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Akshita

@CholeKulche

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Omg this truely amazing.

Loved both scenes of Swasan and Raglak.

Who is this Revange Seeker.

Hope you update soon.😃

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elsanna

@elsanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Sorry di for late comment was really busy.
Read first part it was awesome... nd i guess all my guesses are already trashed in gutter🤣 as both the couples r married...
Waiting for nxt part eagerly...

Tanishka

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Sumi Roy

@LoveSonu2408

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Part1 strting z so beautiful.
Swasan moment gv a warm feeling.
Ragini feels danger...hmm!
I th8 swara or ragini or swaragini teach a lesson 2sanlak,bt its different.
Jodio eto taratari bojha jache na r jabeo na j who z tht person!
Very well written.

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: soumi93

May be its Swara may be its shomi may be its Ragini may be its Sanskar may be its Laksh
May be 🤣🤣🤣

u r laughing at us by keeping us suspense itna toh kitna revenge seeker hai plz *cute puppy face *😳

update plz

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

soumi eta ke jhuliye dis na plz gustakh dil r tu hi re moto plz updat kar na

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

xm chilo boss obviously update karbo.ogulo o krbo...dara aj finally ses holo xm.

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aamias

@aamias

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: soumi93
xm chilo boss obviously update karbo.ogulo o krbo...dara aj finally ses holo xm.

okay update karis ebar plzzz waiting eagerly for it 😳

waiting

love u

Edited by aamias - 9 years ago

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mix_of_emotions

@mix_of_emotions

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Finally got to read. Very interesting . From prologue I thought swaragini r Ppl who gonna take revenge. But no here smone will take revenge from sanlak thru them may be. Loving it .thanks for pm. Continue soon Soumi 😳

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sia08

@sia08

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

it is wonderful beginning

does swara in anyway related to that boy who died

anyway i hope laksh get punished for his crime here

i am strictly against ragging

pls update soon

p.s.- sorry for late reading really busy these days

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DalenaGilvatore

@DalenaGilvatore

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Sorry I am late... But what an awesome start... Just Wow... I think Swara is the Revenge seeker...Cuz both Lucky nd Ragz were already in a relationship at that time...No??? Or may be its Ragini and she was doing natak all this while... to take revenge from both the brothers ... or or Its BOTH Swara n Ragini Duh Its so confusing...😕Please update soon warna soch soch kr Pagla jaengy hum sab😆

And thanks for the PM🤗

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