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Hi all this my new story the continuation of it depends upon ur response... So comment khulke.. bindass n loads... Or no updates... Hope u will like it...


Sharma Saab..
Prologue..
"Papa I can't marry rohan pls try to understand ..I love sanskaar "ecohed a voice in the hall... But the it fell silent.. an elderly man snipped his fingers through the ckees of the owner of the voice... "Shut up... I don't want any excuse.. u r going to marry rohan n I hope u have no problem in marrying Raj" he pointed to his other daughter who looked down.. with moistured eyes..But nodded in a yes...
"Ragini how can u do that .. don't u love laksh..." Said the 1st girl again..
Yes the silent girl behind the 1st daughter of shekhar Sharma is ragini Sharma... Her younger daughter..
"Swara shant ho jao na pls... " Ragini said with moistured eyes holding the elbow of her elder sister swara Sharma...
"Nahi nahi nahi.. I love sanskaar and I will marry him.. n I am telling u ki u love laksh Na .. then don't agree for this marriage u won't ever be happy..".. swara again spoke up with determination..
" Sw..sw.. Swara..woh hum.. mein.. I .. I .. " ragini tried to speak in b/w tears..
"Kya ragini bolo Daro mat u love laksh Na .." swara shaked her shoulders..
Ragini nodded in a yes...
"Ragini how dare u ..." It was Sharma Saab... Who roared upon.. her..
"Listen u both have to marry rohan n Raj respectively.. I have fixed the alliance n not This two idiots.. sanskaar n laksh.. aur pyar vyar do din ka bukhar h abhi utar jayega.. samjhin..N dare if u take their names ..here... " Shekhar declared..
" Loongi...I will take ... I will chant his name he is my first love n ragini don't be afraid.. of dad pls.." swara again said.. ragini was already shivering in fear... She managed to nod her head.. this increased the anger of shekhar Sharma... The dictator..N sharmishta Sharma his solemate.. n better half...
Sharmishta held the arms of both the girls I. Locked them in their rooms upstairs . .."...
Sh- sahil u dare not support ur sisters. ...
Sahil sharma the only son of the dictator duo nodded in yes... .

Phone convo-
Sahil- u dogs where r u both...
Person - new York any problem.. aur kabhi toh bina gali diye baat kar Liya kar kamine.. ab bol kya hua..
Sahil- kuch nahi swaragini ki shadi ka invitation send karna h email toh batade...
Person- what the .. are they both ready..
Sahil- what u think .. hope u will inform ur brother... Either u both come here or shall I send u the invitation...
Person 2- u .. arahe h .. we r coming... Just try to delay..
Sahil- I will try my best..
Person2- u know what ..I know u have jsust informed us n now u will sit n enjoy everything..
Sahil- yes I will .. but kya karun I too love my sisters na. Otherwise toh would have never informed u both .. idiots..come soon...



Characters..
Sharma Family-
Shekhar Sharma - dictator n head of the house..He is a Hindi professor in government collage Kolkata . A villian in the lives of sanskaar n laksh
Sharmishta Sharma - Shekhar's partner in crime. His wife n also another dictator of the house...
Shail Sharma- the elder child of the house.. elder brother of swaragini.. intelligent.. n engineer by profession... Another villian cum buddy in the life of sanskaar and laksh... 27 years.. has a crush on uttara Maheshwari
Swara sharma- 26 years .. a rebell... She does what her heart says unlike her siblings who do what Mr. N Mrs dictator says... Legal advisor in Kolkata.. loves sanskaar

Ragini Sharma- 25 years youngest siblings of the 2. .. sweet n innocent .. not a Daredevil like her sister.. woks as a legal advisor in Kolkata along with swara... Loves laksh .



