SwaSan FF : Misplaced Revenge Updated Chapter 7 P 12 ( 7/2/17) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dear Swathy,
The start is so intriguing and there are so many questions - it promises to be a great story. So Sanskaar presumes her (Swara?) dead but she is not - and she is now with Prem Kapur and Prateek - too many questions which I guess you would answer in subsequent chapters.

Do let me know when you update.

Best,
Nyna
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sree8410

Can't wait to read what happened.

Please PM me when you update next.

Love

Sree



Will PM you when i update dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Hey Swatz, how are you? Really nice start with this and so well written! Very intrigued to know how this unfolds, the emotions are coming across so strongly already:)

Will look out for more and if I take ages to comment, please bear with me- I am under lots of pressures and am hardly ever online too :)

Love,
Shru x


Hello shru😊
Thanks for reading 😳
happy to know that you like my first attempt in writing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Swatz!! The start is hell amazing!! You rock buddy! Would love to read more of it. Sanskaar misses Swara so much! Awww...and who is this Kabab Me Haddi??! Hatred at first sight!
Anyways, will comment on chapter two there!
Sakshi!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sarathy321

Hai Swathy

It is a nice ff with a different storyline
I wud like to read the next chapters also
Pls sent me pm if possible



Thanks for reading
I will try to update tomorrow 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UnRes quickely and let me know what you think
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Swathy,

The start is so intriguing and there are so many questions - it promises to be a great story. So Sanskaar presumes her (Swara?) dead but she is not - and she is now with Prem Kapur and Prateek - too many questions which I guess you would answer in subsequent chapters.

Do let me know when you update.

Best,
Nyna



hey Nyna
Thanks for reading 😳
You will come to know who they are quickly😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sakshi complete reading quickly and let me know what you think😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 2

"So Basu what did you find? Whose car was that?" Sanskar asked Basu." Mr Maheswari the car belongs to Mr Prem Kapoor. You might have heard of him. He is the owner of SP group of Companies," Basu said. "And" Sanskar asked.

Basu was a bit tensed while replying to Sansakar. "Well the thing is Mr Maheswari more details are not available on him. I am trying to dig out the details. But the issue is that he has just come to Kolkata from US. And his personal details are bit difficult to get at the moment.He came here He is actually new to the town. From what I came to know it might even be his first visit to Kolkata. And he has bought a mansion near kalibadi. When I make some progress I will contact you Sir." "When you make progress well you for a detective really lack in confidence Mr Basu. Well as I have no other option I will wait for your reports." He called his secretary after Basu left and asked her to cancel rest of his appointments for that day. He decided to visit the place where it all started.

Sanskar reached SnehSadan Orphanage by 5 pm. The children were playing in the playground after their evening tea. The boys called him to join in for their evening game of football. Usually he joined them but today he was too tensed to do anything. He walked along the ground towards the garden, towards the small pavilion. He had planted the rose bushes around it some years before along with Swara.It was her favourite spot. She usually taught music to the children sitting here.

It was in this orphanage at this very spot Swara saw him for the first time. He had just taken over the patronage of the orphanage and had come to visit it .Her music had called on to him. And he obeyed the call.

It was love at first sight for Swara. He was sure of that. Her blushed checks and sparkling eyes had told him that. And In the end he had exploited her innocence her love for him for his misplaced revenge. He regretted his action but was it too late. The girl he saw yesterday is she really Swara or had he now gone mad. He had prayed to the gods each and every day asking to bring her back to him. If she came in front of him now he will beg her to forgive him to take him back. To love him like before.

Prem was sitting in his study going through some files. He was feeling restless. Till now he was not sure if the decision to visit Kolkata was right or not. But Papa had insisted, he kept on saying that he wanted to be near were Maa. And there was no other ways but obey his wishes. He could never say no to him. He had asked Papa if it was wise knowing the past. But papa asked him to stop running from the past. It was easier said than being done. There were too many secrets buried here for him to be at ease.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update dear
So..swara was very much in love with sanskaar but he jist used it for his revenge ..poor swara
Waiting for next update
Pls give us a more longer update..pls

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