SWASAN OS - VERY KNOWN STRANGER - Page 3

Originally posted by: san45

Wooow Amazing I love it

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Hey Harshu (can I call you that)? 😳

Res for now. I read it quickly through, and really liked it. Do give me some time for Un Res as I am mired in a lot of commitments. Will come back soonest I can. 🤗🤗

Hope you are doing well.

Loads of Love,

---Viji

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Un res 😊

Harshu, this was so cute yaar. 😳 Like I mentioned to you in my comment on your 2nd OS, I like childhood sweetheart stories, and this one was right up that alley. 😊

Viji dearest🤗 I love you a lot ❤️

Thank you so very much😳

Yup...love and marriage plans in childhood...how romantic

That mental image of a 5 year old Swara asking a 6 year old Sanskaar how he would propose to her...made me smile so much! Such innocence, such pure affection.

😆 I was actually laughing while writing that thing...

I mean seriously, two little kids were planning about their proposal in a mere age of 5 and 6 ☺️

The nicknames "Namkeen" and "Mithai" were super fun, and very apt too. 😆 Loved the way that bond forged in childhood held firm and true, and both Swara and Sanskaar were waiting for the other, in a sense.

Glad you liked the nicknames dear...they were not planned but it just went with the flow of the story...and I was very much unsure about that...but relieved hearing that you liked them.

They had given their hearts to each other in the childhood and their bond became strong with passing time without even being in contact, I think thats true love is all about.

That part of Lakshya doing a complete melodramatic overacting of the sham proposal, Swara's plans to make her mystery "stalker" jealous, was just 😆🤣 And Swara calling him Bhai, was even better. 😉 They make a wonderful Bro--Sis pair. 😆😉

Swara's immature plan to make her stalker jealous and that too by proposing her self from her so called brother🤣🤪

I was just hoping, Swalak fans dont come hitting me for showing them in BRO- SIS relation😆

Sanskaar's proposal, following the plan he had outlined as a 6 year old, to the 5 year old Swara, was so cute. 😳 Chocolate wrapper ring...and gift of namkeen and mithai 😉. And he wants to name their daughter Strawberry 😆 Proposal abhi abhi kiya, and already shuru kar diya planning their family. 😆😳

Proposals are always my favourite part in any story.

Chocolate wrapper ring and gifts of Namkin and mithai...wanted to show something different than normal proposals...glad it came out in a nice way.

No comments on Strawberry...sanskar and his extra early family planning☺️

Nicely done, Harshu.

Thank you so much dear Viji

Lots of Love

Viji

Lots and Lots of Love

- Harshada

Originally posted by: SanaHolic

its such a cute story starting frm childhood itself...
luved it...
ur first attempt is vry gud...
do write more and pm me...