SwaSan OS: Her Platinum Day of Love - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

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Viji my dearest,🤗

Hey Saku Darling
🤗🤗🤗

Needless say, I really found that ad platinum day of love quite a bit heart touching, that concept Is so true in many cases. Most people have that kind of a moment, day or an hour, where they know for certain that they have lost their hearts for someone. There are others as well, who falls in love like they fall asleep, uncertain as to when that precious moment was, when they completely lost themselves in the feeling. I find both ways fascinating.

The concept of that ad really was good, no? 😳 Yes, most people do have that kind of a moment, a day or an hour where they feel they have fallen completely, irrevocably and intensely in love with their better halves. 😳 And you are certainly right, there is that other kind of falling in love as well---which happens gradually and steadily, where one does not know precisely when that "magic moment" happened.

As Darcy tells Lizzy in Pride and Prejudice, in fact. 😉 😃 "I cannot fix on the hour, or the spot, or the look, or the words, which laid the foundation. It is too long ago. I was in the middle before I knew that I had begun" 😉 Both are lovely and fascinating, I agree.

So here, in spite of the illogical twists our beloved show had taken, we have a sensible approach, where the two families united under the banner of their distressed and wrongly accused, Son/Son in law and tried with everything they could to make Swara see things differently. I still wonder why they don't simply tell her on the show, even the police, is silent in this matter when they could have provided her solid profs as to why it happened and how. So this came across as a beam of logical light in that sense.

I really wonder this too. Why can't they just TELL her all that happened, lay the proofs before her. Ask her to consult the Police Commissioner, the ACP, the constables, if she so chooses. It is at times like this, that families normally come together, rally behind the person wrongly accused, to ensure that the couple (their son & daughter in law/ daughter and son in law), sort out whatever misconception is keeping them apart. Ah well...

Then came the changing feelings.

Aww! Mr. Darcy was my childhood crush, he is such a complexly beautiful character, so human with his own flaws that makes him even more relatable. It is very much imaginable that Swara wanted someone like him, and was quite unsettled to find the one she had seemingly fallen for is made of gentler stuff...oh sweetie, you don't know him well enough to judge that! I'm sure everything her research told her about him would paint a HD image of a Mr. Darcy where the one she has to confront would lay his life down for her with no questions asked.

😆 😉 I do see a lot of shades of Darcy in Sanskaar; perhaps more of Captain Wentworth (the male protagonist from Persuasion). But of course, he has many traits all his own.

Swara has seen only the accomodative, understanding, soft side of Sanskaar. She might have expected someone with more rough edges, more authoritative, I dare say, given her background reading about him, after he was proved innocent in her eyes. What she doesn;t realize is that Sanskaar is like this only for her, and to a lesser extent for those he holds dear in their family. To others, he is a determined, formidable opponent and business rival. Who plays with a straight bat as long as people play straight with him; but can cut them down if they play crooked with him. 😉

And this gives way to curiosity and curiosity rekindles the lost flames of attraction. Wasn't that so beautiful the way she started thinking about him? It is one of the things I like about your writing, there is always a layer of subtle emotions, changing with the flow of the story and making everything relatable, believable and oh so lovely at the same time.

Thanks, darling. That feedback meant a lot to me. 🤗 🤗I did see that curiosity, that process of slowly getting more comfortable with her husband, as something which Swara would experience. Sanskaar did, after all, give her enough time to get comfortable with him, to rediscover her feelings for him.

When you rolls the story back to the present, Sanskar just has to come, the moment is screaming for him and as she turns there he is. Can an ending be any more pleasant?

😉 Sanskaar would always be there for Swara----even if she had never actually asked him in so many words to be there, even though she had never actually told him herself about her first class and how excited as well as nervous she was about it. But that is Sanskaar after all---he loves Swara with every last pore of his body, every last cell. He adores her with such a potent, intense love---which is completely unconditional and selfless. Swara was just destined to fall in love with him, all over again. 😳

I really loved how she worked out, him overworking himself to make sure he was present at her big day and getting touched by the gesture. There, she found her platinum day of love and he found hope that everything would soon bloom back to the spring he had waited patiently so long for.

Yes, that was the lovely soul connect between them all over again. He knew when her class was, had taken great care to recollect a scrap of conversation between her and Ragini, he happened to hear. And Swara, in her turn, knew instantly that Sanskaar had literally worked inhuman hours, piled on so much work on himself, to ensure he got back in time for her class. Cutting down his trip by 2--3 days, even though this meant considerably more effort and very exhaustingly long work hours for him.

Wow, just so awesomely wow.

I'm so thankful for this welcome home gift I received from you today dearest, just made my home look more brighter and homely with such a wonderful one shot waiting to be read on my screen.

Thanks so much again, Saku. It made my day, to have your lovely feedback. 🤗🤗

Loads of love,

Saku



Hey Saku 🤗🤗

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Loads and Loads of Love,

----Viji

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Hi Viji dear,😊
Firstly a big sorry to u coz I was out of town for 1 week and after returning back, I became busy with my college admission tests.😳 And plzz accept my apology and don't scold me for saying sorry.😳😆
It was such an amazing, heart touching and dreamy OS.👏 Loved both Swara and Sanskar here.😃😳 Thanks for the pm dear.😃
With love,
Aheli.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hi Viji dear,😊
Firstly a big sorry to u coz I was out of town for 1 week and after returning back, I became busy with my college admission tests.😳 And plzz accept my apology and don't scold me for saying sorry.😳😆
It was such an amazing, heart touching and dreamy OS.👏 Loved both Swara and Sanskar here.😃😳 Thanks for the pm dear.😃
With love,
Aheli.


