk, but u only tell they came to see Swara And ragini but didn't even talk properly at that time. I was passing by them and heard them it was like they were equally uninterested like Swara and Ragini were" he explained further

Me and Laksh sipped tea. "Are u serious?" I questioned. This could be a good news for both of us.
"Offcourse I am. And then u know Na how papa slapped swara and every thing" he held the warm tea in his hand and glared at me. I was looking down. It was hurtful and felt guilty. Because of me Swara had to bear haterate from her father and mother. For no crime she had to face their warth.

"So what u want us to do" laksh sipped some tea and diverted the topic. He perhaps knows me well. I was thankful deep within.
"Hmm search for them. I think they have issues with the marriage." Sahil suggested.
"But How?" I cross questioned.
"That u have to search and that is ur problem" he replied

We let a sigh out.
"What about Swara and Ragini? They are angry upon us!" Laksh hit the point again.
"Machli ki Ankh" Sahil said.
"Abe MA ki hota h " laksh cut him.
"What the.. " Sahil shouted. " That is y dad hates u both. What ever. Machli ki Ankh mane agar dad ko in dono ladkon mein kami dekhegi toabhi woh tum dono ki Shaadi Ko Han bolenge. Agar woh Han bolenge toh meri behna toh Han bolengi hi." He explained.

Me and Laksh let a sigh out. So finally we are now all set to hit the Machli ki Ankh.




"Bhai what r we doing here" laksh quized as we entered a shopping mall stalking our saut. They seemed really uninterested about the shopping. We stood behind them and heard their plans to visit the food court. They were constantly messaging someone. They had about 2 phone conversations in about 2 hrs.

"We are here to help them shop for the wedding!!" I replied irritated.
"What??" Laksh wisphered still perplexed.
"We r stalking them idiot now shut up." I said





We sat besides them at the food court. We ordered two chocolate cakes. We heard them ordering 4 coffees. We were surprised. But we stayed paitent. In the next 15 minutes later two ladies and a kid joined them. The lady with the kid was pregnant. The other one seemed quite young. The pregnant lady wore vermillion and magansutra. While the other one didn't. They both didn't seem happy. We could feel the temperature in their conversation. As per the photographs shown by Sahil Raj was almost watery eyes. He was supposed to marry Ragini. He was holding the hand of the pregnant lady. Rahul on the other hand was trying to cheer the pregnant lady as well. They were having a serious conversation. Soon the lady with the baby bump broke into tears. We could see Raj's lips murmer an appology. Not knowing anything all confused we sat still.
Suddenly the pregnant lady got up and lifted the 2 -3 year kid in her hand. Raj tried calling her but she all soaked in tears paced out. Suddenly at the door step she fumbled. Perhaps her head spun and she fell down. Almost in time Raj caught her we joined the crowd and call the ambulance immediately.
Laksh held the little kid. We joined them to the hospital grabbing the chance. They all were too tensed. We took care of the crying baby. We stood with them as the doctor checked the lady. Raj covered his face with his pams. Laksh and me exchanged glances not knowing what to do. There were these mistrious brothers already haunting us.
Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome..loved it ...
Wonderful...
Beautiful...
It was hilarious ...Sahil dialogue... Sanky dialogue all so funny ...loved it...

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