SwaSan TS : The End Of Darkness {completed}

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AWESM_GAL

@AWESM_GAL

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Kirti...undoubtedly beautiful..

Jldi complete karo...i want intence conversation between so dat swara can also come out of her guilt..

I can totally imagine about their wedding part same going to happen in show also...just fingers crossed.

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pakh

@pakh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Completed ts😃😃

lappy battery 10% and power cut in my house...somehow updated it...pms and reply to comment later

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APUDEEP

@Apudip

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Ending is very nice kirtu 😊

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Dearest Kirti,🤗
Awesome update in the last part.👏 Emotional and touchy too.😭😳 Sujata and Swara's conversation was really emotional. Could feel the pain of Sujata, a mother, whose son was in immense pain.😭 Sanskar was behaving like a cute and brave boy in between them.😆 Swara was really feeling very guilty.😭 In SwaSan's room when Sanskar was telling Swara about how he passed his days when she was not there, how he remembered each and every words of Swara, it broke my heart.💔😭 Poor Swara couldn't take it any more. Her guilt was eating her up and she lost her consciousness.🥺That part was really showed the vulnerable state of Sanskar when he asked Swara about the awkwardness between them. At this Swara completely broke down coz she was feeling guilty of hurting Sanskar, for being the reason of his pain, though unknowingly.😭 And the way how Sanskar made her understand that it was not her fault, it was just amazing and so touching.😳 I really fell in love with Sanskar all over again.😉 Swara is really lucky to have Sanskar as her life partner.😃😳 Next was the turn of Sanskar. When Swara asked him to share his feelings, how he felt at that time, Sanskar completely broke down by crying his heart out, which he wanted to do all these months when Swara was not with him, but he was unable to do so.😭 Sanskar was really dead while being alive.😭 I loved that part when Swara also told Sanskar that even she could feel something strange when he went to visit Sahil's house coz their hearts r connected.😳 And when he was telling her about her and Sahil's bonding, how it killed him to see her with someone else, Sahil's backstabbing, it broke my heart and made me hate Sahil to the core..!!😡 Both Swara and Sanskar had a hearty and emotional conversation. Loved it.😳 But their kiss was something which was really needed at that time, through which they can pour their pain of being separated and their desire for each other.☺️ After all actions speak louder than words.😉 Sanskar wanting to sleep on her lap was so cute.😳 Morning scene was so beautiful. It was a role reversal for them.😆 Swara closing the curtains so that Sanskar's sleep doesn't get disturbed due to sun rays.😳 After he woke up, our naughty Sanskar was back to his form.😉 Awww!! Swara calling him cute, sweet, little boy...!!😆😳 And at the end when he filled Swara's maang with sindoor and made her wear the mangalsutra, and welcomed her back as "Mrs. Maheshwari", it was so heart touching.😳😳 (*khushi k aansoo*)😆😳
Loved this TS so much!!!!❤️
With love,
Aheli.

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

kirtu main tujse badi naraz hoon but your story is so beautiful that I couldn't stop myself from commenting...

can i say thank u for granting my wish by showing swara guilty...and so guilty that she wasn't able to take it anymore... ( uff sadist me) all her thoughts action and reaction was shouting about her love and guilt...the whole chapter was reflecting swara's love for sanskar. ❤️

sanskar to sanskar hi hai... he won't share his pain with her because she will feel guilty...the pain which was eating him alive...the pain no one knew or understand...the only person who could understand was finally there after months but he can't tell her because he doesn't want any more pain for her...there is nobody better than sanskar maheswari...!

I loved that he finally told her about his pain sorrow,jealousy ,anger ,frustration and helplessness...be it physically or emotionally...😭 only after taking promise that she will only listen and won't feel guilty.

the kiss was much needed one after all this...and sleeping in her lap was cherry on the top...who says love needs to be wild it can be calm too...! this is love ❤️ eternal love...! so pure and perfect...this is why we know them as soulmates...and not as just lovers...

cute little boy to woh hai hi...😳 loved the story so much...!

ghano badho prem, Helee.

p.s - I cried again but this time with happiness. 😊

Edited by Helee - 9 years ago

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mix_of_emotions

@mix_of_emotions

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Kirti u r such a beautiful writer.I read everything in one go n damn I cried with each update .I loved how u showed swasan relation here..sanky cried his heart out in front of her n slept with head in her lap.that day was supposed to be their suhagraat ..but they achieved way beyond it..I liked how sahil understood swasan relation I loved slaps too n she shot him ..awesome..I loved how swara was feeling guilty when she got to know how much she hurt her love unintentionally..

Very beautiful story..do write more baby

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pakh

@pakh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Thank u everybody for your precious comments.I have been busy earlier and now too busy for a day or two.Will be replying to your comments as soon as I get time.Thanks again for your precious comments.😳😳

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Kaveetha

@Kaveetha

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Awesome kirti.. Loved it... 😳

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Awesome end for awesome story kirti.. I just loved it... Dialogues were superb...

Mmmawh sissy...

Sorry for short comment... I'm sick..

With love...

Kam..

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Mindblowing Ts..
Beautifully written.. 👏

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