ENTANGLED INTERLUDES -A SwaSan FF -Chap 10- Page 2; AN- PG 86 PLS READ

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RAONE8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

hey shru,

intriguing prologue

I am so xcited to read ur story once again

well this one is looking very interesting ...cnt wait to read more

cont asap

n thnks fr d pm

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Nupur_5
Hey Shru :)

Though I have read all your masterpieces Bt this is the first time I'm commenting in & about your works!
So sorry for not commenting before!

Coming to your new FF: I'm so happy that you are writing a new story!
I love your writing & DK was one of my most fav which I really miss so much!
So it's really wonderful that we are going to get a new story from you!

Prologue seems interesting & very intriguing!
So something, maybe quite bad, happened to Laksh, Sanskaar's precious brother!
Because of Ragini, maybe?
At least Sanskaar think so Bt he is mistaking Swara as Ragini!
I'm confused, is Ragini responsible for whatever it is with Laksh or Swara when for some reason Sanskaar thinks her name is Ragini which you already mentioned!
It's really confusing Bt don't know why I think Ragini is responsible or related to Laksh & whatever happened for Sanskaar is so agitated!

Bt it's became a fashion that RagLak is the reason for SwaSan to battle with each other at first ;)

Right now it's really confusing and I'm looking forward to know more ! Specially how SwaSan met first as you said Sanskaar wanted to push Swara's hair from her face! Bt then again what actually happened that he think her name is Ragini?

Well I will get my answers in coming updates! Till now I have to wait!

Thank you Shru for always sending PMs even though I'm not a boon as reader for a writer! So thank you :)

And I'm really very sleepy and don't know I made any sense or not! Sorry if not!

Hey Nupur 🤗

I caught this just before I myself hit my bed as I had a mega early start tomorrow and it's late here 😊. You made my night with this comment and you made perfect sense 😃. I always saw your likes on DK so am so happy you shared your thoughts today! I am really humbled you like my work and especially DK- that is of course more than dear to me 😳.

This as you see is very different and am glad it seems of interest. Ah yes, coming chapters will give you answers but essentially, yes, Sanskaar thinks Swara is Ragini. You will see why he does and yes he has met her before but even then didn't really know who she was 😉. Re Laksh- ah yes, something has befallen him and this is all connected to RagLak but perhaps not in the way you may expect 😉. I will clarify as we go on, I promise 😆. Very welcome for the PMs, you guys keep me going! I hope to hear more from you if you get time and have the inclination to 😳.

See you hopefully soon after Chapter 1!

Love and thanks,

Shru x

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: RAONE8
hey shru,
intriguing prologue
I am so xcited to read ur story once again
well this one is looking very interesting ...cnt wait to read more
cont asap

n thnks fr d pm

Hello my dear! How are you? Thanks for reading and am pleased you found the Prologue intriguing 😳. I hope you will like the story! It's so nice to see the regulars from the time of DK 😳

Love,

Shru x

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ZAINAB

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

This is an absolutely amazing story-line

... Just read the prologue and I think I will be addicted to this story ...just like I am to all your stories

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

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Oh my God!!! I never thought my wish would come true so soon!!!

Love

Sree

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Nalini Ansh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Dear shruthi

🤗

Hope you are doing great! I have been so irregular here. And will probably continue to be due to many commitments on every ground.

Congratulations on the new start.

😊

It would be as always intriguing to read, I'm sure. I have just vaguely been through the prologue. Ragini and Sanskar have as usual set the wheel in motion in their own ways. But from where I see, there ahead, is a very twisted path for the four of them. In that case Would be an enticing and exciting journey all the way till the end.

I hope and will try to be as frequent as I can on this thread. But if I can't my apologies before hand.

Sorry for the short reply. I'm already on the move.

Cheers

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Nupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Nupur 🤗

I caught this just before I myself hit my bed as I had a mega early start tomorrow and it's late here 😊. You made my night with this comment and you made perfect sense 😃. I always saw your likes on DK so am so happy you shared your thoughts today! I am really humbled you like my work and especially DK- that is of course more than dear to me 😳.

This as you see is very different and am glad it seems of interest. Ah yes, coming chapters will give you answers but essentially, yes, Sanskaar thinks Swara is Ragini. You will see why he does and yes he has met her before but even then didn't really know who she was 😉. Re Laksh- ah yes, something has befallen him and this is all connected to RagLak but perhaps not in the way you may expect 😉. I will clarify as we go on, I promise 😆. Very welcome for the PMs, you guys keep me going! I hope to hear more from you if you get time and have the inclination to 😳.

