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-Claptrap-

@-Claptrap-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

O God!!! I think there is something fishy between Sanskaar and Ragini.. Maybe it's related to Laksh.😕

Swara's word about her absence 😕 Why Annapurna doesn't like Swara.?

So many questions but I have a doubt on Ragini. 😳

But even if Swara has something to do with this suspense then too it'll be fun.. Whoever it may be.. SwaRagini are too dangerous to deal with. 😆

That Swasan moment was too cute and emotional 😳

How do you manage to write with so much suspense 😆

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Neethu Jose

@AngelicNee

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Soumi... waiting for 2B..
Poor laksh.. he was never successful in getting romantic to Ragini??
There is something fishy about Ragini's behaviour...
Swasan scene was so cute. Poor swara.. feeling bad for her..
Update sooon plss 😊

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Soundharya

@Feltonate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Soumi ! It is a great concept again from you

I have been following this story from the start ...

Damn interesting man ... Very eager to know the future parts

Ragya and SwaSan moments were awesome ...

Sanskaar's childishness and his love for Swara Awww ...

Continue soon ... I am still guessing the story ..

Update soonish ...

Love

Soundharya ..

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radha 🦚

@wohradhahai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Amazing soumi!!!
Just read the first part and CS...
Will read the second part tomorrow! Tomorrow is my Phygo test😭
Have to prepare for that..I really love your story..
sanskar-Ragini share a bro-sis relation 😲..soumi ,u r a player haan😆...
Mujhe Chalega until RagLak r together...
I love Sanskar as a character..but seriously hate him cuz he helped Laksh come out of the accuse..
Laksh..Doob mar Laksh 😡
Mera toh dil toot gya..🥺Ragini ne us'se pyaar kiya😭
Swara..Awww..so it will be a baby boy or a girl? 😳
Ragini..She's in danger, right? 🥱..I hope Laksh will not let her happen anything..
I'm getting restless to read the 2Nd part but majboori hai..😭

Love u bohot saara..
Neha❤️

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Akshita

@CholeKulche

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

This was amzing. Totally

SwaSan were too cute.

And RagLaK toh mashallah.😳

Something is fishy about Ragini 😕

And Anupurna to typical MIL. God knows what happened that she is treating Swara like this

Update Soon

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Pls update soon

Wese part was really awesome

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1
Pls update soon
Wese part was really awesome

first Unres ur previous res😆

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elsanna

@elsanna

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Wow soumi di...

Loved the update

Swasan cute convo...

Something is fishy about ragini

Raglak romance😳

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sumeetadeb

@sumeetadeb

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Lovely update.relation between swara aur ap is not good.i like that.it gives new shade to story

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DalenaGilvatore

@DalenaGilvatore

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Awesome update👍🏼

Poor Shyam😆 Entered both the rooms at wrong time😆 I think he has to jhukao his nazreain all the time coz bary bhayya n choty bhayya to baz nahe anay ke 😆Bechara kahan phas gaya 😆

Ragini ki Harkaten or Swara ki background story dono garbad lag rahi hain 😆

Eagerly waiting for the next part... Thanks for the PM🤗