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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: akanjli
Sakura , congratulations on thread 2🥳and I hope on many more to come..
Will be waiting for your updates.😊

-Ahana

P.S. I was jumping up and down when I saw there are many more chapters to come😃 and this is not ending any time soon. My selfish self😆😆

Thank you Ahana.

It's so good to know someone was jumping in joy😆 Oh yeah, we will at least have one more thread to go😉

LOve,

Sakura

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Congrats of second thread saku🤗🤗😊

Thanks Lucky🤗😊

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lucky.m

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Can I reply here ..I see I am first ..I thought I was late ..Am I missing something

Saku🤗🤗

So many shocks at once

I mean mohan , King of Vajra and rishi agarwal..and Arya ..Mohan and Vajra Loved Arya ya phir Itw as just a mere proposal from his side and Arya loved this rishi agarwal and he married her for some kind of Study ??..Is he alive dead or is he going to make an entry ?

Laksh knows and remembers sanskaar😲😲 ..God! annapoorna This lady is far more evil than I thought .So did she send both laksh and sanskaar to get Swara and she wants to turn them against each other swara being bone of contention ? Am I right or is there something more to it??

So Now Swara and sanskaar are part of pari's eloping plan with adarsh. They will get more time together and does swara know its adarsh?? and are pari's dad and rishi agarwal related some how ??

and My fav like always ..breach of lines letting down of walls.Its was fun to watch yuvraaj battling with his emotions and finally giving up .Both have their own demons to fight within yet like yuvraaj thought together they would be whole😳..Beautifully penned down👏⭐️

and that visions one of sanskaar getting shot ?? 😲 tats while they are on cruise?? and the other one which they both shared ,both intriguing like always👍🏼

Great start for thread saku with an awesome update..thanks for some revelations and questions ..hmm like always I will have plenty😆

Love

Lucky

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

😊

Originally posted by: lucky.m
Can I reply here ..I see I am first ..I thought I was late ..Am I missing something
Ermmm...Yaar Lucky you are missing something, there were some five to seven people commenting on page 4 and 5, I'm late in replying that's why those thread opening posts are replied here😊
Saku🤗🤗
Lucky!🤗
So many shocks at once

I mean mohan , King of Vajra and rishi agarwal..and Arya ..Mohan and Vajra Loved Arya ya phir Itw as just a mere proposal from his side and Arya loved this rishi agarwal and he married her for some kind of Study ??..Is he alive dead or is he going to make an entry ?
Rishi is very much alive😳
Laksh knows and remembers sanskaar😲😲 ..God! annapoorna This lady is far more evil than I thought .So did she send both laksh and sanskaar to get Swara and she wants to turn them against each other swara being bone of contention ? Am I right or is there something more to it??
Or there's more, you'll know soon. I won;t make it that easy now, will I?😉
So Now Swara and sanskaar are part of pari's eloping plan with adarsh. They will get more time together and does swara know its adarsh?? and are pari's dad and rishi agarwal related some how ??
Yes, they are going to help her. Let's see if this really helps or adds to the troubles😉 No, Swara doesn't know its Adarsh yet, but she will soon. THe Both are same person dear, I thought it was obvious😕😳😊
and My fav like always ..breach of lines letting down of walls.Its was fun to watch yuvraaj battling with his emotions and finally giving up .Both have their own demons to fight within yet like yuvraaj thought together they would be whole😳..Beautifully penned down👏⭐️
Thank you😳😳
and that visions one of sanskaar getting shot ?? 😲 tats while they are on cruise?? and the other one which they both shared ,both intriguing like always👍🏼
Yes the shooting vision will come true soon😊 Thanks again!😳
Great start for thread saku with an awesome update..thanks for some revelations and questions ..hmm like always I will have plenty😆

Love
Lucky

Well ask away all the questions dearest. The thread will reach good numbers and I will be so happy😉

Thanks a lot for this lovely comment. I just hope the thread continues to be interesting. Replied in purple above😳😳

Love,

Saku

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Saku dear

I am terribly behind in comments, and am conscious of it. I have read up to 13 and loved it. I will be finishing DK this weekend and then will come back to share my gushing. Sorry about this in the meantime 🤗

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Saku dear
I am terribly behind in comments, and am conscious of it. I have read up to 13 and loved it. I will be finishing DK this weekend and then will come back to share my gushing. Sorry about this in the meantime 🤗

Dearest Shru,
🤗
Please don't embarrass me by reminding how behind in comments I am on DK, that absolute awesomeness had left me speechless and I am yet to comment on the finale.😳😳 Please take all the time you need. Will wait to hear from you. 😃

Love,
Saku

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kamila.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Congratulations for thread two.. Even I'm not following this story(soon will).. I want to wish.. My saku... Your hard work and brilliance will speak for years... May God bless you dear...

With love...

