Vajra an elven tale SwaSan T2 chapter 15 updated page 1 - Page 7

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Banjaaran25 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Tada😳.
Stalker alert!šŸ˜†

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wah wah wah wait what does they they do to the eye😲 it made me so scared 😲 😲 I thought there was word called cruelty but what they does there is no words for that to describe because it was much more beyond than cruelty their doing makes the word cruelty seem small
Yes sanskar is betraying swara he is using her as a pawn maybe a sacrificial lamb but that was because he didn't know what Annapurna is planning with her and he thought she betrayed them sanskar's misunderstanding got clear now he will not let anyone harm her he is ready to kill or die to protect her

it felt a bit weird when there was a line that sanskar can realise when someone lies or when someone is telling truth then why had he never got a inkling of feeling about AP's lies and facades yes I know I know I know that she is way too smart in hiding her dangerous evil plans but still this is sanskar we are talking about and sanskar can control peoples mind still he never felt the darkness in laksh which are getting more and more deeper and deeper ap i understand she is much more older and much more owerful but laksh him blindly believing or say being blinded by the brotherly love that is unlike the sharp powerful strong vajra Prince we have come to know till now that is still the 15 year old sanskar who is angry with swara for separating him from his brother who was unknown to darkness the manipulations till kavita's death yes it is true that now he decided that he can't let ap do what she is planning to do with swara but now it has been quite late now I fear someone will hand swara over there are many people who can do that and it will be only swasan who are going to suffer in the end that too badly he is getting more and more trapped in a spell with swara that creates fires he is going burn both of them In his own created ( atleast to some extent ) spell

Suvanna I am getting more and more fascinated by her hats off to you for creating such a wonderful character šŸ‘šŸ‘ šŸ‘ truly wonderful šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘


So "power cannot do everything " this means sanskar won't be able to stop it by power " when power doesn't work there are other things which can work " I think we know what can stop it from happening i guessed what is the other thing that will work where power doesnt work but how will that work that is the question

Please update soon the story is getting more and more thrilling with each update and the wait is getting more and more harder with each update
Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Thank you dear for the wonderful chapter. I was so engrossed that I felt it got over too soon. I know how much hardwork you put into each chapter but greedy me always wish for lengthy never ending ones.
The twist was a shocker. I was wondering if sanskar had managed to wipe of lakshyas memories then how will the prlogue part come into play( I have read the prologue umpteen times and each time the excitement for the events to unfold doubles) I might sound like a sadist to wish for a fight between two brothers for their love but the prize is so precious and worth the fight. So was immensely relieved to know sanskar was unsuccessful.
I have always loved stories within stories and hence blind assassin is my all time favorite fiction and I guess that's why vajra is so special to me.
Waiting for the next part
Love, veena
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
REs for 15 - will unres hopefully in the near future (I think I will break all records for my tardiness this time😭)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Saku dearšŸ¤—
hope you are fine. 😊 first of all congratulations for a new thread of this marvellous story. šŸ¤— a short comment as still busy with exams. I so miss reading stories of you all awesome writers. but yeah! its my countinuing one and so hard to resist. and I have to appreciate you and your penning skills yaar!
awesome writer you are! šŸ‘ each chapter so intriguing, some revelation and more suspense, not any loose end in such neatly interwoven storyline of many threads, written beautifully even a minute detail, Awesome Saku! really good. šŸ‘
I am liking Swasan and their moments so much. and of course didaa and mohan too. man!! he knows so much!! so knowledge and love for Swara's mother, err! still why didn't she got impressed by him!!????? šŸ˜› khair...
and yeah! I love to read Sanskaar's childhood memories and specially with his patents one. so pure and full of love.. 😊 and

