SwaSan TS : The End Of Darkness {completed}

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Posted: 9 years ago
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kirtu... you know how much I was waiting for this story ( yes of course u do. πŸ˜† ) but me first res nai kar payi...πŸ˜”

anyway first thing first oh how much I loved this story... reading it feels like its raining after so long. swasan

she remembers him. and I just loved the whole repetition of sequence and I love the fact that swara reacted the same way as sanskar...!

just hug no I want full confrontation and guilty swara( I know she should not be guilty and it wasn't her faulr but I know her character and she will feel guilty)and some heart to heart conversation but we r getting in second part so will wait for it...

sanskar... isn't this the reason why we love him so much... n hates the character who hurts him. he is so pure...he forgives the guy who tried to kill him just because he had saved the life of his wife that's what I call true love. n respected his each line which he said to that jerk. n swara when I read those lines I was like mar Mar aur mar... πŸ˜‰ the last line was the glimpse of next part in which we will see swara's love.❀️ and swasan without kmh

I loved the story so much re but where is strangling 😑 that tucha jerk tu ne likha to hai but woh kabhi nahi sudhrega show me... that LLC🀬 how dare he come between swasan... how dare he tried to kill him? sir to phod diya mere sanskar ka... and I m so sure he will try to kill him in the show too... but he can get lost jab swasan sath ho to Hume kisi ki nahi padi.😳 once again beautiful storyπŸ€—

lots of love, nam to pata hi hai...🀣
Edited by Helee - 9 years ago
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Res
Dekh quick unres bhi hogaya 😎

Superb ts kirti πŸ‘
Loved it

Finally everything is happy finally sanskar gets successful in his mission 😳 and that bloody sahil 😑 kill him but beautifully written when swara thinks that she can loose her sanskar . And then that sahil 😑 ohgod he is impossible but finally sanskar got saved 😳

Then my most favourite part when swara beat sahil🀣 oh god i loved that scene was superb but sach sach bolna tune apna gussa nikala hai na uss sahil pe na πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

Then sanskar words to sahil that was awesome pure ideal husband type πŸ˜‰ then sahil left thank god πŸ˜† chalo all wells that ends well 😳

Awesome start kirti πŸ‘
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by Sujayricky - 9 years ago
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Res.
Unres.
Mindblowing Update Keertu.
Finally Swara got her Memory back.
Loved Sanskar's Determinations and attempts in bringing Swara's memory back.
Loved Swara's Fear of losing Her Sanskar whom she Loves the most in the world and loved the Hug wen she had seen Her Love safe in front of Her Eyes.
Loved how Swara had Hit Sahil black and blue wen he was going to kill Sanskar by Cutting the rope.
Sanskar's lines are so apt abt Swara how none can resist in falling in love wid her as she Spreads Happiness around Everyone making Swara think is she that much Lucky to get Loved by Person like Sankar.
Thank god tuney Sahil ko issi part mein bhagaa diya.
Waiting to see a Heart to Heart Conversation of SwaSan and Sanky bringing out Swara from Guilt Trip.
Thanks for the PM dear.
Edited by 92Sara - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helee

kirtu... you know how much I was waiting for this story ( yes of course u do. πŸ˜† ) but me first res nai kar payi...πŸ˜”

HeleeπŸ€—...pahle last line ka answer dekh meko naam acche se pata hai...bht acche seπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†...and offcourse I know u was waiting for it...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†...sorry if I dissappoint u

anyway first thing first oh how much I loved this story... reading it feels like its raining after so long. swasan

Reason is swara remebering sasnkar ,right...finally...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

she remembers him. and I just loved the whole repetition of sequence and I love the fact that swara reacted the same way as sanskar...!

In this whole sequence,just wanted to show that swara love sanskar as much as he loves her,hope I am successful.😳

just hug no I want full confrontation and guilty swara( I know she should not be guilty and it wasn't her faulr but I know her character and she will feel guilty)and some heart to heart conversation but we r getting in second part so will wait for it...

Dont worry hug abhi ke liye hai...next part me full confrontation milega...ekdum acche wala...hope so...I will be able to write...baki sab iss part me end karne ka try kiya taki next part me we can have swasan...😳😳

sanskar... isn't this the reason why we love him so much... n hates the character who hurts him. he is so pure...he forgives the guy who tried to kill him just because he had saved the life of his wife that's what I call true love. n respected his each line which he said to that jerk. n swara when I read those lines I was like mar Mar aur mar... πŸ˜‰ the last line was the glimpse of next part in which we will see swara's love.❀️ and swasan without kmh

I want to show my sanskar like this here,swara we say is forgiving and all ,now sanskar's turn,and here he knows u cant help falling in love so he understood sahil but and sahil too was sensing his mistakes so as swara does he gave him second chance.😳...which only make sansakr more lovable...hope its correct here😊

I loved the story so much re but where is strangling 😑 that tucha jerk tu ne likha to hai but woh kabhi nahi sudhrega show me... that LLC🀬 how dare he come between swasan... how dare he tried to kill him? sir to phod diya mere sanskar ka... and I m so sure he will try to kill him in the show too... but he can get lost jab swasan sath ho to Hume kisi ki nahi padi.😳 once again beautiful storyπŸ€—

Strangling...sorry could not do this...jyada over ho jata na...dont worry hum imagine karte rahenge...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰...slaps and uska head pe injury kafi thiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†...and about him being good I know not possible in show but here showing him positive I did what I wanted to do with sanskar...making him more understanding so not at loss we are I thinkπŸ˜†...otherwise he would go to jail and nothing new...I could give those lines to sansakr due to thisπŸ˜†πŸ˜³
lots of love, nam to pata hi hai...🀣

Helee dear...replied above...thank u for the beautiful comment and dont worry u will get swasan in next part...and swara will feel guilty and what happens next ...lets see😳😳
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Res
Dekh quick unres bhi hogaya 😎

😲😲😲😲😲...maine soch liya tha teen char din baad unres hoga...tab kahin reply karne ko milega.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Superb ts kirti πŸ‘
Loved it

Thank u sujay😳

Finally everything is happy finally sanskar gets successful in his mission 😳 and that bloody sahil 😑 kill him but beautifully written when swara thinks that she can loose her sanskar . And then that sahil 😑 ohgod he is impossible but finally sanskar got saved 😳

Yeah finally swara got her memory back...sahil,I know that😑😑😑...but yeah sansakr got saved and I am happy u liked swara here😊😊

Then my most favourite part when swara beat sahil🀣 oh god i loved that scene was superb but sach sach bolna tune apna gussa nikala hai na uss sahil pe na πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜†

🀣...thats my favourite too...and haan maine apa gussa nikala...😈...aur bhi nikalti but yahi mujhe jyada laga...aur karti toh swara puri pagal lagti yahan pe...jo sayad abhi hi thodi lag rahi hogi.πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Then sanskar words to sahil that was awesome pure ideal husband type πŸ˜‰ then sahil left thank god πŸ˜† chalo all wells that ends well 😳

Thank u ...glad u liked sanskar's word...I wanted to show him understanding and as u said ideal human being😳😳...and finally kmh leftπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ...now swasan together😳😳

Awesome start kirti πŸ‘
Update soon

will try to update soon πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for pm

Sujay thanks for the beautiful comment...I am 😲 u unresed this much earlier but I liked itπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Good story Kirti πŸ˜ƒ
I loved the part when Swara was beating Sahil πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† . Also liked what Sanskaar said to Mr. Rockstar
Lovely story Kirti πŸ˜ƒ
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Lovely start waiting for part 2

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