Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: raaz19
Hey saku wow another story...amazing start really loving the daily updates on the show and know this...
What can is say love the start and the conflict of.emotions..especially swara confusion between her head and heart...

Wow and sanskaar loved the sketch of his character too..seems him and ragani will be some pair...what a way to end the intro with a bang of a cliff hanger...

Buddy update soon..and yes please less of sahil would be nice...

Loved the picture and the prologue...I am sure like all.your stories this will also be a epic and a roller coast of a read...

Waiting already...

Razia

Ps hope exams went well...

Hi Razia,

Yes, the exams went well..Thanks for asking dear😳

I'm glad you are loving the surprise, couldn't help myself when we discussed this plot. Had to start writing!

I will be updating very soon. Oh yes, the less the better I know, feeling the same about him🤢

You liked the pic?😲 Thanks😳

Love,

Saku

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
res for prologue😊
Part unres - and what a delectable start. I love the premise of a Ragini Sanskaar friendship - my best-est-est pair😊
And Swara, feeling peace, reasons not yet identified (by her) after she hears his voice

Will unres of a more detailed comment🤗

Nyna dear🤗

Yes, Ragini and Sanskar the two brilliantly shaded and awesomely brainy duo, there was a lot of scope there, before CVs totally ruined it. You will see them in a good light here.

Swara well...the confused soul.

Will catch up with your detailed revert soon!😊

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: piccola1
Love it Saku ! 👍🏼
Am smacking my lips in anticipation !😃...Nothing like a Sanskaar in business like devious 😉mode ..! Love the cleverness of getting Rags involved for playing the double agent...coz it IS true that she alone was the one person that duped Swara, not once but multiple times ! Atta boy!👏

Ragz true redemption is something we all have been waiting for and will never get on screen..so this one promises to go some way in closing that much needed gap.

I cant wait to have Saahil getting duped and then hit by the Sanskaar-Ragini (dont like Sangini) avalanche😃. I so want him smacked for having the gall to serenade a much married, much loved Swara 😡

Hi Pic,

After ages I'm seeing you! So good to see you!!

Uh well, for SwaSanians can there be a better treat than Sanskar in action?😉 I so wanted him to use his wonderful brain in this confused situation. Haven't seen that yet, well this is my attempt to get what I want.😈

I know, Ragini deserve better than what she was given in the serial. So let's see what we can give her here. And you;re so right, she had Swara completely dancing on her tunes many times right?

Yeah, SanGini hints at something I don't want to promote. Sanskar Ragini is better for me too😃 As for Sahil, I'm so fed up of him that you'll be reading exactly what you are imagining, the rest of the time I'm going to keep him totally off my pages.

Thank you so much for commenting dear, hope to hear more from you!

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: sanjana_cool
Saku ..finally caught one of your dexterous writings right from their inception , I know I haven't read your other masterpieces yet due to time constraint, apologizes for that and a sincere promise that I would definitely read them soon ..how can a swasan maniac and a person who gloats over exquisite literature miss out on such eloquently composed sheer brilliance?..well nah😉..I will start with vajra.

Coming to the prologue , like I told you before , you have an infallible talent of harmoniously blending beautiful prose with bewitching ideas and it all culminates into a vivid , ethereal delight.
I really appreciate the way you described the subtle emotions behind swara's every move and exhibition of even slight resistance to his advances by disconnecting his call was done with great effort and reluctance...something the show has so pathetically lacked!
The most appealing part was the contentment she ultimately derived ( but of course couldn't accord a reasonable source from where she mustered it)by mere hearing his voice and that too for a short span covered by only one or two words .
The conflict faced by her where her heart is irrationally but irrevocably conjoined to his , and like a strict martinet the brain constantly warns her to be wary of sanskar.

Sanskar ...well ..I think it has become superfluous now to mention him being completely perfect is any role destiny necessitates him to enact.
Will wait in anticipation to witness the wonders his plan is about to result in ..and I am sure this swasan #2 would incredibly supplement and complement the ever phenomenal, miraculous Swasan #1.

Mesmerizing prologue ..and will anxiously wait for the first part and yeah will start with vajra as well.
Excellent job!

love,
sanjana

Hi Sanjana,

This is the first time we're interacting on one of my SSs, right? Welcome dear! I so look forward to know you're take on each chapter I will be posting!😳 Do read the others when you have time, no pressure there.

Thank you so much😊 You will see when you read my other works that I am more of a person to go fishing for emotions...the story between the lines...more. So yep, even here the emotional dose will be high, and I wanted to reason each of their actions. You see there is a thrill of story telling then, when you lay a powerful bedrock for the story, everyone knows why it happened so, why someone did something.