mohan and Swara one too. 😊 I can imagine the expression of mohan's face when lil Swara couldn't find nonexisting or not existing there flower. šŸ˜›
and Sanskaar really grew up in an awesome person and as a responsible, understanding and perfect king despite such hardship in small age. 😊 hope, now he will see Annapoorna's truth as she hid lakshya's details. though deep down , I guess, he knows not to trust her. and I love his resolve in current chapter. 😃
when all knows sambhana withches are eye of vajra, still pratula didn't know, how??? and so cruel that ritual is. now I think time to end this ritual has come though if Sanskaar will marry Swara, she doesn't have to go through this one par itnaa time bhi nahin hogaa in donon me pass. šŸ˜›
and am I right?, Sanskaar didn't take Swara immediately to vajrateertha because he wanted to observe her while utilising this time in saving parineeta or vice versa. err! does Swara know they both are getting married but fake one.
and awesome Saku! those Swards and names, so good. ek yaa baaki ki donon Swara ke pass hai kyaa? šŸ˜›
and something made Suvaanaa realises worth of life, its her love for lakshya???
by the way, he seems genuine in childhood though now lakshya's tall claim of love will go down drain kyaa! guy doesn't have any idea in front of whom he is confessing. 😈
Sanskaar will beat your err.. you with Aithne , got it. 😈
and I still didn't get *sowwy* how Annapoornaa know already that Swara is Sanskaar's Lumiere. ( as vile lady was planning from when she entered as queen, I guess, that is why lil Swara predicted the battle. ) if she had planned all this then what would happen when Sanskaar wouldn't fall in love with Swara, as you can't force anyone to fall in love like Swara's mother didn't fall in love with mohan's pure love or there isn't any guarantee that person one claim to love is their lumeire? I am still confused.šŸ˜• and am I making sense??? šŸ˜† hope, you got my point Saku. šŸ˜›
by the way, now I got Annapoornaa's rest of plan, eye's matter is for the distracting Sanskaar from kingdom's matters then Sanskaar's will bring her to kingdom and she will snatch her Lumiere. ek teer se do nishaane type..
I am so waiting for next updates with so much anxiety and excitement. in prologue, Sanskaar is in 2 places at a time or it is in his mind or he created illusion. or ...
and there are many more points I had to share but ermm.. you update and I will read. šŸ˜†
and A short comment 🤣 though it doesn't come in awesome category but hope, you find this comment satisfying. ignore typos and grammatical errors. 😊



Edited by TRPS - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
I'm taking the risk of 'res-ing' here.

I really do not know when ill be able to make up to it.. but i will ..

PS : You have the permission to keep reminding me ,even annoyingly so.

PPS : I'm lost here. looks like i have to read with that guide in one hand 😲
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bennetlizzy

I'm taking the risk of 'res-ing' here.

I really do not know when ill be able to make up to it.. but i will ..

PS : You have the permission to keep reminding me ,even annoyingly so.

PPS : I'm lost here. looks like i have to read with that guide in one hand 😲


Hi Nalini,
So good to see you. Yes, I guess the plot is thick now, you might need to refer the guide :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucky.m

Res šŸ˜› I have been waiting for this saku


Un res

SakušŸ¤—šŸ¤—

Mohan taught sanskaar 😲😲..wow that was a revelation . Was it mentioned before,? If yes ..Did I miss it out and struggle of sanskaar is always fun to read yeah I am sounding sadist nowšŸ˜†..but here his absolute resolve to protect swara from being handed over to those shambhava priestess..Thats what makes him yuv raaj.😳.My absolute fav part in whole updatešŸ˜³šŸ‘

..but It was scary yaar what they were doing to that girlšŸ˜•

and laksh and sanskaar ..I dont understand on one hand laksh claims to love her.. and on other hand he dont mind getting her back to his mother, I assume he has no clue what his mom is planning to do with swara. and laksh told sanskaar he like hers/loves her ..so how is this going to impact future interactions of yuvraaj and swara

..I am so so looking forward to see that strong pull of yuvraaj towards his Lumiere, his fight, conflict of feelings for swara..are we going get few of those moments

and suvanna .It was kind of relief to see that she saved that kid she's still has some light left in her and Is she also on love with laksh or she is just behind him to get down to yuvraaj?? and now ragnin knows that she was under misconception that laksh loves her ..with that gone is ragini going to get dangerous for swara . Swara already has so many dangers lurking around her ..but I place mt trust on yuvraaj šŸ˜‰

waiting for next update ..I totally get yoy are working on beautiful scars working on both of then can be too tiring ..but I am bit biased towards vajra..šŸ˜‰šŸ˜³ So I will be waiting for next update..will know it will be totally worth the wait just like this update and sorry about late in un res

Intriguing like always and leaving us wanting morešŸ‘šŸ‘ā­ļø

Love
Lucky


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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
@Lucky,
Lakshya doesn't know Janki Gadodia he "thinks" he is in love with is Swara the eye...that's why he has no problem of the eye going to Vajrateerta cause he doesn't realize it's her. Typical Lakshya :P
I will update Vajra soon dear, but my studies are tightening around my throat nowadays, so it'll be late...I promise to make up to it, somehow.
Will reply in detail soon :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Saku how are you dear.. Here your addicted but MIA fan of Vajra..Dont think i didnt read your latest updates, i did and really loved it as well but been a little busy that i havent able to comment..Sorry about that dear.. I am just letting you know i really loved reading it ,and i am going to go on a rereading spree once i get some time as well and i also letting you know i am still patiently waiting for the next update..Take your time though ..I dont want you to overwork yourself

Love

Nita

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