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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: 92Sara

Hey Nidhi sorry for late and short reply.
Read both the parts together.
Hope SwaSan MU's get cleared soon.
Thanks for the PM.


no problem.
i am glad you read the parts!
thank you so much!
will update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

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I'm kamila.. shortly kam... nice to meet you dear... sorry for posting here my pm is not working...


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__Chapter 3: Searching__

The sunlight entered the room disturbing her sleep. She stirred a little to block the rays disturbing her, but of no use. She took a deep breath and slowly opened her eyes adjusting to the unwelcomed light. A smile automatically reached her face, she could feel the changes within herself but yet her gut feeling was telling her that something big was going to happen today. She looked towards her bed just too fine Ragini peacefully sleeping therefore she decide not wake her up and head to the washroom to freshen-up. The house was already filled with people running here and there to make everything perfect. She stepped down to hall where everyone was decorating the house as it was engagement of their second daughter everything should be perfect like yesterday. She walked towards her father who was sitting and supervising the others. She took his medicines and walked towards him with a glass of water and gave it to him, while her father took it happily and made her sit beside him.

"Tu kush hain na?" Shekar asked his daughter ruffling her hair

"Haan baba! Ese kyun puch rahe ho?" Swara asked

"Tu kush nahi dikh rahi!" Shekar asked his daughter, he knew her really well.

"Nahi baba meine kush hun!" she stood standing up with fidgeting her fingers, she didn't want her baba to know that she is not happy with his decision, she can't compromise with her father's health.

"Jese tu bole!" Shekar said not dragging the matter while she wiped the tear and turned towards him with a smile on his face

"Shona!" Sharmistha called out for her

"Haan ma aayi!" Swara said, kissing Shekar's cheek she ran towards the room

**

"Laksh will fall flat on his knees seeing you!" Swara said adjusting Ragini's necklace

"You are too looking beautiful!" Ragini replied and she weakly smiled at her sister's comment

Clad in dark blue and white lehnga with the diamonds adoring her she was not looking like a princess and Ragini clad in fluorescent pink and the cream color contrasting it, she was not looking any small then any fairy. Swara was happy for her sister, she was marrying the person whom she loves with all her heart, she is not unlucky like her to love someone else and marry to someone else. She still had the gut feeling that something big is going to happen to her but she shooed it off and just to concentrate on her sister's engagement.

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"How am I looking?" Laksh asked his best-friend who was sitting beside her with an irritated face

"God Laksh! You are asking the same question for the hundredth time!" he replied with a scowl

"You really don't have any idea how I am nervous!" Laksh replied

"Dude you are going to get engaged with the person you love not whom you don't know! Stop being a child!" he snapped at him in a chided tone

"That's the reason I am nervous!" Laksh replied while he groaned in irritation

"Saheb pouch gaye!" The driver said breaking their thoughts

"Thank god!" He replied and stepped down just to be rooted in his place, he was just landed in the place where he prayed not to be present in his worst of the nightmares. He looked around just to see one mansion decorated and looking like a palace while other stood in the dark and then the lawn with the lights. He couldn't believe his eyes that he was at that place from where he was running from thirteen years. Is his best friend getting married to his love of life?

"Sanskaar?" Laksh called out snapping from his thoughts.

Swara stooped from what she was doing. She felt someone called Sanskaar and necklace in her hand dropped down on the floor. She could feel different suddenly. Only Sanskaar was coming in his thoughts, she couldn't stop the thoughts coming in her mind. Her heart could feel his presence around him and her heart was beating faster and threatened to come out of her chest.

"Swara kya hua?" Ragini asked

"Nahi kuch nahi!" She tried to focus on the engagement but couldn't as her mind drifted towards Sanskaar

"Laksh who is the girl?" Sanskaar asked hoping Swara is not the person. But why he should care? If she engages to someone else or not?! Bloody heart!

"You will see her soon!" Laksh said walking towards the mansion

"Laksh please!" Sanskaar tone changed

"You can wait for five minutes!" Laksh said and pulled him towards the mansion

"I can't wait dam it!"Sanskaar shouted jerking his hand away

"Ho kya gaya hain tujhe? Jabse idhar aaya hain tu bohout weird behave kar raha hain?" Laksh lost his temper

"Tu kis ke saath shaadi kar raha hain?" Sanskaar asked again

"sab andar hain! chal batata hun!" Laksh said dragging him inside he nodded his head

"Shona! Be down in 5 minutes!" Sharmistha called out

"Ji maa!" she shouted back. Her heart was beating faster as something was going to change her life. He was feeling restless coming here. Her breathing was abnormal. He was catching for some breathe to cool her down. As she was taking one-one step towards the out of the room she could feel her heart thudding. He was not able to take of his eyes from the stairs. She took a deep breath and twisted the knob of the door opening it and holding Ragini. He took a deep breath and made his eyes turn from the stairs and stood behind Laksh near the dais. They could feel their hearts thudding down their chest. Swara took Ragini towards the dais and made her stood beside Laksh and she stood behind Ragini. They could feel each-other's presence yet their eyes were not able to capture them.

Edited by __nidhi__ - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Res
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Iss baar fast & furious wala unres hogaya 🤣

Mind blowing update 👏
Oh god i am damn excited to see swasan see each other and sanskar get to known about swara marriage plan with sahil and how he will stop this marriage? And how there misunderstanding will be cleared?and how they will fall in love again?
Oh so many questions in my mind 😆 i think i have to wait
Please update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Res again..

Unres again...

Nidhi... give me a big hug.. 🤗 .. for this lovely update... you don't know how much I loved it... both felt their presence.. the cosmic connection... was too good.. their feelings were well written... soo Sanskaar thinking that Laksh is getting engaged to Swara.. may be...

Swaragini bond is superb... I'm waiting for Swasan meeting... want them to clear their mu... soon..

With love...

Kam..
Edited by Vaiyambar...... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update wow...The panic sanskaar felt was a nice read...update soon want to see how the react when they meet finally and he finds out she is 50 be we'd with someone else...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome dear... 👍🏼
Swasan's inner feelings about each others presence were beautiful. Well written.
Now i'm really exited to read about swasans encounter. How he'll react after knowing swara & sahil's engagement..How they clear the misunderstanding...
Eagerly waiting to read further.
Thnks for the pm dear. 😊
Edited by Kaveetha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Awesome..
Waiting for Swasan first meet..
Update soon
Thanks for pm

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