Swasan FF: Childhood Lovers[Chapter-8 updated] - Page 17

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Posted: 8 years ago

thnak you😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: raaz19

Beautiful update loved that sanskaar was annoyed with sahil...

Ouch that had to hurt at the end. .poor guy...update soon ..

Waiting to see how sanskaar reacts at the wedding...I just love this story...

Waiting raz


thank you so much😳

this means a lot to me!

will be up soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Nidhi dear..

U updated after long...plzz try to visit regularly...
Missing u and everyone...feeling like everyone is leaving...

update was Fantastic ..feeling bad for swasan..even im getting annoyed with sahil presence...finally sanky got to know swara getting martied to sahil..he will be heart broken..im sure...waiting for his pov...

Talia



i am so sorry for not giving regular updates!
will try my best from now!

thank you so much!😳
will be up soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

thank you😳
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Nynaeve


Dear Nidhi,

Finally I am back.

And it is - Swara and Sanskaar still in love with each other after so many years and a plausible misunderstanding(s). Sujatha appears to be very nice (I like her here) she genuinely wished for Swara as a daughter in law (is she aware that Sanskaar is in love with Swara -I do not think she would have let matters come to this stage is she knew that her son loves Swara) It must have hurt, badly.

Swara and Ragini - was Swara telling Ragini that she has doubts about Sahil and herself when the guys walked in, I got that feeling. But then she did not hesitate to reaffirm Sahil, though that must have been a reflex reaction to her confusion (her heart remembers the love in his eyes, her mind is adamant that she pay heed to what he told her years ago...)

Nice conundrum of emotional conflicts - is Sahil the bad guy here or for a change he would let the lovers reunite?

Do update soon. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year.

Best,
Nyna




you have no idea how happy i am seeing your comment.

oh poor sujatha doesnt know about her son's feelings towards Swara then definately she will not make her marry to some other guy. and about sahil you will get to know very soon. yes, Ragini and Swara were talking about the engagement.

thank you so much😳

wil be up soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

__Chapter 8__


Swara's POV

He left.

He just left.

He left without saying a word.

I wriggled out of Shail's grip feeling uncomfortable near him. I was surprised when he didn't know that I was engaged. But then why did I felt that he was hurt? Why did I felt that he wanted to hide his feeling from us? I was still staring at the terrace door from where he retreated.

"Swara?" I heard Ragini call me

"Ha" my eyes turned towards her

"Kahaan kho gayi?" she asked confused

"Kuch nahi" I said shaking my head to clear my thoughts

"You were saying something?" I asked

"Haa Ma neeche bula rahi hai chale?" She asked and then I realised the boys were walking toward the terrace door.

"Chal" I said nodding my head and we moved towards the living room

"Meine methai lati hu" I could hear ma's excited voice as we were descending down the stairs.

Meethai? Why? I frowned in confusion

"Arre aao Shaadi ki date fix ho chuki hai, February 17th ko hai shaadi" Dad said in happiness. My eye widened in shock hearing the date and moreover there is only a month left.

Swara its 17th of February

I know

It's his birthday

I know

It was the day when everything ended

I know

It was the day when he left you

I know damn it! Shut the hell up. I was getting frustrated as the time passed on. I could feel my eyes tearing up.

You can't cry! Stay strong, Swara! I breathed out and put a smile on my face convincing others that I am happy. I looked at Ragini who was happily taking blessings from the elders with Laksh. She was happy and I don't want to spoil her mood, I not even looked around to see if Sahil was around out. I step forward to take elder's blessing. I was repeating the process like a robot till Rgini came in between and hugged and I returned the hug with more strength. I don't know how will I be able to leave with this girl. I didn't know with whom I could confess my feelings too. She knew me in and out. A tera trickled down my cheeks. She loosened the grip of her hold and I rubbed away the tears hastily and opened my eyes to meet those eyes which I wanted avoid like plague. He was standing here looking straight into my eyes which send those electric waves through my body making me shiver.

He did not leave.

He was here.

But his eyes were in range.

His eyes were showing an emotion.

Hurt.

Hurt was written on his face.

Sensing my stillness Ragini turned herself to face Sanskaar and she gripped my hand hardly which made my head to snap at her and she blinked her eyes in assurance. I breathed out again. My hands automatically went towards my left hand's wrist and touched at those charms of the bracelet, a thing which I always do when I wanted to control myself.

Sanskaar's POV

"Tu yahi tha?" Laksh said coming towards me

Do you want to spoil his mood Sanskaar? Look at him he is so happy, please control yourself.

"How can I buddy? It's your wedding dude" I said and hugged him my eyes still wandering on her. I know she was avoiding my look.

She was breathing hard, I could she was nervous. When the date was out her eyes were widened in shock, her eyes were teared up. But why? did she still remember the day? My birthday? I was broken off when from my thoughts when lucky pulled me towards the centre pf the hall.

"Congratulations Ragini" I said smiling

"Thank you so much" she said with happiness. I was happy for my best friend. I looked at Swara who was looking at me, I walked towards her slowly and she looked here and there avoid my gaze.

"Congratulations Ms. Gadodia" I said in a bitter voice which made her flinch. She closed her eyes for a moment but then opened again and her eyes were void which made me surprised but I did not let her show that.

"Thank you" with that she left from there but my eyes travelled through her left hand's wrist where her right hand was busy holding the bracelet. And my eyes teared up.

She still has the bracelet.

She did not throw away the bracelet.

From the last 15 years, she has the bracelet.

She still wore the bracelet.

"You will always find me near you, you will always feel me I am there with you in each and every decision of yours and most important you will feel my love for you. Don't remove this bracelet Swara, if you did I will not be there with you, around you or to be in your decision."

Why? then why did you pulled over that shit? Why Swara? I could feel the tear rolled down my cheek.

"I am going" I said and ran away. I couldn't handle this anymore.

She still has the charm bracelet.

She loves you

No, that can't be true

You love her

No.

I removed my car out of the driveway and went away till the house wasn't in my view.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 8 years ago
Sakkiyah thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for your next update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update if a bit short will be back with detailed response. .
Raz
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Posted: 8 years ago
aw2w sooo emotional...loved it dear n thnx fr d pm..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for ch-8 Nidhi dear. 😳
Unresed. 😊
Ugghh!! SwaSan r in so much confusion! 🤢 My poor babies! 😭 Felt very bad for them. 😭 Update soon and plzz let SwaSan's MU get cleared as soon as possible. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago

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