Swara in prologue was all heart vs brain, you're so right in picking that up.

Sanskar, well the mere name comes with that capacity. He suits anywhere I cast him. 😳😳

Well the first chapter is more of a backfired plan of Swara's than Sanskar and Ragini's. But it will have a good effect on their forgotten bond. Hope you will like it.

Hope to create something that would interest you. Please do tell me if I am successful at that or not. Thank you so much for commenting!

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: ...Penknife...
Absolutely amazing start!!
Please please please send me a pm wine you update. I'm hooked already :')
Nandini

Hi Nandini,

Thank you so much dear. Yes, I will try to PM you when I update😊

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: Anusha62
Hi sakura dear:)
Aww u come up wid other beautiful story line,prologue seems interesting looking forward for chap1..nd i apologize for not commenting on vajra..
p.s:thanx for pm!!!!

Thank you so much Anusha!😊 Well I didn't come up with the story line all alone, VIji was the one who inspired me.

It's alright dear, take your time. But I wait to hear from you!

You're welcome.

Love,

Sakura

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Anusha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Thank you so much Anusha!😊Well I didn't come up with the story line all alone, VIji was the one who inspired me.
It's alright dear, take your time. But I wait to hear from you!
You're welcome.
Love,
Sakura

Hello dear so viji was along wid u in this wow say her ya i really miss her unique titles:)

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Saku,

How do I even start - I simply loved it - from the title : First Call, a result of the numerous forgotten calls😊
Then Swara's conflict between her heart and mind, a sister she adores along with her family, who are convinced that the man her mind has fixed upon as a murderer is a part and cause of the picture perfect family she has. But her heart is no silent participant, once she hears his voice, it is as peace (symbolic that she closes the window to shut out the storm winds only after she hears his voice).

Ragini's introspection - a beautiful one especially when she dwells on her guilt and possible non-redemption of the heinous act she had committed by accusing Sanskaar of molesting her. (I hated it that no one held that against Ragini, including Swara - Swara could forgive anything Ragini did to her but how could she forgive an accusation like that😡).
And so when Sanskaar extended his hand of friendship, she did take it. I so hope that this leads to a proper redemption and a possible future friendship (I am a great fan of the RagSan friendship😊).

I wonder what Chapter 1 would be titled - just let it be soon.

love,
Nyna

And the cosmic connect: When Sanskaar says, I was thinking of you, and like always you called.

<<Sanskaar & Swara>>

Dearest Nyna,

Oh those emoticons made my day, grinning Sanskar and grimacing Swara😆

Thank you so much for the sweet words dear, they just made me feel really floating on the clouds!

I did want to portray a battle of heart against mind, we didn't see that much in the serial. And yes, her heart is finally at peace and she shuts the disturbances away for the night, while closing the door. I think in her entire life Swara is hunting after peace, so is Sanskar when you take it that way, but only with each other they find it. It's so poignant to think that way.

As for Ragini, I do plan of clearing her image a little. Veyr true, they should have addressed it, is what I felt as well. But well, they did not. We still can, in the ff universe. I don't believe Sanskar Ragini friendship can develop unless they address and move on from that dark memory, there has to be some stains left. Glad you liked it the way I put it through.

Chapter one is First Eye Lock😳

It will be updated shortly.

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose
What a fabulous prologue ,loved it alot 😳

Hi dear,

Long time no see!

So glad you liked it. Thank you so much😃

Love,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: lucky.m
awesome start saku 🤗🤗
So the awesome two some will be working together, I always felt if there's any one who can work perfect as team it would be sanskaar and ragini not the behenas with that ear bleeding music BG😆😆

Double agent ragini ..I love it and Love how you brought up point of ragini thinking of accusing of molestation which we would never get to see in original 👏⭐️thumps up for that👍🏼

the scene b/w swara and sanskaar is just something which I have been dying to watch and thank god she didnt say khooni, whenever swara says that my heart aches and next reaction is will you stop saying that for god sakes😡😡at least she does a bit of introspection here and sanskaar likes always 😳 I love him bas❤️

hmm great start saku cant wait to have the cake and eat it too😉😆, In your wordsits going to be extra delicious and all thanks to viji😉

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Lucky

Lucky🤗

Yep, very true. Sanskar Ragini is the best team SR ever came up with. The beauty and brains in both of them😳

I had to bring up that point dear. That is the truth of their dynamics, we have to move past it to form any kind of cordial relationship.

I know, when she says that word, it sort of stabs my heart too. She was too shocked to say it anyway. Sanskar😳😳 When isn't he lovable?

Thank you dear. I so hope you will like the cake treat in future too. Let's see where this takes us. And second that, Viji is a great soul😃

Love,

Sakura