Hey Aheli dear 🤗

No sorries yaar. 😆 Remember the friendship rules given by Sunny. 😉

Hope your admission tests went well. 🤗

Thanks so very much sweetheart. I am so very glad to hear that you loved this OS. The fact that you loved Swara and Sanskaar here means a lot. Being such a huge SwaSan fan, that's a huge compliment for me. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Hey... Once again a beautiful OS... 😊😊.. Truth be told, when the Memory Loss track came into news, i think all SwaSan fans thought of something so subtle and beautiful to be shown in the show as well.. Starting from the fact that Swara did not trust Sanskaar, to her accepting her marriage, slowly seeing and realising how good Sanskaar is and then falling in love... Buttt none of that came and all we got was shouting and yelling.. 😭😭😭..
However, your beautiful OS did make up for all the lost hopes and wishes.. 😳😳... Loved that Swara started believing and trusting Sanskaar albeit slowly.. But she did.. Who wouldnt.. Sanskaar in ur stories is just a dream man.. Awww.. He can make anyone fall for him.. 😳😳😳... And she wanted him to be there for her first class even though she didnt tell him.. Awww.. Can she get any cuter.. They are made for each other.. 😳😳😳..

And finally they realisation of that beautiful amazing feeling.. LOVE... 👏👏👏.. How can anyone not fall for a person whose life revolves around you.. Anyone would.. i really wish they would have shown Swara falling for Sanskaar again rather than not believing him in the entire track.. That was a wasted track with only Sahil having been added to irritate Swasan fans... 😡😡😡...

Hence, even more grateful for this lovely post.. 👏👏👏.. And the way you write, may be you should give some ideas for the show as well.. 😆😆😆... Trust me we all will be v happy.. Lol.. But.. Loveddd your story.. and your idea.. 👏...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
^^^^ Hey Dear 🤗
So touched by this lovely comment, will reply in detail the soonest I can. 🤗

Loads of Love

Viji
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: virman_superhit

Hey... Once again a beautiful OS... 😊😊.. Truth be told, when the Memory Loss track came into news, i think all SwaSan fans thought of something so subtle and beautiful to be shown in the show as well.. Starting from the fact that Swara did not trust Sanskaar, to her accepting her marriage, slowly seeing and realising how good Sanskaar is and then falling in love... Buttt none of that came and all we got was shouting and yelling.. 😭😭😭..

Hey there. 🤗🤗

Yeah...I would have loved to see a rational, determined and feisty Swara. Sure, she had doubts and misgivings about Sanskaar, since she did not recollect anything about him, in the grips of her partial retrograde amnesia. Except that one incomplete memory, which she had misconstrued as him trying to shoot her.

Still, I would have thought that Swara would definitely be open to a logical discussion, to examine all the proofs and arrive at a logical conclusion. And surely, the Maheshwari and Gadodia families would have given her the complete picture of what had happened, too.

However, your beautiful OS did make up for all the lost hopes and wishes.. 😳😳... Loved that Swara started believing and trusting Sanskaar albeit slowly.. But she did.. Who wouldnt.. Sanskaar in ur stories is just a dream man.. Awww.. He can make anyone fall for him.. 😳😳😳... And she wanted him to be there for her first class even though she didnt tell him.. Awww.. Can she get any cuter.. They are made for each other.. 😳😳😳..

Yes, they really are soulmates, aren't they? They are like two passionately intertwined twin souls, two halves of a complete, seamless whole. Though Swara in her conscious mind, did not have memories of Sanskaar; her heart, her subconscious psyche and her soul always knew that he was irrevocably and inexorably, a part of her. And she did yearn for him intensely when he went away for his business trip, she pined for him to be there for her first music class. 😳

And finally they realisation of that beautiful amazing feeling.. LOVE... 👏👏👏.. How can anyone not fall for a person whose life revolves around you.. Anyone would.. i really wish they would have shown Swara falling for Sanskaar again rather than not believing him in the entire track.. That was a wasted track with only Sahil having been added to irritate Swasan fans... 😡😡😡...

That would indeed have been a very lovely track---to show Swara falling in love with Sanskaar all over again. How can one not fall in love with one's soulmate, the one who has irrevocable dominion over one's very heart and soul (even if the conscious mind doesn't recall for the moment?) And Swara would have definitely seen the intense, potent adoration with which Sanskaar regarded her. 😳

Hence, even more grateful for this lovely post.. 👏👏👏.. And the way you write, may be you should give some ideas for the show as well.. 😆😆😆... Trust me we all will be v happy.. Lol.. But.. Loveddd your story.. and your idea.. 👏...

Feel immensely touched and blessed by these warm words, darling. You really made my day! 🤗 😳



Hey Dear 🤗🤗🤗

Replied in blue text above. Thanks for your lovely comment, really made my day. 😊

Loads of Love,

----Viji

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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