SwaSan TS : The End Of Darkness {completed} - Page 5

Originally posted by: pakh

have read that aheli...thanks again...😳...will reply in detail as soon as I get time😃😃

Originally posted by: anjum78

Kirti...undoubtedly beautiful..

Jldi complete karo...i want intence conversation between so dat swara can also come out of her guilt..

I can totally imagine about their wedding part same going to happen in show also...just fingers crossed.

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Kirtu nice story beta 😃

Originally posted by: Apudeep

Ending is very nice kirtu 😊

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Dearest Kirti,🤗
Awesome update in the last part.👏 Emotional and touchy too.😭😳 Sujata and Swara's conversation was really emotional. Could feel the pain of Sujata, a mother, whose son was in immense pain.😭 Sanskar was behaving like a cute and brave boy in between them.😆 Swara was really feeling very guilty.😭 In SwaSan's room when Sanskar was telling Swara about how he passed his days when she was not there, how he remembered each and every words of Swara, it broke my heart.💔😭 Poor Swara couldn't take it any more. Her guilt was eating her up and she lost her consciousness.🥺That part was really showed the vulnerable state of Sanskar when he asked Swara about the awkwardness between them. At this Swara completely broke down coz she was feeling guilty of hurting Sanskar, for being the reason of his pain, though unknowingly.😭 And the way how Sanskar made her understand that it was not her fault, it was just amazing and so touching.😳 I really fell in love with Sanskar all over again.😉 Swara is really lucky to have Sanskar as her life partner.😃😳 Next was the turn of Sanskar. When Swara asked him to share his feelings, how he felt at that time, Sanskar completely broke down by crying his heart out, which he wanted to do all these months when Swara was not with him, but he was unable to do so.😭 Sanskar was really dead while being alive.😭 I loved that part when Swara also told Sanskar that even she could feel something strange when he went to visit Sahil's house coz their hearts r connected.😳 And when he was telling her about her and Sahil's bonding, how it killed him to see her with someone else, Sahil's backstabbing, it broke my heart and made me hate Sahil to the core..!!😡 Both Swara and Sanskar had a hearty and emotional conversation. Loved it.😳 But their kiss was something which was really needed at that time, through which they can pour their pain of being separated and their desire for each other.☺️ After all actions speak louder than words.😉 Sanskar wanting to sleep on her lap was so cute.😳 Morning scene was so beautiful. It was a role reversal for them.😆 Swara closing the curtains so that Sanskar's sleep doesn't get disturbed due to sun rays.😳 After he woke up, our naughty Sanskar was back to his form.😉 Awww!! Swara calling him cute, sweet, little boy...!!😆😳 And at the end when he filled Swara's maang with sindoor and made her wear the mangalsutra, and welcomed her back as "Mrs. Maheshwari", it was so heart touching.😳😳 (*khushi k aansoo*)😆😳
Loved this TS so much!!!!❤️
With love,
Aheli.

Originally posted by: pakh

Aheli dear🤗...first of all thanks for long and sweet comment 😳😳...I loved it😃😃

Sanskar tried to console both his mother and wife and somehow tried to hide his own pain.My heart is broken daily seeing sanskar in so much pain in show,so here I tried to show how he would have felt these many days😭😭...glad u liked the part where sanskar take her out of her guilt bcz there I did nothing else then just some dialogues so was really not sure of it😆😆...here more than anything else I wanted sasakr to share all his pain till now,how he felt and then atlast finding his hapiness with swara and get out of his past😊😊...he has suffered a lot in many ways and just sharing it and letting out of pain is sometimes only way to get out of it,same I did here😳😳...kiss...they were away from each other from so many days to make them so close it was only idea I had...though I really cant write such parts but tried😆😆...him sleeping on her lap..thanks fro finding it cute😳😳...and in morning wanted to show everything back to normal like it was before...😊... glad u liked the last part of mrs swara sanskar maheshwari...😳

U liked this TS ...thank u ...khooshi ke aansun😳😳

Originally posted by: Helee

kirtu main tujse badi naraz hoon but your story is so beautiful that I couldn't stop myself from commenting...

aage se dhyan rakhungi😆😆...thank u ...glad u found it beautiful😳

can i say thank u for granting my wish by showing swara guilty...and so guilty that she wasn't able to take it anymore... ( uff sadist me) all her thoughts action and reaction was shouting about her love and guilt...the whole chapter was reflecting swara's love for sanskar. ❤️

Love u baby...and I am sadist too😉...glad u could see swara's love for sansakr in this chapter,which I wanted to show,she loves sansakr as much as he does😳

sanskar to sanskar hi hai... he won't share his pain with her because she will feel guilty...the pain which was eating him alive...the pain no one knew or understand...the only person who could understand was finally there after months but he can't tell her because he doesn't want any more pain for her...there is nobody better than sanskar maheswari...!

For sansakr,things have gone now and he dint want to make swara sad by reminding the past as he knw how she is😳😳

I loved that he finally told her about his pain sorrow,jealousy ,anger ,frustration and helplessness...be it physically or emotionally...😭 only after taking promise that she will only listen and won't feel guilty.

He wanted to share his pain but at the same time make swara understand too that she was no way responsible for that😊😊

the kiss was much needed one after all this...and sleeping in her lap was cherry on the top...who says love needs to be wild it can be calm too...! this is love ❤️ eternal love...! so pure and perfect...this is why we know them as soulmates...and not as just lovers...

BOLD--can I say I love this line of yours,may be it perfectly defines what I wanted to show,and next lines too,their love is so pure and pious😳

cute little boy to woh hai hi...😳 loved the story so much...!

Ye baat toh hum sab besharam log bhi mantein hain😉😉

ghano badho prem, Helee.

lots of love back😳...sorry u know na maine abhi tak gujrati nahi sikhi hai

p.s - I cried again but this time with happiness. 😊

Originally posted by: Crisply

all 3 parts is amazing.

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Good..