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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
SwaSan ...❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😆 This is awesome... Hahaha.. Epic .. Sharma saab's tooth fell .. 😆

Epic love confession... ❤️

Loved it :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Different story he par bahout achi he.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
#34
Nyc..want to see Romance in Present too ..Continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#35
nice update. Waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Res for part 2.😳
Hey Harshi,🤗
Unresed.😃
Awesome and hilarious update!!!!👏😆
Lol Laksh's pov is also equally funny like Sanskar's one!!!!🤣
Laksh reason for calling Swara terrorist!!!😆
Laksh pecking Sanskar's cheeck and Sanskar's reply...😛
The FB part of college! OMG!!! I was laughing so hard!!!😆 Sharma saab ka daant toh gaya!!🤣
Loved SwaSan's and RagLak's moments.😳😳
Update soon.😉 Thanks for the pm.😃
With love,
Aheli.

Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey Harshita..
It was a hilarious update.. I loved how Sharma teeth fell on the ground... And the tease laugh from the father and sons... The revenge from Sharma.. The couples growth from friendship to love.. I loved everything...


With love..

Kam...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superb update
cont soon
loved it ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#39
Hahha... mast update hai harshi...🤣

Sharma saab...
Lets change it into sadma saab🤣

Khunkhar swara...🤣 pyaari ragu...😳

Gazab k confessions r upar se wo gaana...🤣

Ab to pet dard ho gaya...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sharma Saab
Sharma Saab
Part-3
Sorry for the quick short update will give a longer part the next time..I wasn't able to post last time... I had viral... N somehow managed today...Pls do leave ur replies... I know this part is for the build up n not much interesting but the next part is surely interguing ..
Sanskaar POV-
Haan.. I opened my eyes n saw laksh he was still sleeping with his head having frowns... He was worried about ragini... Hmm .. so am I about swara... Well whenever I think of her... I am reminded of her boldness..yes.. she kissed me at the time of our confession n I must admit it was a superb one... The meeting of our lips.. I slowly took her lips in mine.. altering i captured her lower lip 1st n then the upper one...I bit her lip she gasped n I entered her mouth... Our tounges touched... Hmm... Okay I am blushing after this... My swara is the best... Love u shona...
Hmm now what's the next..oh pls we couldn't go on a date.. I have no money ... Haan haan I was pahte haal but seriously .. I respect dad n his work... He really worked hard for us .. we were not ideal children yet we knew how to care for them after all they were our parents... Hmm so therefore nothing much happened after that except for swara n me feeling just blissful with eachother even while spending the most ordinary moments... I think this was the effect called.. "love is in the air..." ... Hmm... Well yes passed n thanks to ragu Bhabhi sa she was too scared from her Hitler baap n hence we used to study on our bunks as well.. n managed to get some really good marks...
What I feel Na not only us but also they were tortured for being sahil... Well leave all that... Flights going to land n hence I woke up laksh... He opned his sleepy eyes.. all they reflected were worry ..
I kept my hand on his shoulder... Well approx 15 hours we were In the plane .. our buts felt Javier... Aahh.. I am a bit tensed about will I be able to walk or not...
No no... I can't imagine my self getting stuck here on this seat... It will be torturous... I immediately got up... But on sensing ki yes I can stand still I sat back... Phew... Better...
Laksh is now giving me wired glares as if he saw Sharma in his night suit ... Oh I am reminded of an incident...
Fb--
It was new year we all 4 wanted to start it together n hence me n lucky joined swara n ragini for it ... We climbed our roof n reached theirs...
We were waiting with the cake... N as soon as it was 12 we hugged eachother... N then cut the cake... Huhmmm.. this is all normal r8 yes.. so from here itself came Sharma...out of blue n swara asked us to hide along with the cake box under the Diwan... I peeped out n saw Sharma in his n8 suit I must say it was a mistake it looked as if he was wearingrs Sharma's night ware...
Me n Bhai were laughing...N laughing like hell... N tried best to control our laughter... But how... How to control when u see a man wearing a gown... N that to with a belt which was tied on his big thick fat n round stomach.. making him look like a pregnant lady...
As soon as he went away me n him we ran back to our place n laughed like hell...
Me n laksh fall asleep laughing that n8...

Fb ends------...

