raglak ss bol do na zara part 1 page 1

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Raglak ss

Part 1

Kolkata , 1990

Mubarak ho shekhar ji , beti hui hai ...said the doctor.

Shekhar was more than happy after the news.

Ab to rishta pakka na shekhar ...said DP hugging him.

S : haan haan DP hume yaad hai , hum bohat khush hai ,

Annapurna : hume toh pehle hi pata tha ki ladki hogi , ab humare laksh ki shaadi aapki beti ke saath hi hoga , kaash ye 20-23 saal jald se guzar jaaye .


DP: arre aap chinta mat kijiye yehi aapke ghar ki bahu banegi kyu Shekhar.

S : haan DP aur Annapurna zaroor.

A : waise bhaisahaab kya naam rakha hai aapne iska ?

S : iska naam hai ... RAGINI .

Waah kya naam hai , RAGINI , kitna pyaara lagega na RAGINI aur LAKSH said Annapurna.

INSIDE THE ROOM ( JANKI AND ANNAPURNA CONVO)


JANKI dekha humari murad puri hogai ...said ANNAPURNA.

Haan ANNAPURNA , hum aaj bahut khush hai hamare bacche saath mein padhenge , saath mein khelenge aur dono ki shaadi ek dusre se hoga ... Said JANKI eyeing 2 months old laksh and one day old ragini ...

Kolkata 2000,

Everyone was crying , it was a sad day for them ,ragini was crying the most, today was the day she lost her mother, laksh saw this and he came near ragini and kept consoling her , on the other hand annapurna was consoling swara , ragini younger sister , ( when ragini was four years old swara was born.), and DP on the other hand was consoling atharv (ragini's elder brother who is five years elder to ragini ), annapurna told laksh sanskaar and parineeta (annapurna and DP's children to go home and take atharv, ragini and swara along with them.).

Kolkata 2006

Everyone was happy as it was ragini's 16th birthday, Annapurna told laksh to gift ragini something special to which laksh made an irritated face .

L : maa maine aapse kitni baar kaha hai ki who sirf meri best friend hai aur kuch nahi , phir aap kyu chahti ho ki mein usse special feel karvau ...damn aap log nahi samajhte ho ,agar maine usse special feel karvaya toh usse aisa lagega ki main ussse pyaar karta hun ,and I don't want that, I don't like her in that way , , she loves me but I don't , I just like her as my bestie ...saying this he goes away.

Offo yeh laksh bhi na kuch bhi kehta hai ...saying this Annapurna goes away.

That's it for this part guys ...

The next update will be on 7th ...

In that we will have the marriage and ragini's pov .

character sketch coming soon

If I get good response then only I will continue it .

For pms buddy me .

Tamatar and chappals are most welcomed .

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cant wait to read the story
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Hi !! Can't wait to read this !! :D
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Awww!!<3. Banner is too cute... Those kids...❤️
Waiting for the update... 😳
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Nice banner
continue soon
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Originally posted by: sudhi03

Please update soon😃

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awesome plz continue.. really loved it 😳
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Originally posted by: MS.1988

awesome plz continue.. really loved it 😳

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Great update oh poor Ragini she loves him but he doesn't love her that is so sad I cannot wait to read what happens next
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Part 1 is nice...
So Laksh knows that Ragini loves him...
Hope Laksh doesn't end up loving Swara...😆


Nice update.. 😳

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