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Posted: 8 years ago

thank you so much
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

such a emotional update
I think they had a mu ...



thank you so much!

will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Rockingbhardwaj

Poor swasan..
It's really heartbreaking..

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Posted: 8 years ago
__Chapter 7__


"Hume shaadi ki tyaari shuru kar deni chaiye" Shekar said grabbing everyone's attention. Everyone were seated in the living room of the Gadodia Mansion. They grinned happily hearing the news but one person wasn't. None noticed her not even her own son. She genuinely wanted her son to be married with her favourite daughter. Sujata wasn't happy with the idea of Swara being married to someone else other than her son. She was always fond of them from the time she saw them playing together at the tender age of 5. She never told anyone about her dream, she thought after they grew up they will eventually fall into love and their marriage will happen where she will be the happiest person in the world. She sighed sadly and looked at her son who was happily chatting away with Laksh probably he doesn't know that Swara was also getting married. She smiled but deeply inside her she envied Shweta because she got the most precious gem in the form of daughter-in-law. Sanskaar wasn't happy when he saw Sahil sitting on the sofa happily chatting away with his Shekar uncle laughing when he entered the mansion. He wasn't understanding why he needed to be here and that too when there will be an important family discussion will be held. He scowled but then maintained his posture, maybe he is friends with Ragini. He couldn't see Swara and Ragini there as he was restless to see Swara and the best part was that he himself didn't know why he was so restless to see Swara.

"Tum teeno terrace pe jao wahi peh hai Swara aur Ragini" Sharmistha said to the three guys and they nodded their heads leaving up for the terrace.

"Meine nastha bhej thi hu" Sharmistha said again

"Nahi chaiye Ma we are good" Laksh replied climbing the stairs and Sharmistha nodded her head

*

Sanskaar's POV

I am not getting why Sahil has to come with us? He isn't a part of family then why roaming with us?

"Sanksaar you have to take a left! Tu seedha kahaan ja raha hai?" Laksh said hitting the back of my head

"Haan na toh chal" I said scowling at him. We three entered the terrace door and here again that annoying man has to come in my way.

God, may I please kill him?"

We have so many memories in this place. The little night outs we used to have and watch the stars' shin in beauty and she being in my arms. I so hoped that I can go back to that time and extend are relationship a little longer so I could have more memories. I stood there gazing the terrace for some more minute, I was here after some fourteen years of my life. This was my past but yet it held so many memories in my heart. Someone patted my back and I was ready to launch my shoe at the person who disturbed my thoughts.

"Chalega ki Dhaka du?" Laksh asked me

Its official I have gone bonkers, good, very good. I shook my head.

"Kya soch raha hai? Chal na" Laksh said pushing me into the terrace more

"Chal na aata hai" I said back to him walking further into terrace where I could hear the feeble voices of women

"Lag toh nahi raha tha" Sahil commented walking in front of me and I rolled my eyes again at him.

Did I speak to him?

"I am not sure about this anymore" I heard Swara saying to Ragini. They were sitting on the swing which wasn't there fourteen years back. I looked at the swing confusion written on my face as I was expecting the swing to give back my answer.

Ladies and Gentlemen this is the result of thinking so much about something that you except a wooden piece to talk with you.

Swara's POV

"You can't let- aap log kab aaye?" Ragini asked someone and I turned my eyes from the sky to the people who disturbed our sister talk and had to irritate me this moment. And as soon as I turned my eyes I instantly got calmed. Those eyes still made me calm, those eyes still give me the warmth which it used to give, nothing has changed, his eyes are still the dark brown colour which made me the most hyperactive person into a calmest person. Those eyes still showed lo-.

No. No Swara you know that he doesn't love you anymore. Hold yourself.

But his eyes are saying something else

He said straight in your face that he hates you can't you get it?

But can't you get it the emotion his eyes are showing to me?