Maheshwari Family..
DP- a devotee of Sharma Saab always Chanting about achievements of Mr sahil Sharma in front of his sons.. n asks them to be like him.. a loving father with this as the only flaw..
AP- loving lady .. mother of sanlak. Saves hem from Dp's Sharma Saab torture..
Sanskaar Maheshwari- 26 yeras.. legal advisor .in new York... Loves swara has 36 ka akda with Sharma Saab n his beta ... The reason being his father's chant. ...
Laksh Maheshwari- 25 yers .. legal advisor in new York... Loves ragini.. he too hates shrma Saab n his son for the same reason...
Uttara Maheshwari- 23 yers sweet innocent chirpy bubly ladly of the house...pampered by her brothers n father ..She is a student.. unaware of Sahil's feelings for her..
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Part 2 pg4
Part 3+4 pg6
Part5+6 pg8
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Sharma Saab
Hi all this is the 1st part n it is in sanskaar pov.. I think sansku is a character which is originally the favourite of al..no matter the fandom is Raglak or swasan hence began with him... Don't worry next will have laksh... N then. .. somewhat the story from the pov of both swaragini n sahil...
Guys..do alag leads h .toh do alag tarha ki love stories h... I hope u will in future updates like the sweet love story of Raglak... A shy rags n a sweet sa laksh ...N swasan ki khatti meethi wali love story... N yes bold too... I will add Raglak n swasan romance n story equally guys so don't worry okay...
Part 1
Sanskaar POV-.
@NewYork airport..
Hmm... If u will notice properly.. u could see two men running like dogs ... hitting people trollies n carts jumping here n there... yes the 1st one who is running ahead is me.. Sanskaar Maheshwari n the next one is my Bhai sa.. Laksh Maheshwari... No no .. don't think laksh is fat or lazy or don't think me to be an athlete.. just notice properly.. laksh has 2 bags to carry so he can't run as fast as me .. yes me I have no bags .mine are with him...
We a few minutes back had an argument with the airline staff for the tickets.. ab don't ask konsi h.. challo let me tell u.. we have got a air India flight...
We kept our bags for loading ..N immediately went for checking.. the staff is looking at us wieredly y not.. here r we with our ties misplaced..our hair messed up..N shirts have tuccked in our pants n half hanging loosly..
We urgently went n entered the flight.. yes there were make up bags.. sorry sorry air hostesses welcoming people... N must say she did not like us at all... But who the hell cares.. we too did not like them.. make up bags.. we r now seated on our places.. n laksh I could see a lone tear escape his eyes.. .. we were breathing heavily .. .
"Laksh are okay .." I kept my hand on his shoulder .. n he hugged me..
"Bhai we will reach on time Na... The..the marriage.."he couldn't even speak properly for now...I hugged him...
"Kuch nahi hoga ...we will reach on time aur iss Buddhe k samne se bhagake le jayenge swaragini ko... " I cheered him up...
"Budda sala..." He broke the hug n babbled...
We fell silent.. but I think u want to know ..who is this Buddha.. who r we .. y r we. .. running like idiots... Ops sorry.. dogs..we were running like dogs... So let me naraate u a story... My love story.. laksh's love story... Well u can in a sum up can call it.. "Sharma Saab.."

Uff.. so here we go...

Fb--
Let's begin from the beginning..
But before tha .. say it loudly..related after me.."Bolo Sharma Saab ki Jai... Bolo Sharma ke bte ki Jai... Bolo Sharma khandan ki Jai..." So here we begin with the Sharma Puran
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My dad married my mom n brought her into their new home... In Kali badi Kolkata..a small yet beautiful house.. . It was just the beginning of the mistakes.. btw..just adjacent to our house was another house..yes here I introduce u to the the greatest n the most horrifying villian of all time. "Sharma Saab" aka. "shekhar Sharma".. he had Married his wife 2 years before...well she was pregnant at that time n soon gave birth to her son sahil..jerk.. doosra villian..
Well continuing about the mistakes.. one Day my dad couldn't control his hormones n so my mom's hormones went out of control..N they commited a mistake... Which led to the birth of a looser.. me.. "Sanskaar Maheshwari"..
I was a 6 month baby... When came a news yes.. a beautiful daughter was born in our neighbour's house.. swara.. "Swara Sharma" 6 months younger to me.. wese yeh Sharma sala he is very desperate ..man... Eggh.. Jo bhi.. my mom took me there n as she narrated I played with swara .. in her craddle..see how close we were.. wese ladke chihore hi rehte h.. no matter they are 6 months 6 yrs 16 yrs or 26 ...
What to say to Sharma Saab when my own dad commited the same mistakes again n again..yes...an year later was born another tragedy of our house..."Laksh Maheshwari".. seems Sharma was in competition with my dad or vice versa...6 months later Ragini was born.. "Ragini Sharma" .. another prisoner of the jail..
Well me n swara .. were too busy with playing together... U know we were 2 young kiddos..But mom says she used to pull my hair.. n we used to fight... Pulling eachother's hair... N rolling on the ground.. when sahil used to come in defence n beat me.. huh.. jerks..
Well my brother was no different he too played with Ragini in his craddle... N I must say he is a desperate man... Because mom says he has pecked her on her cheek.. I said Na boys will be boys regardless of the age ... They will remain chihore.. well whatever..
The things seemed quite peaceful by now..yes my dad mom n infact the maha desperate shama has halted. . Finally no more kids.. me n swara used to play together..N as far as mom tells .there were fights with toys... He used to throw my cars on me.. ughh... N I used to cry n sometimes in rage I used to throw her dolls on her n then sahil used to come n beat me..N me n sahil had a huge fight.. yes see kitta gussa h bachpanse hi mri life ka villian h.. n that swara she used to clap her hands when sahil used to beat me.. uff...this girl.. I hate her..no no.. I hated her...But now toh i love her...
Wese unlike us was ragini n laksh... Payre shant bacche.. mom says they never used to fight.. laksh n ragini they used to sit in a corner n play... Silently no fights.. but one day by mistake laksh pulled out the eye of ragini's Teddy. She started crying n so did laksh... I came to the rescue... But that sahil he again stood up..N so did I ..this time h beat me again... For laksh...
But in think my dad didn't learn from the two mistakes..N he again did it..But this time ... Aww it wasn't a mistake it was my cute siso uttara... Yes we both were so happy to get her.. we used to play with her more leaving swaragini n sahil alone.. huh..N yes we never used to let sahil cone near our baby doll... Jerk.. I wanted to beat him... Like he Beated us but no... I can't see tears in the eyes of my uttara.. well was he feeling the same.. may be he too could not see tears in eyes of swaragini...
Hmm.. so years passed n I think swara got a lesson ..now we did not fight ..
But this sahil .. he became a cry baby...N my dad became a Sharma Saab bhakt.. yes.. they r best buddies n always had their tea together some times at our place n sometimes at their ...

