SwaSan OS: Unexpected Gifts - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
It was awesome heart warming hilarious OS shruti... I loved it a lot... If this happens in serial... I'll be very happy... Once again thank you soo much...

With love...

Kam...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful...The magic of the memory loss track had been portrayed lovingly...
Loved sanskaar understanding and the birthday gift was amazing...

Was in stiches each time I read that swara believed he would harm her...poor guy...I feel his pain. ...

Thanks for sharing raz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
uummaah!i love it.
Aww!so swara get 2 knw abt her marraige & family sent her 2 maheswari mansn.
Ahan!i so love it.
I wish ths hapn thn sahil ll nt get easy access thr.
Hope shomi do smthng lk ths.tho knw in serial swara ll nt get 2 knw she z marriad.bt lets see.
&staying with sanskar ll work lk catalyst.
So mrs.maheswari doing jasusi on mr.maheswari.nt bad.
Actually i wnt it,swara went MM kisivi bahane se,do jasusi on sanskar tht she saw him 2 shoot her yet y she z attractd 2 him?y her mind & heart saying diffrnt things?y ths blue rum attract her so much?y ths terrace try 2 remind her smthng?
I gonna lv it.
Ops!carried away.cming 2 story,
so once again swara fall 4 her sanskar's charm.
She z bothrd y her hubby didnt wish her bday?hmm!
Awwiee!so cutie gift.
&sanskar wishd her,she also cnt resist sanskar's advancs.infact she z lving it.
Lovey os.keep writing shru.
P.s-swara's accusatn kill sanskar literally bt sanskar ll nt give up.sanskar ll b happy tht his swara z alive bt also ll b heartbroken listening swara's accusatn.
m so loving ths.bt yet sad seeing sanskar in pain.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
This is so heart warming and beautiful 🤗love this OS Lanny please keep writing ! We need these type of stories to keep us going and be positive about the upcoming track ! I have been dreading next week when swara will accuse sanskar of being a murderer 💔
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Loved it.want something like this for the current track

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Awesm!! I knw its an OS but plz continue
Mayb a 3S
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Absolutely Delightful, droolworthy and truly declicious, Lanny. Loved it ! This one is straight from our day dreams of the ML track !
U've etched each character so brilliantly..Daadi'Ss rock hard stand (thankfully towards the right thing here😊), Suju's impatience with "pampered wives" 😆, Ragz being romantic (in her new avatar), Shomi being her usual Swasan shipping self 👏...its all perfectly put.

But the best of course are our lovely duo. Love Swara's confusion between her head (which reminds her he tried murdering her) and her heart (that pulls her to him, is delighted in his loving her so ardently😳 and feels hurt/anger at his "indifference") is superbly outlined. And Sanskaar is a delight..enigmatic, intelligently wooing his wife in all the right ways, and oh so happy to have her back in his life ! ⭐️

Superb tale - it made my day! And I wish we get some - even a teeny weeny bit - of it on screen..it will make my year ! 😃

Love ya for scripting a really heart-winning tale 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
awww its so adorable...! chocolates, puppies and lots of attraction I just loved it. swara and her detective giri. 😆 this is something she will obviously do but sanskar and his unconditional love and never to force attitude have won the swara's heart once and she will fall for him once again.

sanskar will be happy if he knows that his swara is alive. her existence is biggest source of his happiness.

I just loved that after thinking he is a murderer she want her attention when he is not giving.🤣 her mind can forget him but her heart and her soul never. ❤️ I just loved the conflict between her mind and heart.

once again a beautiful os. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Lanny 🤗
A biggg hug to you for this!! I love it soo much!!
All my favourite elements in one OS.
Swara back to her fav job jasoosi!! You just cracked me up here man!! Outta everything, couldn't Swara forget her jasoosi 😆
Sanskaar is so patient and his behaviour is so moving!! My Sanskaar<3 Even Swara feels it but wouldn't give up her jasoosi 😆
What a birthday gift man?!! Is this guy for real? He is too perfect and just the one to die for! He gave her two white puppies...mummy!! Even I want them!! *makes a grumpy face and sulks* I'm a big dog lover and chhotu chhotu se puppies steal my heart away. I even picked a chhotu sa stray puppy from the road when his mum wasn't there and tickled him!!
And then chocolates!! Woah man, if somebody gives me this gift na, I would hug him and kiss him and much more...not that way 😉
Such a sweet and amazing OS!! Make more like this please...* hands folded*
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Such a Sweet and cute OS Lanny.
Haha Swara and her Jassosi to collect proofs against Sanskar and she is failing in that mission.
Loved Dadi in this OS for parceling Swara to her sasural wen she had protested she won't go and Shomi's emotional blackmail trick really worked here.
Everyone knows how much Sanskar loves Swara and he can't even bear a tiny scratch on her that's the reason Swara failed in her mission "Murderer".
The most cute part of this OS Sanky's gift to Swara Chocolates and Puppies and how excited she became and Swara's Cute anger wen Sanky did'nt wished her.
How much Swara ever tries to run away from Sanskar thinking him as a khooni Her Heart and Soul will always be pushing her towards Sanky.
Thanks for this beautiful OS.

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