~SwaSan Story ~ A Bound Relation ~ Updated Epilogue - 10/04~

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srividhya87

@srividhya87

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Posted: 7 years ago

#561

So beautiful and romantic update dr.

Hope sanskaar clears all the doubts before swara misunderstands him

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

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Posted: 7 years ago

#562

Dear Shreeta,

Hope you are fine?

The update was not what I expected and not as I feared either.😊

I would have preferred Swara to understand that Sanskaar loves only her and not Kavita, before she surrenders - she is in love with him, he is in love with her, but neither have told it to each other, and a small part of me worries that they might wake up with regrets. But I trust you as a writer to justify both their reactions and the subsequent story.

love

Nyna

PS - well written

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ritika52

@ritika52

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Posted: 7 years ago

#563

Very beautiful moments of swasan...They both nt confessed yet bt love each other in their hearts... Hope sanskar clears all misunderstandings and makes swara understand his love for her...Hope they dnt wake up regretting all this...They have unspoken bond of love which needs to b out in the open ad well...Plz unite swasan in true sense without any misunderstandings in between...A twist in the tale...Good or bad... Intresting...Jst hope all remains well in swasan life...Waiting eagerly for the next update...

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san45

@san45

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Posted: 7 years ago

#564

Awesome dear finally you posted if possible than try 2 time to post please your story it's sooo amazing can't wait to read more and more...

And after this beatiful swasan scene please don't let him or her regret they just confessed their love in their heart and please kindly let sanskar clear all the misunderstanding between them it's just the beginning of their relation can't afford to get ruined so fast...

Loved swasan scene

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dhara2013

@dhara2013

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#565

Hi,

It was awesome part. Just missed swasan confession. Hope they don't regrt next morning. :)

I wanted to know where can I read you other stories?

Thanks,

Dhara

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.Pinky.

@.Pinky.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#566

Its amazing dear...loved it...update soon...

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Sonia

@princessSonia

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Posted: 7 years ago

#567

hi dear

please please

give us an update...

i just love your story...

its beyond amazing..

do continue

eagerly waiting for the next part...

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ExpectoPatronum

@ExpectoPatronum

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#568

Concept seems really interesting! Will start reading now!😆

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#569

Shreetha

One of the best intimate scene of swasan...I like it this way...action speaks louder than words...even though they haven't confessed, they are sure abt their own feelings...so it doesn't matter whether the other person is reciprocating the feeling...you are ready to surrender yourself in the love you feel for the partner..there is a beauty in that...I really loved it...only regret is that the story is nearing it's end...don't want that to happen...

Veena.

And finally Sanskar instead of Mr Maheshwari...

Edited by blindassassin - 7 years ago

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.FireBolt.

@.FireBolt.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: dhara2013
Hi,
It was awesome part. Just missed swasan confession. Hope they don't regrt next morning. :)

I wanted to know where can I read you other stories?

Thanks,
Dhara

Hey Dhara..

Thank you dear. Here are the links for the other stories which I posted. I hope you like them as well.

SwaSan - Remember Me

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4623016/swasan-ss-remember-me-updated-epilogue-on-page-45-04-09

SwaSan - Mere Ajnabee

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4644943/swasan-ss-mere-ajnabee-updated-last-chapter-on-page-38-on-13-10

Love,

Shreetha..