See you hopefully soon after Chapter 1!

Love and thanks,
Shru x

Thanks again for your lovely words & yes I will share my thoughts more often Inshallah! And ofcourse after chapter 1 hopefully!

I'm sure you must saw my likes 😆

Not just in DK or your other works bt in your posts & comments in other peoples posts as I like your description about particular things!

Hopefully we will talk more as I'm trying to move from my Silent Reader/Stalker mode!

Lots of love & hugs <3

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Shruuu love...

You are back...missed u alot...but i know ur busy n needed that break after giving us your master piece DARK KNIGHT...

Coming to ur latest FF...ENTANGLED INTERLUDES...well the name itself is quite promising..read the synopsis n prologue..it was intriguing..i love suspense n thriller genre...this one would be another outstanding work of ur...InshaAllah...

Sansku he was our knight in Dk..have to think new name for him here now...soon..im soo stuck in DK still...soo sansku looks in revenge mood..wondering what u have decided to shock us..what misunderstanding / game is played???by whom?? N soo manny lifes entangled in it??? Ragini is evil here too or not??(hoping not)...soo many question..ahhh excited for this ff...

Will wait for chapter 1 eagerly...

Love u muahhh

Loads of love

Talia

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

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Dear Shru,

Welcome back and what an entry.

Firstly, I am thoroughly confused as to why you should feel even a shred of trepidation.

The synopsis itself is enough to hook and draw us in. Corporate power play (the most violent battles are fought in board rooms) always fascinates me.

The prologue had the just the right amount of intriguing confusions - Sanskaar Maheshwari in his revenge mood, this time against Swara whom he thinks is Ragini and who had somehow "harmed" Lakshya. The photographs are of Lakshya and Swara though, but Swara is aware of a relationship between Lakshya and Ragini.

It is refreshing to see Sanskaar pitted against an outsider for a change, though she is not what he thinks nor is it going to be the war he wants. BTW I hope in this story, Ragini and Swara do not turn against each other.

And yes, how can I forget the cosmic connection, the moment Sanskaar makes his vow, Swara feels a shiver down her spine - literal goosebumps.

I am all game for what you promise to be an exhilerating ride and I promise, no temper tantrums (I will try my best, but...well, it the the thought that counts😉).

Love,

Nyna

PS: I am feeling quite miserable about the delay in commenting, but I promise to be more prompt.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Res for prologue 😊 Please bear with some delay Shru...as I am caught in an absolute avalanche of commitments. 😕

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Shru 🤗

I am really fighting against time on a number of commitments. But couldn't resist un res'ing here, coz I didn't want to delay my response.🤗

A very intriguing start indeed. I just love a formidable, resolute Sanskaar Maheshwari...employing his sheer brilliance and guile to chilling effect. 😊 The hero who has shades of an anti hero in him, but its all down to the fact that his character has such depth, such power, such resilience. Tamper with this man, and you would wish you hadn't ever thought about committing that folly. 😉 Oooh, me likes. 😳 😉

From what I could deduce from the well paced and thrilling prologue, Sanskaar had been completely enchanted and entranced by Swara---who for some reason (perhaps instigated by her complete waste of a paternal family, the Gadodias), called herself Ragini? Now she seems to be in tears of utter frustration and grief, wanting to speak to Ragini, but that dragon of a Dadi won't let her.

She seems to have also met with Lakshya somewhere---gone to a coffee shop with him? Sanskaar has got surveillance photos of those interactions, it appears. But Swara was meeting Lakshya on behalf/ for Ragini? Because she tells Dadi, that she absolutely needs to speak to Ragini; Ragini would want to know what had happened with Lakshya? 😊 Interesting...Interesting...😉

And where is Lakshya, I wonder? Sanskaar was furious and angry with himself, almost cursing himself for feeling that pull towards Swara, thinking that she had taken him in, made a fool of him. 😕 He seems to think Swara had something to do with his cousin's disappearance? Wonder if Lakshya is just a hostage in this, or does he have some sinister/ not so above board plans of his own? Against Sanskaar perhaps? 😊

Thrilling, thrilling----the possibilities! The soul connect between SwaSan was well done---Sanskaar growling out her name bitterly (though he said 'Ragini'--Swara's alias, not 'Swara')---but still, Swara felt a shudder through her frame, thinking she could hear someone focusing so intently, so furiously on thoughts of her. 👏 😳

Nicely done, waiting for Chapter 1.

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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