I still remember the summer vacation when I was 7...
Our days used began with my dad praising sahil yes..now u get it..woh kehte h ki hum sabki life mein there is a Sharma Saab ka beta...who is better than u in everything.. no matter how hard y try that Sharma ka beta will always be a step ahead..yes this was the case with sahil n we the brother duo used to hate him.
So back to the point is dad used to compare us with him.. see he got 100% when he was in ur class.. oh that rondu he had to get full marks always...N torture us.. my siso yes she is very intelligent n a topper not like us the average students yes yes the 90% scorers are average Bhai...
Challo Jo bhi . Par what I liked the most were evening we all used to play cricket n yes swaragini used to be there.. they too played with us..
Awwee.. my swara.. wese uttara n sahil used to sit n chat..ughh.. me n laksh used to keep an eye on him.. u know Na he is a jerk..
Huh.. whatever... So one evening we were playing... N I was doing the bowling n swara was the batting ... Yes.. I threw the ball..it swung...N there she was she hit it with full force .. the ball was supposed to go high...But it hit the head of that jerk..sahil... Yea n I thank him for saving uttara but what he did next is the reason i hate him.. he started crying n went to his house n u know what he said..
"What happened my baccha" asked Sharma Saab..
"Sans . Sanskaar... He n his bro..their ball hit me with their ball.." sahil replied in b/w sobs...
Like really.. there is a huge difference when it is sanskaar n laksh hit sahil n their ball hit sahil...
Oh how wicked... We Continued to play when Sharma came out n gave us a death glare
The next was he complained to my dad...
He held our ears n dragged us inside...
"Papa.. yr it's paining..leave us..Na.." I protested..
When dad glared at us.. I kept silent after that..
Dad asked y we hit sahil..
"No dad we didn't.." I said..
But he jerk again spoke up...
"No uncle their ball really hit me.."
I was going to get into a verbal fight when my dad slapped me... I felt a burning sensation on cheek.. I landed a n my mom's lap.. my vision was blurred by tears ...
"Don't repeat that again.." roared my dad... when mom came to a defence...
"He didn't have intentions to hurt sahil... First toh I can't believe ki my son's have hurted him...N second if they have done it also then their intentions weren't to hurt him... Khel Khel mein toh lagti rehti h... Kal sanskaar ko bhi lagi thi... Aur ball aapki beti ne Maari thi Sharma Saab.. but he didn't complaint... N if ur son is so delicate ask him not to come out n not to play with my son's.. don't forget how he used to beat my sanskaar .. yeh dono bacche h .. atleast u both grow up as fathers... " .. saying this she bent down to my height wiped my tears n lifted me up .. my Cheek rested on her shoulder n we retarded to our room.. it was the 1st time Dada had slapped me... I was all numb ... My mother pecked my forehead.. helped me take a bath n change... She spoke nothing nor did I .. she then placed my head in her lap n slowly sang her lullabies... I still couldn't sleep ..infact it was far away from my eyes... The red eyes if my dad my still red cheek with the blue imprints of his fingers .. n his words n distrust on me... All were paining me... I was slowly weeping when I saw him approaching the room I clutched the saree of my Mom tight n closed my eyes .. pretending to sleep...
Yes it was all I could do... Dad came in..
"Annapurna.. " he called my mom...
"See I don't want to talk to you ..." She replied...
"But atleast listen to me 1st . ." Dad defended himself ...
"Did u listen to sanskaar when he was trying to speak...no Na.. then don't talk to me I don't want to listen to u... Laksh ask ur dad to have his dinner it is on the dinning table...N tell him I won't serve him..." Said my mom... N dad left guilt ridden... She again bent down n pecked my forehead...I slightly opened my eyes...
"Babu.. sanskaar..kuch kahega... Wanna eat something.. hmm..." She said caressing my hair n I nodded my head in a yes...
She brought the dinner n feeded me... Wese I loved my mom..I had forgiven dad at this point but still pretended to be angry .. because I was enjoying the special treatment... I yes I liked the way mom scolded dad... Hehehe.. I know I am a jerk but still..Thoda toh banta h Na boss.. challo.. I was hurt n hence didn't came out to play or chat with Swara n laksh had to support me... N hence he too did not play with rags..
Awee... Mera Bhai mera pura saath deta h...love him..
So it continued.n continued n Continued untill..one night when my dad entered my room as I saw him approaching I closed my eyes...
"Hey champ.." he begun..."I am sorry buddy .. but yr ee naraz mat ho... Dekhna Teri maa bhi is not talking to me... Pls Buddy... I love you .. bas galti ho gayi yrr maaf karde.. iita bhi naraz mat ho u r not talking to me... When I leave for the office I find ymu sleeping n when I return then too u are sleeping a week n I miss U so much... U know when...U were born me n ur mom we used to talk for hours.. n hours about u... We love u sanskaar..I love u pls don't be so angry.. I am really sorry.. pls jab kal office jaun toh u get up like u do n hug me .. pls... " With moisture in eyes my dad began to leave when he might have felt a pull on his leg.. he turned n saw me.. I gagged him.. he bent down n hugged me back...
"I am sorry champ.. " he said wiping my tears...
I pecked his cheeks n simply said..."I love u papa..."
The next moment he embraced me.. n then we sat on the bed I was hugging him...
"Wese were u listening to me.. I thought u were asleep" he looked at me in astonishment..
I giggled..
He nodded his head n pulled me closer.. that n8 I slept in his warm embrace...