We landed n again are running near the convyer belt searching for our goods the airport staff looking at us if we were aliens...
I called Shail...
Phone convo-
Sahil- hello whose there.
Sa- u dog where are u...
Sahil- kya karega tu kamine..
Sa- Shail ji kanhan par pade h aapke Charan Kamal..
Sahil- yeah that's my jiju.. gate number 3...
Sa- Abe 3 p kyun Mene kaha tha Na ki flight second terminal p land hui h toh gate 2 p ana..
Sahil- I know pat Mene socha story mein twist laun...
Sa- rehne de... Tera baao hi kafi... (I replied walking towards the 3rd gate..)
Sahil- I. Was thinking rohan n Raj ko hi jiju bolun..
Sa- kyun b...
Sahil- nahi woh badi izzat se baat karte h .
Sa- haan Bhai Tera pata nahi h Na .. abhiissiliye ... Izzat sete h.. tu ruk tere kand bata hoon unko kamine.. humse bhi badi badi galiyan denge tujhe...
Sahil - oye tu ache se bolega ya jaun..
Sa- theek h theek h...
Phone convo-ends
We reached n met him...
I asked him the situation he said... it all my hear aches.swara she slapped my asur..oh sorry my sasur because of me..
Sanskaar POV-ends...
Swara POV-
I am here in my room locked a day after is my engagement biwrh rohan..I can't do that ... I love sanskaar ... Pls bhangwabji do something.. I am here in my room crying and thinking about everything.. our child hood together.. our love confession n everything... I am atleast crying but my heart ached for ragini is sitting in a corner all numb caressing laksh's photo... It is bkur with her tears...
But no ragini just let the day pass I will Surely take u out I won't let u sit here n marry Someone u don't love... Sanskaar and laksh I need to inform them... I trust my love atleast this much ki he won't be roaming with other girls...well let the the sun set sisio I will call both of them those two idiots her
here asap..
I was lost in my world of thoughts when I hers -"Shadi Mubarak ho..." I turned n was shocked to see him..
Sharma Saab part3B
A/N- no no...no.. no joote no chappals..no tomatoes no eggs... Pls.pls.pls... All I am really really really really really sorry... I know if the most irresponsible Twitter of the page will be polled I will be ranked on the top.. ab reason for not giving the part.. sudden arrival of guests n I had to leave.. so I couldn't complete typing... Now u all will be like.. Harshita ki bacchi itte bahane kanhan se lati h... '...
Par buddies it's true... "... Fhew... So here I stop this nonsense of mine.. thanks for the response on the last part... Here we go so now swasan n Raglak will finally meet n the drama begins...
Pls do leave ur replies I am Waiting for them.. n I again apologize for the irresponsible behavior... """.. u can gift some galiya... To me for this... I don't mind... .. u have r8 to bash an irresponsible person like me... So here I shit my idiotic bakwas up... N continue the part...
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Loads of love n appology
Harshita...


Swara POV-
I was sitting n planning to inform sanskaar and laksh... My heart was aching seeing my siso ragini in the broken state.. dad u r a Hitler... U r a dictator.. I cursed him for forcing his choice on us... A tear escaped my eye by just a thought of marrying someone else ... It was more than the pain when sanskaar decided to leave for new York... For their jobs..
Fb--
Three days since sanskaar wasn't able to meet his eyes with mine I was confused...y but then he called me in the park at n8 1 am.. I was shocked..I asked y to which he said he wants to talk... I told ragini n her eyes were filled with moisture... She said nothing but insisted that I must go... I was confused... What happened to them...
In the park...
" I am going swara" he said with out meeting my eyes...
"What" I shouted at him...
He lifted his teary eyes...
"Yes " he said looking at me...
"N when will you return..." Woh pata nahi . 1 year study aur phir wahin p job..
"Are u serious??" I said with wide eyes..
"Yes swara I am ..." He said in a chocking voice...
I lost my calm .. I was angry, I was sad n I was happy at the same time.. yes sanskaar this will be settled so nicely .. I was very happy...
I started moving without uttering a single word.. he caught my wrist...
"Hey Puri baat toh sunle...". He said...
"Nahi sunni..." I gave a cold reply...
" Pls " he requested...
I turned to him... N this time I moved closer n started hitting him...
"U dog.. idiot...y r u going haan .. India mein kam nahi h Jo u r going to NewYork...? " I screamed at him.
He smiled through tears n pulled me close... I had tears in my eyes ... He pecked them.. n then my eyes...
"Sorry .yrr swara .. sun I will come back soon... Theek h Na... " He said...
"How... ??" I quized ..
"Transfer ... The firm has its branches at many places so I come back soon...".
He answer me...
We hugged... He pecked my forehead...
Fb ends------
This was our last meeting.. 2 yers have passed but no trace of him yet... He isn't back yet.. we have phone convos but still... It wasn't enough... He came once or twice bit still...we needed to talk face to face.. we had an urge to meet to hug...
I was lost in my thoughts when the room of my door swung wide open n I saw him... He smiled n said ... "Shadi Mubarak..." I got up n ran to him.. I hugged him...
"U idiot.. how much time u need everyday to come n meet me.. haan tell Na... He snaked his arms around me...
"Sorry yrr par ab toh agya Na..."
"Shut up.. pagal kahinka..."
" Dekhlo u r calling ur to be hubby a pagal..."
"Haan toh... Jo pagal h usko pagal hai bolungi Na... Gadhe..."
We both giggled... When a sob made us turn n break our hug...

