Viji Vijjj...you are on a splendid roll !!
Consistently through all your series you instill that sense of homecoming between Sanskar and Swara !! That feeling of true belonging, and while most of these wonderful works don't materialise on screen, I enjoy reading and living vicariously through the stories they inspire !!
It made me laugh that you included the nuggets of logic...so cheeky...yes things that would have been the first things you'd do *loved the dig at the family*...everyone speaks, police speaks *loved this cheeky comment as well*...SORT it out through conversation...we don't need to make maata ka jaagran type chants of khooni khooni !!
This would have been the most natural way to go, that sense of awkwardness, that fighting the feeling...dismissing any resurrgence as a basic response to knowing you are married !! sooo well done...and I loved hwo you brought about our fav point about stability in her life...him being her anchor...and for her to realise that all over again... !!!
Have to give it up for Sanskuuu's patience...and while thankful he didn't go the Darcy route, his perseverance really paid off :P *Side note : I think I've told you before that P&P is my all time fav piece of work (I actually gifted it to my niece last month and she just didn't get it...and I sighed at her loss :P)...*
That she misses him, yet doesn't want to tell him is just so awww !! and while I knew that he'd turn up, that moment when he does still made me smile ear to ear :D
I really liked how you brought out that they are so attuned to each other...her knowing he came early for her...and him picking up on all small details.
Great story Viji...do write more...without or without wood, but defi with our fav pair :)
Edited by bones123 - 9 years ago
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