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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

<font size="2">Hey Harshu (can I call you that)?😳

Res for now. I read it quickly through, and really liked it. Do give me some time for Un Res as I am mired in a lot of commitments. Will come back soonest I can. 🤗</font><font size="2">🤗

Hope you are doing well.

Loads of Love,

---Viji
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Viji dearest 😳
Yes of course, you can call me anything 😊

Glad you liked it.
Do take your time dear...absolutely as much as you need .
I will wait...I do know how busy everyone in their life is...

Yeah kind of ...
Have been facing some health issues from past few days plus college has started so struggling in between them leaves me terribly tired..

This is the reason I have been refrained from commenting over your work...
Will do asap...


Hope everything is fine with you.

Love
- Harshada

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Harshada,

I am sorry I am late with this and thanks for the PM! So glad you have ventured into writing for SwaSan and what a nice star with this super cute OS! Am typing from phone between work commitments but didn't want to delay commenting so this isn't very long. I really liked the dynamics between a feisty Swara and a super cocky but very compellingly attractive Sanskaar. Sparks really flew when they finally met face to face after that delicious build up with "cherry" and other sweet flavours 😉. I loved the analogy of Sanskaar being namkeen and Swara mithai too 😆. And Sanskaar! Ahaha! How confident was he?! Just how I like it 😉. My fave was his total seeing through the attempt to make him jealous and Laksh as Swara's sort of brother was epic 😆. I really enjoyed reading their back story too which so nicely tied it all together. All in all a very enjoyable read:)

Love
Shru X
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Alvapriya




Viji dearest 😳
Yes of course, you can call me anything 😊

Glad you liked it.
Do take your time dear...absolutely as much as you need .
I will wait...I do know how busy everyone in their life is...

Yeah kind of ...
Have been facing some health issues from past few days plus college has started so struggling in between them leaves me terribly tired..

This is the reason I have been refrained from commenting over your work...
Will do asap...


Hope everything is fine with you.

Love
- Harshada


I'm doing OK dear. Please take care of your health. Concerned to hear you've not been keeping well, hope you make a full recovery soon. And good luck with your college studies as well. 🤗 🤗

Will be back soonest with my comment on your OS. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum


I'm doing OK dear. Please take care of your health. Concerned to hear you've not been keeping well, hope you make a full recovery soon. And good luck with your college studies as well. 🤗 🤗

Will be back soonest with my comment on your OS. 🤗

Lots of Love

Viji



Good to hear you are doing well Viji dear😊

Thank you so much for your good wishes for my health and for college studies dear.

Hope to get out soon of this irritating sickness😕

As I said earlier also Do take your time.

Will be patiently waiting😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#15

Hi Harshada

wow..this is such a sweet OS and namkeen too ..😉

and title goes aptly with plot ..very known stranger ..lovely piece👏 .👏.it was such cute one too

keep writing more👏

lucky
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi,😊
Harshada, ri8??😳
Awesome OS dear.👏 Superb!!👍🏼 Totally different.😉 What a way to propose! So innovative.😆😳 Namkeen and Mithai.😳 So cute.😳 And obviously Cherry.😛 Really loved this OS so much!!!!❤️
Thanks for the pm dear.😃
With love,
Aheli.



Hey dear Aheli😊
Yes its Harshada here.

Thank you so much dear.

Namkeen , Mithai and Cherry 😆 😳

Glad you liked the OS and way of proposal too.

Love
- Harshada
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Dear Harshada,

I am sorry I am late with this and thanks for the PM! So glad you have ventured into writing for SwaSan and what a nice star with this super cute OS! Am typing from phone between work commitments but didn't want to delay commenting so this isn't very long. I really liked the dynamics between a feisty Swara and a super cocky but very compellingly attractive Sanskaar. Sparks really flew when they finally met face to face after that delicious build up with "cherry" and other sweet flavours 😉. I loved the analogy of Sanskaar being namkeen and Swara mithai too 😆. And Sanskaar! Ahaha! How confident was he?! Just how I like it 😉. My fave was his total seeing through the attempt to make him jealous and Laksh as Swara's sort of brother was epic 😆. I really enjoyed reading their back story too which so nicely tied it all together. All in all a very enjoyable read:)

Love
Shru X



Dearest Shruti 🤗
It feels awesome to see your feedback on my first work here.

Please do not say sorry 😊
I know you must be very busy managing both your family and work together but still you came to read and to leave your precious feedback 😳 ...really means a lot to me🤗

Recently discovered my liking towards writing😆

Thank you so much.
Glad you liked this shot dear.

Its perfectly fine...your short comment is also a very detailed and long one for me.

Feisty swara and our Sanskar ❤️

Their meet was something I didnt plan about...my fingers just typed their meet without my brain's commands😆 and same goes for Namkeen and Mithai.

showing Laksh as Swara's sort of brother 😉 😆 ... was a good idea I guess 😛


Thanks a lot...glad it was a enjoyable read for you.

I have been not really well from past few days but your comment really uplifted me. 🤗 and made my weeks😳
Trust me, I have re-read and will do I dont know how many times.


Love
- Harshada


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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: lucky.m


Hi Harshada

wow..this is such a sweet OS and namkeen too ..😉

and title goes aptly with plot ..very known stranger ..lovely piece👏 .👏.it was such cute one too

keep writing more👏

lucky



Thank you so much dear Lucky 😳

Glad to know you liked this sweet and namkeen os😆

Title...I was very confused about it but finally ended up giving that.

Hopefully will write more.

Thanks for reading and appreciating.

Stay blessed

- Harshada



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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Wooow Amazing I love it

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