Beautiful Scars SwaSan SS chapter 6 updated page 1 (16/10/05)

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isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Hey saku dear

Prologue is awesome

Can see old rag...san back ...really once i used to adore their frnship...waitinh for more...

Love

Ishita

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Sree

@Sree8410

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Saku,

Dear new SS😲. Res now.

Sree

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Razia Ajmal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Hey saku wow another story...amazing start really loving the daily updates on the show and know this...

What can is say love the start and the conflict of.emotions..especially swara confusion between her head and heart...

Wow and sanskaar loved the sketch of his character too..seems him and ragani will be some pair...what a way to end the intro with a bang of a cliff hanger...

Buddy update soon..and yes please less of sahil would be nice...

Loved the picture and the prologue...I am sure like all.your stories this will also be a epic and a roller coast of a read...

Waiting already...

Razia

Ps hope exams went well...

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

res for prologue😊

Part unres - and what a delectable start. I love the premise of a Ragini Sanskaar friendship - my best-est-est pair😊

And Swara, feeling peace, reasons not yet identified (by her) after she hears his voice

Will unres of a more detailed comment🤗

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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piccola1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Love it Saku ! 👍🏼

Am smacking my lips in anticipation !😃...Nothing like a Sanskaar in business like devious 😉mode ..! Love the cleverness of getting Rags involved for playing the double agent...coz it IS true that she alone was the one person that duped Swara, not once but multiple times ! Atta boy!👏

Ragz true redemption is something we all have been waiting for and will never get on screen..so this one promises to go some way in closing that much needed gap.

I cant wait to have Saahil getting duped and then hit by the Sanskaar-Ragini (dont like Sangini) avalanche😃. I so want him smacked for having the gall to serenade a much married, much loved Swara 😡

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Saku ..finally caught one of your dexterous writings right from their inception , I know I haven't read your other masterpieces yet due to time constraint, apologizes for that and a sincere promise that I would definitely read them soon ..how can a swasan maniac and a person who gloats over exquisite literature miss out on such eloquently composed sheer brilliance?..well nah😉..I will start with vajra.

Coming to the prologue , like I told you before , you have an infallible talent of harmoniously blending beautiful prose with bewitching ideas and it all culminates into a vivid , ethereal delight.
I really appreciate the way you described the subtle emotions behind swara's every move and exhibition of even slight resistance to his advances by disconnecting his call was done with great effort and reluctance...something the show has so pathetically lacked!
The most appealing part was the contentment she ultimately derived ( but of course couldn't accord a reasonable source from where she mustered it)by mere hearing his voice and that too for a short span covered by only one or two words .
The conflict faced by her where her heart is irrationally but irrevocably conjoined to his , and like a strict martinet the brain constantly warns her to be wary of sanskar.

Sanskar ...well ..I think it has become superfluous now to mention him being completely perfect is any role destiny necessitates him to enact.
Will wait in anticipation to witness the wonders his plan is about to result in ..and I am sure this swasan #2 would incredibly supplement and complement the ever phenomenal, miraculous Swasan #1.

Mesmerizing prologue ..and will anxiously wait for the first part and yeah will start with vajra as well.
Excellent job!

love,
sanjana

Edited by sanjana_cool - 9 years ago

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@...Penknife...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Absolutely amazing start!!

Please please please send me a pm wine you update. I'm hooked already :')

Nandini

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Anusha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hi sakura dear:)
Aww u come up wid other beautiful story line,prologue seems interesting looking forward for chap1..nd i apologize for not commenting on vajra..
p.s:thanx for pm!!!!

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Nynaeve

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: Nynaeve
res for prologue😊
Part unres - and what a delectable start. I love the premise of a Ragini Sanskaar friendship - my best-est-est pair😊
And Swara, feeling peace, reasons not yet identified (by her) after she hears his voice

Will unres of a more detailed comment🤗

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Dear Saku,

How do I even start - I simply loved it - from the title : First Call, a result of the numerous forgotten calls😊

Then Swara's conflict between her heart and mind, a sister she adores along with her family, who are convinced that the man her mind has fixed upon as a murderer is a part and cause of the picture perfect family she has. But her heart is no silent participant, once she hears his voice, it is as peace (symbolic that she closes the window to shut out the storm winds only after she hears his voice).

Ragini's introspection - a beautiful one especially when she dwells on her guilt and possible non-redemption of the heinous act she had committed by accusing Sanskaar of molesting her. (I hated it that no one held that against Ragini, including Swara - Swara could forgive anything Ragini did to her but how could she forgive an accusation like that😡).

And so when Sanskaar extended his hand of friendship, she did take it. I so hope that this leads to a proper redemption and a possible future friendship (I am a great fan of the RagSan friendship😊).

I wonder what Chapter 1 would be titled - just let it be soon.

love,

Nyna

And the cosmic connect: When Sanskaar says, I was thinking of you, and like always you called.