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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Part 1:

Now while almost all the FF's make me go "yes this is how it should happen in the show!" this one is something I do not want happening in the show at all😆 Reason: I do not trust Swara. She will spout some nonsensical shit like "haalat se lad sakti hoon, kismat se nahi" & maybe get back Sanskaar's louuu to him because SHE thinks that is what he would want now that he has forgotten her😆 I want Sanskaar in firm control of all his senses bas!

OK now coming to the OS, the more the show progresses the more I depend on FFs to give me my daily dose of sensible SwaSan. It is such a delight really to see all medical, legal, humane principals working & in place Patients in hospital with real doctors & nurses, no pervert helpers, old uncles behaving their age...aah!😳

And then the patient himself! A writer who understands that memory & personality are two different things😆 He may not remember much but that wont change who he is. He will still be the same man...and oh my what a man!

Waiting for the next update Viji 🤗

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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...Penknife...

@...Penknife...

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Oh my.

Viji this chapter was superb. ❤️

I always wanted to see this kind of a story, where Sanskar would lose his memory and think of Swara as the 'khooni'.

I don't know but I seriously think he'd at least be willing to listen to someone owing to the fact that he has, evidently underwent a memory loss. Thank you so much for writing this.

I love how you gave emphasis on Sanskars determination to get back to that someone. The cosmic connection is rather pleasing to read.

Sanskar knows that if hers is the only face he remembers when he can't even remember his own name there has to be a connection.

Him being quite logical and trying to find a reason behind why he was shot - if he was shot that is- him trying desperately to remember and most of all his need to remember everything is amazing.

Update soon haan. 🤗

Love

Nandini

Edited by ...Penknife... - 9 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

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finally read it..
viji...🤗 for this extraordinary concept, all of us here have 1000s of theories on swara falling off cliff nd everything..but I don't think many had that thought that what will happen if roles are reversed..so for that..cheers girl..
coming to the update, even being unconscious nd having no memory, Sanskar maheshwari is Sanskar maheshwari,strong willed, determined...human..
nd dear God he remembers swara shooting him? that's bad...but in the end he realized what his family did to him...does it hints that he remembers kavita nd supposed betrayal from lakshya and dp ?
we have all witnessed how destructive Sanskar maheshwari can be when he sets out for revenge nd plays it...
M actually anticipating reunion nd M afraid what is going to fall upon swara... accusation of hurting him which she will die before even thinking of nd his declaration of love for kavita(this kavita involvement is my mere prediction based on that last line, kavita is going to be there na? )
this was beautiful viji...do update soon 🤗

Edited by sharif_lafungi - 9 years ago

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Res, page 3*crying*

Unres,

Viji dearest,

😲 What was it that I just read? Dear, sweet, God, please tell me he is not back to those "They killed my Kavita" days of Sanskar Maheshwari. Gee, I'm too excited that my fingers and toes are tingling!🤪 This is the Sanskar I so loved on the series and his journey of darkness to light had left me in awe, so we are all set to retake that journey...to see how Swara would yet again deal with this storm of a man and be in anchor to sanity and bring him home ashore...just wow!❤️

It was really a brave attempt dearest, to completely twist the serial plot line and made Sanskar fall from the cliff edge after Swara had shot at the criminal I guess? And that is the only memory he has of her. This is so thrilling!

At the same moment, in his empty mind he feels that there is someone, he has to return to. He feels that face he remembers is vital and yet, now I wonder, blinded once more by his rage will he feel the pull towards his soul mate or not?

When I started on reading for a moment I entertained a possibility that there might be a Miss.Wood here, all set to save the hero and be the villain herself. Since till that point the plot was quite a upside down of the original. Thank god that was not the case and it had been someone with senses who had saved Sanskar. At least we have one worry less.

Now, when will you complete this? I'm dying of excitement, a bad case of curiosity and a stroke or two of imaginations as to what might happen next. Hope you will update before my condition gets severe.

Love you loads,

Saku

Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Viji🤗🤗

When I first read the title ,Agatha Christie popped in my mind but how apt is title for the plot u laid out and sanskaar ka memory loss ..you are on writing spree and we forumwaasi's arre just loving it😳

but this is damn dam exciting ..role reversal and Dont tell me sanskaar went back 5 years when he wanted to avenge for kavita's death..😆😆 Can it get more interesting darlin ⭐️ aap tho kamaal ho aur aapki writings laajawaab👏👏

Cant wait for him go back, cant wait for him to meet the lady in his dreams and too excited to see the events unfold..🥳

No thank you for one more lovely piece in making and outstanding narration like always . I could feel sanskaar infront of my eyes..dont keep us waiting

LOve

Lucky

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hi All 🤗

A BIG round of 🤗🤗🤗 for all your lovely, motivating responses. To tell you the truth, since this TS was completely divergent from the serial track (to the extent of being almost an inverted mirror image), I was rather nervous about it.

Feel extremely happy, touched and humbled that you've liked it so much. I'm working on Part 2, do give me some time needed, to flesh out the various events and character reactions which I have planned.

Love,

---Viji

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Krishna Priya

@bilvyina

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Nice story...loved a lot...i alwayz want this plot were sanskar forget swara...realy need a break frm current track frm serial...u fulfil my wish thank u..keep going