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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Harshita... such a lovely update... both needed each other... I'm liking Sanskaar Maheswari... he loves her he wants her to be happy which he can't afford... swara too her unconditional love for him... her words are peak... lovely... so they became friends...

With love..

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
this was the best chapter of story till now... 😊 so painful 😭 but equally beautiful 😳 finally their love is conquering all his insecurities... can't wait for next chapter. 😳
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Unresed page 14... sorry for inconvenience... dear.. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update harshitha..
So their friendship has begun. 😳
Song sequence was beautiful.
Update the nxt part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Sanskar's past memories where painful.that incidents change his life.
But i think the wound of his heart started to healing...
They became friends...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update
finally swasan become frnds ... hope so sanskar understand swara love
loved it
cont soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi Harshu,😊
Nice prologue and cs.😊 Read all the parts together.😳 So emotional and heart wrenching story.😭 But so awesome and intriguing too.😉 Sanskar really had an painful past.😭 Hate both Kavita and Kavya.😡😡 But I think no one fully knows about his past, that's why treats him like that. No one tried to understand his feelings.😭 But with the entry of Swara in his life, his life changed for betterment.😉 Its only Swara who understands and cares for him, in spite of all the insults, slaps hurled at her by him.😭😳 And now that Swara knows about his past, and although both loves each other, but can't express until and unless he is healed by her, they decided to be friends at first.😃😃 Even felt bad for Swara.😭 Her Dadi is very bad.😡 But her Dida was good and caring towards her and gave her her mother's surname. And even loved her so much.😃 Even her Dada and Ragini loves her so much.😃 And even all the MM members care for her.😳 Now I just hope that Swara will be able to pull Sanskar out of his painful and broken past and make him move on from his past to a normal life so that he gets all the happiness that he deserves.😳 And they both will confess their unconditional love for each other soon and lead a happy marriage life.😳😃
Update soon dear.😳 And thanks for all the pms.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Harshita..
Itwas soo painfull..i cried alot for sansku pain..he gave soo much pain n hurted swara alot..felt bad..but he himself suffered alot...those witches kavya n kavita..i hate them...

Now sansku revealed his past n swara understood his pain...they become friends now..it was cute scene..waiting for next..

Thanks for pm..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Part-6

Part-6


Hi all thanks for reading and replying . Sorry I couldn't reply to any of ur comments. I am having classes from mrng 5 to evening 4 which gets quite heptic n then I get busy with my homework etc. Sorry for that too.. well here is the 6th part.. n yes remember community n replies are free of cost on IF so ache se without kanjoosi give ur opinions on this update too...



Swasan were sleeping all cuddled up. But due to the cold weather they were shivering n clutched each other close to themselves..


The Strom outside got worse .. it started raining cats and dogs.. the MF woke up due to this they all were worried about swara..


In the hall -

Su- jiji I am so worried where is swara..

R- laksh Ji pls let's search her..

L- see that beast he Is sleeping peacefully n god knows where is swara ...

RP - let me show him how to miss behave with a girl today I won't leave him..


MF all angry swung the door of their room open..


Sanskaar who while subconsciously heard rp's voice clutched swara closer.. n his lips started shivering...


RP followed by sujata n then all others entered the room and were shocked to see the scene in front of them...


Su- je swara aur.sanskaar...

L- chachi let's go..


Su- hmm


R-but laksh look at them ask them to shift on the bed.. they are shivering due to cold weather..

L-hmm...

Su- wait I will go...


She entered n woke them up asking them to sleep on the bed...

They in half sleepy condition shifted to the bed and slept again..

Sujata went away asap to avoid any more embarrassment...

Swasan slept again cuddled up...




Next mrng-

Swara woke up n tried moving away...

Sa- swara

Sw- kya sanskaar ..

Sa- GM...

SW- GM

Sa- what r u doing buddy ..

Sw- apna hath hatao sanskaar
Sa- swara Lego lets sleep
She again dosed off in his embrace.

After some hrs-.
Sa- swara.
SW- hmm
Sa- can I ask a question

She nodded in a yes n then looked at him.


Sa-y was ur dadi angry at you.. that day she pushed u out n y did she call u that.. panuti n all..


SW-she dose that since I was young .. she thinks due my birth my parents died ..


Sa-but y..


Sw- idk ..


Sanskaar pecked her forehead.


SW- sanskaar ek question puchoon..


Sa-hmm..


SW-u had 2 girls earlier in ur life na...


Sa-yes..

SW-so did u ... u...

Sa-u.. kya swara...

Sw-did u kissed or spent a night with them or something...

Sa-no worries swara .. kavita n kavya were fooling me.. n neither I am a person who is lustful or wants girls around... I never touched any one of them.. no kisses nothing... also they weren't mine they loved some one else so actually they too avoided my closeness...

Her lips curled in a smile she felt happy n relaxed.

He too smiled seeing her...


All the hall.. were tensed about swara..

Ragini was weeping to some extent...

R-laksh humari behen.. was she fine or did sanskaar do something to her...y was she in his embrace...

L-calm down ragini.. if that beast had done anything to her we won't leave him...

Su-yes ragini don't worry I will punish him my self... how can he be so wild.. devil..




Swasan woke up n then swara collected all his alcohol bottles n threw them out.. his head was badly spinning he had drunk more than ever last night...


Sa-chalein..

SW-haan Sanskaar par bmr u ok..

Sa-yes just slight headache...but u come 1st we have to join all others for the pooja...

Sw-challo ..

She took the vermilion n mangalsutra with her..


Swasan came late the pooja was almost over just the last phases of arti.. she went close to the idol n kept her vermilion n mangalsutra n she stood back there with him..

She whispered..

Sw-sanskaar.. see the vermilion n mangalsutra is waiting.. the day u want to complete this relationship u can do so...

Sa-Thanks swara for understanding me..

All were standing with closed eyes.. she slightly moved close to him n pecked his lips..

After the pooja-
His head again spun n she supported him.
Sw- sanskaar r u k
Sa- yes
But he couldn't stand he stood with her support..
The mf turned n rushed to her..they pushed him aside .. now he stood with the support of the pillar sujata made swara sit n questionef her..
Su- r u k.. did this wild drunkard did something wrong
Sw- no mom..
R- swara come no need to be with this man.
L- yes swara leave this beast here n don't be afraid.. we r here if he had done anything wrong Then we promise we won't leave him
Hearing all this tears escaped his eyes n he slipped down the pillar .. this was the combined effect of last night alcohol over dose n their harsh words
Su- yes swara don't be afraid
SW- kuch nahi hua h unhe mom .. laksh Ji ragini I am fine.. actually galat toh..

Sanskaar sensed that she was going to reveal his Past..
Sa- swara I need ur Help
Sw- I know but..
Sa- pls swara fast
SW- hmm

In the dining area -
All were having their bf n he rested his head on the table swara made him drink lemon juice etc to lighten the head ache

He again rested his head on the table..

RP- Mr devil if u feel sleepy then go to ur room..
Sa- sure dad n he woke up
Rp dropped his spoon n. Sujata's food stick in her wind pipe
.she coughed .. all looked at him with wide eyes ..
His head was spinning she was about to go n help him when sujata stopped her..
Su- let that wild drunkard be there swara leave him he deserves this..
Sw- but mom
Sa- swara be there with her I am going..
Sw- but
Sa- shh.. I can go by myself u don't worry
N he Left teary eyed.. when the mf babled about him..
SW- ( monologue)- Sanskaar I promise u won't cry more ever...



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