Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Dear Harshada,
I am sorry I am late with this and thanks for the PM! So glad you have ventured into writing for SwaSan and what a nice star with this super cute OS! Am typing from phone between work commitments but didn't want to delay commenting so this isn't very long. I really liked the dynamics between a feisty Swara and a super cocky but very compellingly attractive Sanskaar. Sparks really flew when they finally met face to face after that delicious build up with "cherry" and other sweet flavours 😉. I loved the analogy of Sanskaar being namkeen and Swara mithai too 😆. And Sanskaar! Ahaha! How confident was he?! Just how I like it 😉. My fave was his total seeing through the attempt to make him jealous and Laksh as Swara's sort of brother was epic 😆. I really enjoyed reading their back story too which so nicely tied it all together. All in all a very enjoyable read:)
Love
Shru X
Dearest Shruti 🤗
It feels awesome to see your feedback on my first work here.
Please do not say sorry 😊
I know you must be very busy managing both your family and work together but still you came to read and to leave your precious feedback 😳 ...really means a lot to me🤗
Recently discovered my liking towards writing😆
Thank you so much.
Glad you liked this shot dear.
Its perfectly fine...your short comment is also a very detailed and long one for me.
Feisty swara and our Sanskar ❤️
Their meet was something I didnt plan about...my fingers just typed their meet without my brain's commands😆 and same goes for Namkeen and Mithai.
showing Laksh as Swara's sort of brother 😉 😆 ... was a good idea I guess 😛
Thanks a lot...glad it was a enjoyable read for you.
I have been not really well from past few days but your comment really uplifted me. 🤗 and made my weeks😳
Trust me, I have re-read and will do I dont know how many times.
Love
- Harshada