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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Harshita🤗🤗
Read the parts in one go... story is so beautiful👏👏👏. hope sanskar will able to trust again. Poor guy😭😭😭 suffered alot . Hate cavity and kavya and mr. wood for this. And ram is truly dictator.
lets see further happening. excited to read.

Loads of love
kiara


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part-5


Hi all I am back with another part of this story. Thanks for replying on the previous part. Hope you like the update and pls do reply on this update as well.. I have to go through tons of scoldings for before each update so pls no kanjusi in replying.. waiting for your views on this update egar to read them.. thanks for reading in advance.



Sanskaar's hand began to tremble when the incidents were reminded..

Sw- sanskaar r u ok..

Sa- hmm...

SW- phir kya hua...

Sanskaar laughed a little..

Sa- then unfortunately sanskaar Maheshwari ki body kinda Bach gayi.. sansen toh chalti hnmeri swara aaj bhi par dhadkan nahi sunayi deti.. dil tut nahi.. khatam sa ho gaya..

Pata h jab tum pedal hui thi Na tab 100% bhagwan se pange liye honge.. Jo mein Mila tumhe..

Sw-nahi sanskaar


Sa-no swara u know what our company wasn't an MNC yet but then when I was back to normal in 6 months.. tab my family again started their marriage Jaap . I expanded the business overseas and hardly returned here back to India or my home.. I didn't even attend the wedding of my younger brother and best friend laksh..

SW- did anyone know about all this..

Sa- nope I never disclosed about kavita.. n also my convo with kavya to anyone..



Swara was teary eyed now.. she sat next him and hugged him tight... after all he was the only person she loved and the amount of pain he was going through was immense.. he too responded back..


Sa-swara u know what.. I love you.. n I love you so much.. but I don't want u to be my wife.. u know y.. because i dont want to spoil ur life.. U r a bright young girl swara. Pls go away from me I don't deserve u n neither u deserve someone as worst as me..


SW-no sanskaar..


Sa-wait a sec...

He stood up and packed her bag.. she all shocked stood there but then he didn't pack all the sarees he kept some as her memory..


Sanskaar - swara I beg u go away.. don't spoil ur life with me..

SW-par sanskaar.


Sa- no swara..


N he pulled her along with him..all were worried for swara in the hall
..
Su-sanskaar chod chori ko..
Sa-no mom ..
RP- sanskaar.. leave her
Sa-beat me again but not today...

He took her to the door
Sa-swara i beg u .. I just want to say ki u go away from me..I am bad .. I am a beast an animal.. I don't deserve u nor u deserve me.. u deserve someone better.. u go where u can find love.. u can find happiness and satisfaction... pls..
Sw- sanskaar...
Sa-pls swara go away n don't spoil ur life...
Sw-but...
Before she could complete he closed the door on her face..
Sw- sanskaar.. pls open the door.. sanskaar...
N she bagged the door..
Sa-No swara go away...
Su-sanskaar are u mad or have u lost ur mind...
Sa-no mom I M doing the right thing.. she deserves happiness n not the pains n sorrows she is getting with me.. n no one will open the door.. u all have spoilt her life by this marriage but no.. not any more.. got it..
Saying this his throat chocked .. he slipped next to door n started drinking again..
Swara was now tired of banging the door her hands turned red n she slipped on the other side of the door silently weeping and crying.. while he sat on the other side all tears.. he was continuously drinking alcohol...

Su-this boy is mad.. swara r u ok..laksh u Take her in from the back door... sanskaar get up n get lost .. u r a drunkard.. I don't know where I lost my sanskaar...

All left in disgust n decided to bring swara in.. he was too drunk to get up still he tried his best..

There outside -
Su-swara.. come.in
R-haan swara come in..
SW-no ragini.. u all go .. if I have ever truly loved him then he will take me in for sure.. n I will not enter inside until sanskaar comes to take me..
Su-are u also mad like him.. he is all drunk.. come inside its getting dark..
SW-no mom u all go I ain't coming..
They had an argument but swara denied to enter the mansion.. sanskaar went to his room with fumbling steps.. he reached there n fell on the bed..
He almost slept when he heard her voice.

Yaara...

It was her voice that sent shivers down his spine..


Manzilein ruswa hain
Khoya hai raasta
Aaye le jaaye
Itni si ilteja
Ye meri zamaanat hai
Tu meri amaanat hai aa...

She sang further n requested him that she wanted him to let her be with him.. because he was hers ..

