ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ

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The.Lannister

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Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Res!

But you already know how much I loved it right? xoxoxox

Unreserved:

Firstly thank you for starting your new FF. Given your disinterest in the show in the past few days I was almost afraid that you wont write this thing & we would miss out on a good story. So 🤗 for beginning this...and knowing you, if you have begun you wont leave it half way xxx

OK so now coming to the prologue, I loved how for a little while you maintained the mystery of who the girl in the picture was - swara or ragini. But then Sunny isn't going to feel THAT way for anyone else but his Swara😳 And then that all powerful ever present cosmic connection between them! If only people who had such a connection could later on understand how connected they were even before they had met...wouldn't it make their relationship even more meaningful😳 😳

While imagining the whole office set up in my minds eye I was imagining the offices of Pearson - Specter - Litt from Suits USA😳, Harvey's office to be more specific!😆 And this Sanskaar seems no less than Harvey😳

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Res..

Unres...

Hi Shruti dearest🤗

I have forgotten lot of Res due to my schedule..So dont want to forgot this one either.. Totally loved it dear.. New FF from you was more than enough to get excited but the whole prologue was really intriguing as well..Sanskar is searching for Ragini, Swara is trying to get past dadi and meet Ragini ..Interesting..I cant wait to know more..Knowing you i am prepared for lot of twists and turns in this journey.. Once again i am really happy to know you have started another FF dear..

Love

Nita

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Oh shruti finally you are back
Superb story
Totally mind blowing
Please update soon

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Hi shruti 😊

Intresting prologue

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blindassassin

@blindassassin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Shruthi

Totally unfair. Here I wait for your new work everyday till midnight and yday after I hit the bed it's posted in the forum.

I know we are from different time zones yet I missed it reading it immediately.

Shruthi I am happy you decided to write an FF entirely different from DK , set in the modern times. It just proves how versatile ,a writer you are. You can be Rajamouli and Karen Johar at the same time. When you become a published author I am ready to be your PRO. No remuneration needed, just want to be the first to read all your works.

And coming to the plot, what an intriguing epilogue. And the stunner was that the girl as everybody expected was not SWARA but RAGINI. So if the epilogue is an indication of what follows I am sure I will be restless for the succeeding chapters after each update.

Waiting for the events to unfold

Love u lots, Veena

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

shru🤗

res😛

Unres

First of all ..welcome back ..I am super duper excited for this one ..One of my fav is back on block..yay..

Prologue

Seems damn intersting shru ..A complete different setting from DK..Cant wait to see the plot unfold ..Prologue already left me wanting more..😛

and thanks for the clarification ..I was confused hwen he said ragini when I felt it was swara .and the comsic connection element back to play ..😳.

Chapter 1

shru .any genre and style ..your words can just crack it ..

and wehave all 4 charcters making an entry mutual freinds party .

Sanskaar ..I am already in love with this guy autocratic and arrogance😆..cant help aadat se majbooor ..😳 and his heart as usual tugged by only one ..swara nad swara too couldnt help than to notice his features and captivated by him at least for few min ..I can see sparks already 😉

Sanky ki business rivalry with sekhar ..very interesting

Laksh - Flirty but struck by ragini .hmm ..all set to land all of them into trouble and entangle..

Looking forward to see the equations unfold b/w all 4 .. and Swasan ka scene I can totally imagine happening in front of my eyes ..and only few can manage to do that..you are one of them..One more awesome read on its way and I am all for it

Love

Lucky

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Zephyr8

@Zephyr8

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Hi Shruti, good to see you back. Loved the introduction...looking forward to the twists in the tale. Thank you for the PM.

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Oh wow shruti!
Suspense,mysterious,interstng & a beautiful lovestry tied with past z ahead.
Awsm strt.
Luking 4wd 2 strting of d stry.thnks 4 pm.updt soonish

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Shuchi2013

@Shuchi2013

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Hey!

Prologue looks amazing!A new story!Yay!

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swathi90

@swathi90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hey shruthi,after long back with a new story,well prologue seems to be very interesting😊 seems like some revenge, suspense type story,little confusing didn't understand on whom exactly sanskar s angry s it swara r ragini? R s he misunderstandig swara as ragini,pm me would love to read😊 update soon

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