Hmm.. after that things were back to normal.. dad believed me more now.. n he too gave me chocolates n me being me... Wanted to share it with swara laksh rags. Uttara.. offcourse that jerk n bhukkad sahil he joined us.. his eyes were greedy n stuck on my chocolate as if he will eat it In one go.. well he was a kid at that time ..But still I wanted to punch him.. it all happened because of him .. n his fake complain n now he was sharing my chocolate...

Fb ends----

Well what now.. here comes the airhosterss with our snack... I smiled n took it..
She smiled back..yea a fake smile...
She passed another plate to laksh n smiled at him too...
Well how much tensed or bad is the situation food is good we the brother duo can never neglect food.. now Bhai readers..woh kehte h Na k pehle pet pooja Phir kam dooja...
Toh bas now we the both want to have these tempting snacks..
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Hl- So guys here we come to the end of the 1st part hope u liked it pls do reply so that I can continue...

Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting yr...
Waiting for 1st part...
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Hey mate.. interesting prologue it seems comic genre... In all in..
Soo sanlak going to fight with sekar for their love.. wow..

Update soon..

With love..

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Haha... This sounds so interesting!!! 😃
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This sounds really interesting. I think it's a comic genre. Pm me whenever u updt
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Harshita interesting prolouge...
Continue soon
Do pm me when u update
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Oye hoye Harshu!!!😊 Kya baat hai!!! So awesome prologue!!!😉 I feel like killing Mr. and Mrs. Dictator for for forcing SwaRagini to marry someone against their wish!!😡🤢 Swara is really a rebel yaar!!😉😆 Ragini is sweet and innocent.😳 Was feeling bad for them.😭 So Sahil is their brother!!!😕 He is also a dictator like his parents, but also cares for his sisters happiness.😊 And the persons he called have to be SanLak.😉 So he is inviting SanLak to come asap so that they can rescue SwaRagini from this unwanted marriage.😉CS is nice.😊 What?? DP always chanting Mr. Dictator's name??!😲🤢😆 AP always saving SanLak from Mr. Dictator's torture.😳 Sahil is having feelings for SanLak li'l sis, Uttara.😳 Update soonish.😉 Thanks for the pm.😃 Love u and ur stories!!!😳
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Harshieta superb start 👏
Sharma shaab 😆
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nice prologue
continue soon
thanks for PM..

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