Mujhko iraade de
Kasamein de, waade de
Meri duaaon ke ishaaron ko sahaare de
Dil ko thikaane de naye bahaane de
Khabon ki barishon ko mausam ke paimane de
Apne karam ki kar adaayein
Kar de idhar bhi tu nigaahein

She wanted to be his.. she wanted to promise him to be there from him..her heart belonged to him..

N she again requested him to come down atleast meet her once..

Sun raha hai naa tu
Ro rahi hun main
Sun raha hai naa tu
Kyun ro rahi hun main

She sang further n he made a drink and gulped it.. he then went down ...

Yaara...

She again called him n yes he was here ...


Sa- y swara.. y r u doing this . . Y r u making things difficult for me.. just go away got it..

SW- but sanskaar..

He turned n started to leave she ran behind but her foot slip. He sensed it .. he stopped but then again moved back to his room..

She was all heart broken n now she just looked at him...

He went inside drank almost half of a bottle n then dozed off...


Mid night -

He woke up due to the thunderstorms..

All the effect of alcohol flew away when his mind wandered where was she .

He immediately ran out side.

He saw her she was sitting in garden all drenched like a lifeless body..

Sa- swara...

He ran to her .. her lips curled into a smile.. he lifted her up in his arms n took her inside..

In his room -

Swara went inside the washroom and changed .. when she returned back -

Sa- y didn't u go away


SW- simple Sanskaar u said go to a place where I find love happiness and satisfaction...l Iove u .. n I can't be happy when u r here so broken.. n when I can't be happy i can't be satisfied..

Sanskaar didn't not speak a word... she sat next to him on the floor... she was shivering in cold.. he noticed it n made a drink for her.. Sanskaar passed it to her..


Sw- what is this.

Sa- u will feel good..

Sw- no I don't want..

Sa- peelo it's not a sin n yes u r taking it as a medicine...

Sw- but it smells bad

Sa- it's better than the kava mom prepares..

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Oh she hated drinking kava.. n this was just a 1/4 glass hence she drunk it...

She made a bad face .. n gestured as if vomiting..he rubbed her back .. she actually felt better and warm.


Sa- how was it ..

Sw- bahut gandi

He laughed..

Her gaze fell on his wound.. his hand was shaking due to pain.. he still did not bandaged it.. she took his hand in hers...

Sw ( removing the glasses stuck in his wound)-u know sanskaar.. when u share ur pain .. it hurts less..

N she banged his hand ..

SW- I know u r not in a condition to trust but I still want some thing ki u say u love me but u r scared.. but can't we be friends..

Sa- I am an animal swara..I tried to force u n u r still thinking about me..

SW- because I love you blindly madly and badly..

Sa- y..

SW- pyaar ki koi wajah nahi hoti sanskaar..

Sanskaar was looking at her teary eyed..

Sw- I don't want you to accept me as ur wife n o will wear this vermilion n mangalsutra the day u will make me wear n Not before that..

Sa- aur tab tak.

SW- we will be friends.. is it possible

Sa- yes .

Sw- thanks sanskaar.


Sa- par agar mein kabhi iss riste ko nahi apna payatoh .


SW- agar Puri life bhi wait karma pada toh i will..

Sa- y r u wasting your time on me.

Sw,- my life my wish ..

He smiled but then took her in a bone crushing hug..


Sa- I am sorry swara

SW-shh no need to be sanskaar..

He cried his heart out

Sa- sorry swara n thanks for being there..

SW- pya aur dosti mein no sorry no thank you

They soon dozed off in each other's embrace..

He after some time wrapped both off them in a blanket






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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
Harshita dear🤗
Sanskar condition is so heart wrenching😭😭😭. THE song portion was sooo beautiful😃. whole part was awesome and then some more. I like swara the way she is tackling sanskar.👏
Excited to read futher and know about their JOURNEY. please update fast.

LOVE
KIARA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Felt sad for sanskar 😭 😭
How can kavita and kavya do this 😡 😡
Hope now swara will change sanskar. ... 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Wonderful update hope Swara get successed to win back his trust & they live happily
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Wow lovely update and sport to hear u u got shouted at...loved the whole update...
Hope this friendship helps heal his heart soon...

Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Awesome update. Loved it very much. Now waiting for the next part😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Superb update 👏
Finally the real love story going to start soon
Oh god i am loving this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
awesome update..
sanskar 's past were really heart breaking...
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
chalo atleast dosti to suru hui
awesome update
i feel bad for them bt now i am happy for them

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