SwaSan OS: Her Platinum Day of Love - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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I couldnt resist picking this up despite the extremely hectic morning fracas..😆.
And am glad I did..nothing makes a gal happier than recalling Mr Darcy, Captain Wentworth and Darcy's unforgettable parting words😊 to his Elizabeth. And then you went and put them into this golden duo's story... ummm.😳
This was just so endearing! 😳Loved Swara's thinking through of her related past and being sensible enough to stay with her unforgettable yet forgotten hubby.

I want to add more but cant . 😕Gotta run. So will continue at lunch...Res until then and a big 🤗 for this delicious start of the day and week !!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Guys 🤗 🤗


You've ensured that my Monday morning begins on a most felicitous note. 🤗 Feel really touched and blessed by all the very warm words of feedback.

Please bear with me for some delay in my individual replies to comments; I have a couple of pending Un Res's to do on pals' threads; after which I also need to catch up on my individual replies on my previous OS "Sahil's Khaatirdari in Maheshwari House ". 😊

Will start my reverts on this OS, as soon as I wrap those up. But I've read all your comments, and they mean a tremendous lot to me. 🤗🤗

Loads and Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
This OS made me fall in love with the SwaSan jodi even more.😳
Huh, they really are a made for each other couple.. I am thankful to you fo excluding Mr.Wood in this,😆 Can't bear to watch Swara being comfortable with anyone else other than Sanky. And Sanskar, what an absolute gentleman the guy is Great job, Viji⭐️

Btw, noticed your question in your replies to my comments in the other OSes, about any writing on SwaSan from my side , well nothing as of now. I'm not watching the show, but just catching the SwaSan scenes which Asha downloads. May write if some idea strikes after watching the recent scenes.😊

Edited by Shadow-Fax - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
hey viji,

so simple...so sweet...so beautiful...this the way it should have been just pure emotions and nothing else...

sanskar saying that they have lifetime ahead...only sanskar can say things so perfect...😳 and swara slowly slowly discovering her love for him...staring him and cosmic connection and a hazy memories...

if its about swara , sanskar remembers it no matter what...the end was so pure and full of eternal love...❤️ she falling in love with him all over again...beautiful story once again.😳

lots of love,
Helee.
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Hi viji
Amazing journey of love...loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful os..
All seemed so logical here and everythingwas happening as it should have happened..Swara losing her memory and then reacting violently was somewhere very appropriate because all she remembered was a guy taking a shot on her..and there is no way she would react normally if that persons happens to come in front of u suddenly..but after that this is exactly what everybody should have done..told her everything.. Shown her the pictures and arranger her meeting with her husband..I loved Swara here..she was so calm..

Sanskar was as always selfless..giving her the well needed space and time..you took me to the time when the first started living in the MM..the beautiful phase which paved a path to their love story..but this time it was Swara who would look at Sanskar..thinking how handsome be is..how caring and so very amazing friend.. A partner in crime with whom you could share anything..she slowly starts to fall in love with him..and then the most perfect incident to let her realize how hard she has fallen for him..

Sanskar leaving for a business trip and she missing him so much that she started imagining him everywhere..but have not been surprised if should word have started having dreams about him as well..and then slowly her memory flashbacks plays a perfect role to make her realize that there is a void which is filled only in his presence..a feeling of incompleteness if he does not happens to be there..her sensing him even before he walks into the room..his intense eyes as if looking straight into the depth of her soul..and then when he tells him he remembers every minor thing about her and coming back at her first class..hurriedly competing his work just to be there for her..that's so Sanskar..

And thus what was always in her heart makes way through her mind..she has fallen for him deeply..or she was always in love with him..and fell for him all over again..beautifully written..had so much power to tingle your soul..

Thank you for writing such an amazing story..I just want to read on more and more..
Edited by svg98 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Viji my friend
The os was heart touching one.
The thoughts of Swara was beautifully portrayed
The way she realised her love for Sanskar it was beautiful...
Swara was in a confused state.Her partial amnesia and it's after effect...The more suffered person was sanskar.
She called him murderer.but he patiently heard it.
His love for her was unconditional.He was ready to wait for her.
And he understood her very well.
She unknowingly fall in love with him.And when he far from her she missed him a lot..she wish his presence near her.it gave unknown courage for her
And there was no sahil...it was nice.
It was a nice os with full of swasan
Thanks for the pm
With lots of love
Shamina
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Res,
Just got home. Running to read now :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Only one word for this OS dear that is "Magical"..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Viji ma🤗
How r u ?
Hope ur doing good dr
Wow u know something before looking into ur reference ,I got the trick darcy my my he is my fav character ever ,I loved the way u have made this OS👏👏
Awesome it was ⭐️⭐️

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