Kam..

PS :- I know I'm late..not that late... 🤗 .. I'm following your stories from the very beginning of ice king... I love all your work... I know I'm way behind in reading bending stories of yours... Thanks for bearing me...

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Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Congrats on the new thread I wish more new threads keep coming may you keep writing more and more new new amazing stories

You really have perfect way with lines "when lines are broken did it really matter how many , how perfect was the illusion which fooled him into thinking she is perfect and happy, it felt oddly comforting to think she was as broken as he was and yet it felt they together make the whole " how amazing those lines are👏 👏 👏 👏

I was just completely bowled over by this chapter till now they were fighting with their pains alone but now they have each other unknowingly or unintentionally they started fighting together

Sanskar's inner turmoil was so perfectly shown here it was just so real

Just wow👏 👏 👏 👏

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akanjli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: akanjli
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Hey Sakura...🤗

It felt like eternity since you updated. It felt really nice to see a PM notification in my email box😊. And Ahh this chapter.😃😃.. The wait did pay off.😃

ArHan. I missed them.😭 And although Mohan was not actually present there , it just felt good to have these characters back. So Asanibhavan is the queen's palace ? Ram is intriguing. The only things I got from their conversations was that they are supposed to marry , he knows that she loves other and that he prefers Mohan for her. Yeaah , another ArHan shipper...😃😃

So did the Vajra already had some doubts regarding Mr.Agrawal ? 😕Because he tells her to choose Mohan. And why is he so sure that she would never choose the latter ? Did the Vajra ever meet Mr.Agrawal? And how come Arya never had any visions regarding her future with Agrawal ?😕😆

I remembered that dream Mohan had. Where he sees Arya waiting for him. And she tells him that it is not the time yet. So will she finally accept him ?

So Mr.Agrawal fooled Arya. I cannot get my head around the fact that how such a mighty princess was tamed ...

So Mr.Agrawal , the one who has Pari in his hold is Swara's father. The mad scientist. Does by any chance Sanskaar knows about this..

And does Pari remembers her Elven life ?

So Annapurna goes to the now unoccupied palace . But why ? And her flashbacks..

The party was for the Vajra and Aruna's wedding. And from what I understand (I hope I am not confused) Annapurna was to marry the crown prince. Then I thought that Devi Nanda is alive. Her husband dead. So that means that the first born died. And is it important for the Vajra to be the king of Vajrareeta or any other kingdom ? If not then , the one who Annapurna loved was Ram's elder brother na.? And she said Mohan that she will take revenge. So was by any chance was the elder was killed so that the younger , the vajra, could be protected ?

Are they even step brothers , or cousins😆 ( Sanskaar and Lakshya ) ? So in the end Annapurna had to marry Ram...

And ofcourse Laksh remembers. I knew it. He looked too innocent in this chess of shrewd , clever people. He needs to have a game of his own but currently he looks like a mere pawn.

Annapurna had send her son there , but why ? To bring the eye ? To betray her by making her fall for laksh ? So is Laksh really in love or is he pretending ? Laksh thinks he is working for his brother but that is not the case. Looks like I will have to wait some more.

And and , How come Annapurna knows that Swara is Sanskaar's lumiere ? I mean , it's about a person , who the person's heart chooses. How can she know it ? Powers ?

After all you did say that losing one's lumiere can tend the person to take dark route. Annapurna has lost it already. She wants Sanskaar to suffer. How did Mohan gather himself when Arya died?

And finally all those SwaSan scenes.😊... They were beautiful, magnetic , enchanting...

You make me fall in love with this Prince again and again😳. What will I do when he actually will be in love ??? And I do prefer Princes over Kings. I don't know , maybe Prince sounds better.❤️.

The way you potrayed his emotional battle was brilliant👏. His need , wants , desires are getting a hold on him. And he will eventually allow them to consume him whole , afterall everyone in this world wants a little peace , everyone has own dreams. He is burdened and Swara will just be there to help him. I wish I could see a visual of this scene😆... Him being jealous of her , breaking those boundaries , tearing down his own walls, it was all too overwhelmingly nice.

I personally loved the scene where he shared her pain , where he thought that is he that bad as Swara thinks him to be ,where he hugged her , when he became his true self just like his eyes.

Will they wake up together😆😉 ? Will Swara remember his green eyes ? Will she remember everything ? I fear that when she will realize who he his , she will react badly and I am already dreading it , but the confrontation after that will be something I will wait for. Because intese ,angsty scenes are my final favourites..

P.S. I love jealous Laksh. I like seeing him burn. Will wait for that also.

-Ahana

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: NitaReid
Congratz on Thread 2 Saku dear...I know i have yet to comment on the last update will do so once i come back from my trip .Till then as always i will be waiting for the next update on this new thread🤗 ..

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Nita

Thanks Nita dear🤗

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