"Swara" Sahil said shaking me

"Huh-uh" I asked confused tearing my gaze away from Sanskaar

"Where were, you lost?" Sahil asked

In those brown eyes. I was again looking at Sanskaar and I wanted to say it aloud but then refrained myself.

"Aha nothing, you guys sit" I said composing myself

"So, have you guys decided the venue?" Sanskaar asked Laksh and Ragini starting a conversation

Sanskaar's POV

Her eyes were strange.

"Not yet we four are still confused to do wedding in a ground or a banquet hall" Ragini replied

Who four? Now I was curiously confused

"Four of them? Who?" I asked

"You were not knowing! Surprising dude! I thought you knew" Laksh said genuinely surprised

"Whom are you talking about?" Sanskaar asked again

"Sanskaar meet my soon to be wife Swara" Sahil said grabbing her hand

Ouch. It hurts.

I got up my seat looking at Swara. Swara please nod your head in negative, please, please. My eyes roamed down to her left hand's ring finger and there was a diamond ring sparkling in the sunlight. I looked back to Swara's face and she nodded in affirmation.

"Soon-to-be-his-wife" Swara said affirming once more without any hesitation which once again pained my heart.

"I wasn't knowing it, congrats thought" I said as my voice came out strained unexpectedly.

"Lucky I have some work I'll meet you at home" I said not waiting for him to answer back and getting out of the terrace and my hands rubbing my chest trying to lessen his pain.

She was engaged.


Edited by __nidhi__ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome.
What will be sanskar's reaction.
Thanks for the pm
Waiting for your next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
ohhh wow I just read d entire thing jn one go and I must say its pretty amazing...so they both love each other but there is some misunderstanding between them and for some reason I feel Sahil is behind all this...they need to have a proper heart ro heart conversation with each other and clear out the misunderstanding...please pm me for further updates...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Res for ch-7 Nidhi dear. 😳
Unresed. 😃
Nice update. 👏
Like Sujju, me too not happy with Swara-Sahil engagement. 😭 This Sahil is pissing me off! 🤢 I don't know why but I'm having a feeling that Sahil is the one who caused MU between my SwaSan. 😡 And when Sahil uttered "My soon to be wife" and referred to Swara, like Sanskar, my heart also again broke into pieces, although I knew that Swara is engaged to Sahil!! 😭 😭 Update soon dear. 😳 Thanks for the pm. 😃
With love,
Aheli.
Edited by iam_aheli_98 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Beautiful update loved that sanskaar was annoyed with sahil...
Ouch that had to hurt at the end. .poor guy...update soon ..

Waiting to see how sanskaar reacts at the wedding...I just love this story...

Waiting raz
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nidhi dear..
U updated after long...plzz try to visit regularly...
Missing u and everyone...feeling like everyone is leaving...

update was Fantastic ..feeling bad for swasan..even im getting annoyed with sahil presence...finally sanky got to know swara getting martied to sahil..he will be heart broken..im sure...waiting for his pov...

Talia
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Posted: 8 years ago

Dear Nidhi,

Finally I am back.

And it is - Swara and Sanskaar still in love with each other after so many years and a plausible misunderstanding(s). Sujatha appears to be very nice (I like her here) she genuinely wished for Swara as a daughter in law (is she aware that Sanskaar is in love with Swara -I do not think she would have let matters come to this stage is she knew that her son loves Swara) It must have hurt, badly.

Swara and Ragini - was Swara telling Ragini that she has doubts about Sahil and herself when the guys walked in, I got that feeling. But then she did not hesitate to reaffirm Sahil, though that must have been a reflex reaction to her confusion (her heart remembers the love in his eyes, her mind is adamant that she pay heed to what he told her years ago...)

Nice conundrum of emotional conflicts - is Sahil the bad guy here or for a change he would let the lovers reunite?

Do update soon. Wishing you and your family a Merry Christmas and a Happy New year.

Best,
Nyna

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