Swasan FF: Childhood Lovers[Chapter-8 updated]

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__Prologue__


"You know what? I hate you!" she said hitting him

"But I love you!" he replied smiling cheekily

"Better you give my chocolate back!" she shouted at him

"I ate it how can I get it back from my tummy?" he snapped at her back

"Bring me new one!" she shouted back

"I don't have money!" he simply said patting his clothes to get of the dirt

"You are going to die" she said smiling at him and started to beat him

"Stop! Here you go with the chocolate!" he said taking the chocolate out accepting his defeat

"If you have given me a long time ago you didn't had to take up the beats!" she said munching on the chocolate

"Can't you share that thing with your best friend?" he said pointing towards the chocolate

"I can share my heart with you but not this!" she said gulping the whole chocolate

"I hate you!" he said smacking her head

"But I love you" she replied with the same tone he replied before

"Shona!" someone called out from the backyard of the garden

"Haan ma aayi!" she replied shouting back

"I have to go! Bye!" she said kissing his cheek and he just nodded his head

*

"Shona! Are you ready?" Sharmistha asked

"Yes ma!" she said adjusting her dupatta

"They are down! Lado bring her down in 10!" Sharmistha said and closed the door

"Ji ma!" Ragini said

"Are you sure Swara you have to do this?" Ragini asked looking at her through the mirror

"Its better we don't talk about this today!" Swara replied putting some bangles in her hand

"You love him!" Ragini snapped at her

"It was thirteen years back! And to be more prcised I loved him!" She said in a low tone

"Don't lie to me! I know you inside and out! So better you don't hide anything!" Ragini snapped angrily at her

"He left me Rags! When I needed him the most he just left me! He never tried to contact me? What should I do? Wait for him like a bloody love sick puppy?" Swara shouted at Ragini

"But you still love him!" Ragini said holding her shoulders

"I did Ragini! I still do! But will move on! He left I didn't!" Swara said a tear rolling down her left eye

"Then why this engagement?" Ragini asked

"I want to forget him!" Swara said touching up her eye a bit

"Lado! Shona ko neeche lao!" Sharmistha called out

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Starting a new FF on Swasan! its really very different concept! just tell me should i continue or not?!
Criticism accepted😃

Love,
Nidhi.
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__INDEX__
Prologue:{Above}
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Nice beginning...
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start 👏
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...some interesting is gng on...thanx for pm
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Amazing start..
Loved it. 😃
Continue soon.
Thnks for the pm dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice beginning...

Eagerly waiting for your next update
Please pm me


thank you so much😳😃

will update soon😃
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Awesome start 👏
Do continue soon


will continue soon😃😳
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Originally posted by: MusicAddict

Nice prologue, continue soon!


will continue soon😃😳

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