Ragini POV-
I saw crying sitting on the floor ... I was sad I wanted to meet laksh... I remembered all our moments together... I loved him a lot... His confession... Made me believe he wasn't a wrong one to fall for...
I was broken when dad forced his decision on me... Tears rolled out of my eyes... I Lifted my face when I saw sanskaar... My heart skipped beats... My laksh will too come... I smiled...


Part 4
Laksh POV-
I saw Ragini her pale face lit up as soon as I met her. I encircled my arms around her. I felt my shirt getting wet. I cupped her face.
"Hey , Ragini I am back yrr. I won't let u get married to anyone else. "
She looked up at me.
"R u sure " she said.
L- double sure.
She smiled a little.
R- wese look at urself..
L- (cuts)- I look as if came from a flok of sheeps r8.
R- ji haan now get ready n come to meet dad . U know I can't wait.
L- okay challo bahi


Sanskaar POV-
I am the washroom I need to have a bath dad is ready to bombard me with questions. But the biggest question in my mind just now is - " Nahaun ya na nahun"!! Okay it's embarrassing but yes this the question in my mind just now I am under the shower all nude n thinking wearher to use the shower or not. Challo Bhai Sharma Saab k liye choti si kurbani.
Jai Ganga Maiya. I started the shower and shivered under cool water for 5 seconds.
Ohgod it's hell cold.
Sanskaar POV-ends
After the bath
Sanskaar went to the other washroom n knocks.
Sa- oye lucky did u have ur bath.
L- Bhai soch raha hoon nahun ya na Nahaun pani thanda hoga Na.
Sa-(yells) u idiot come fast.
L-okay okay. God save me.
N turns on the shower.



At shrma Saab's place.
The situation is tense sanlak are dressed neatly in black tuxedos. Sharma Saab is glaring at them
Sa- uncle pls try to understand we 4 love eachother.
L- Han uncle pls
Sh- (yells) do think I am a fool to marry my daughters to u 2 morons.
Sanlak- uncle.
Sh-(yells again) shut up.
Shows his fake yellow teeth moving close to the boys who hold their nose.
Sh- yeh dant tumne toda tha h Na
L- woh toh bachpane mein galti ho gayi thi uncle kya aap bhi.
Sh- SHUT Up. Yeh mere drawing room ki khidaki jtni bar Todi h Na tumne mera 1 lakh ka nuksan ho gya hoga.
Sanlak- sorry uncle.
Sh- koi sorry worry nahi h get up n get lost.
Sa- uncle ese gussa mat karo bat socho.
Sh- Aree mujhe sochna hi nahi h. Tum dono niklo mere ghar se.
Sa- uncle ap hi batao kya kami h hum mein. Young h, handsome h, bahar kam karte h. Application beti ko Kush rakhenge.
Sh- I don't trust u pata nahi u both r really working or just passing time in bear bars n night clubs.
L- uncle uske bhi na pese lagte h.
Sh- kya pata kya karte ho tum dono. Bheekh mangte ho, kachra uthate ho, kya waiter ho, post man ho ya peon ho ya watchman.
Sanlak- uncle it's too much hum sach mein legal advisory firm mein kam karte h. Seewe have our cards.
Sh- who knows if they r fake.
L- (angry but controlls) they r real.
Sh-I don't care . I don't like u both so my daughters r not going to marry u n that's final

Sa- Aree shadi apkse nahi karenge it's illegal in India. Aur hum ese wese nahi h.
Sh- SHUT up . Toh kya mein tumhe esa wesa lagta hoon.
L- humin kya pata ' yeh toh sharmishta aunty se poocho. Wese yeh teeno bache big Bazar sale SE liye kya.
Sh- OUT. oUt of my house.
Sa- ja rahe h. Koi shouk nahi h bezzati karane ka.
L- uncle it's a challenge. Manjao warna.
Sh- warna kya.
Sa- bhagake le jayenge apki beti ko.
Sh- OUT. GET LOST.
Sanlak start to leave when sanskaar turns.
Sa- (full attitude) agar apke damad mein koi kami mil jaye toh.
Sh- (red eyes) toh sabke samne apmi batiyon ki shadi tumse kara doon ga
L- (full Tashan) challenge.
Sh- challenge
Sa- challenge accepted..

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