Saku dearš¤
hope you are fine. š first of all congratulations for a new thread of this marvellous story. š¤ a short comment as still busy with exams. I so miss reading stories of you all awesome writers. but yeah! its my countinuing one and so hard to resist. and I have to appreciate you and your penning skills yaar!
awesome writer you are! š each chapter so intriguing, some revelation and more suspense, not any loose end in such neatly interwoven storyline of many threads, written beautifully even a minute detail, Awesome Saku! really good. š
I am liking Swasan and their moments so much. and of course didaa and mohan too. man!! he knows so much!! so knowledge and love for Swara's mother, err! still why didn't she got impressed by him!!????? š khair...
and yeah! I love to read Sanskaar's childhood memories and specially with his patents one. so pure and full of love.. š and
mohan and Swara one too. š I can imagine the expression of mohan's face when lil Swara couldn't find nonexisting or not existing there flower. š
and Sanskaar really grew up in an awesome person and as a responsible, understanding and perfect king despite such hardship in small age. š hope, now he will see Annapoorna's truth as she hid lakshya's details. though deep down , I guess, he knows not to trust her. and I love his resolve in current chapter. š
when all knows sambhana withches are eye of vajra, still pratula didn't know, how??? and so cruel that ritual is. now I think time to end this ritual has come though if Sanskaar will marry Swara, she doesn't have to go through this one par itnaa time bhi nahin hogaa in donon me pass. š
and am I right?, Sanskaar didn't take Swara immediately to vajrateertha because he wanted to observe her while utilising this time in saving parineeta or vice versa. err! does Swara know they both are getting married but fake one.
and awesome Saku! those Swards and names, so good. ek yaa baaki ki donon Swara ke pass hai kyaa? š
and something made Suvaanaa realises worth of life, its her love for lakshya???
by the way, he seems genuine in childhood though now lakshya's tall claim of love will go down drain kyaa! guy doesn't have any idea in front of whom he is confessing. š
Sanskaar will beat your err.. you with Aithne , got it. š
and I still didn't get *sowwy* how Annapoornaa know already that Swara is Sanskaar's Lumiere. ( as vile lady was planning from when she entered as queen, I guess, that is why lil Swara predicted the battle. ) if she had planned all this then what would happen when Sanskaar wouldn't fall in love with Swara, as you can't force anyone to fall in love like Swara's mother didn't fall in love with mohan's pure love or there isn't any guarantee that person one claim to love is their lumeire? I am still confused.š and am I making sense??? š hope, you got my point Saku. š
by the way, now I got Annapoornaa's rest of plan, eye's matter is for the distracting Sanskaar from kingdom's matters then Sanskaar's will bring her to kingdom and she will snatch her Lumiere. ek teer se do nishaane type..
I am so waiting for next updates with so much anxiety and excitement. in prologue, Sanskaar is in 2 places at a time or it is in his mind or he created illusion. or ...
and there are many more points I had to share but ermm.. you update and I will read. š
and A short comment 𤣠though it doesn't come in awesome category but hope, you find this comment satisfying. ignore typos and grammatical errors. š
Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago