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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello yaar goldie aww fab girl.do to busy work i didn't follow ur story frm last 4 update.read al 4parts in one go.lovely man swasan truly love eachother bt sanskar may betray swara for his so called behan ragini.looking forward for nxt update!!!!
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Hello Dear Readers...Sorry fr nt Posting Yesterday.N I knw Story is going Quite Slow n m Trying to Speed Up da Trck asap bt M Getting Some or the other Wrk n im dat m nt able to Concentrate...bt Will Try to Speed da Trck asap.So Kindly Keep Loving n Keep Supporting Me ..N Nw Here is the Next Lart..Do Read n Let Me knw hw u felt the Part is Today :)...

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Recap : Swara Dressed in Sanskaar's Gift,Sanskaar Mesmerized n SwaSan Romance...

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Love Ya Betrayal


PART 16


Next Day Evening..

The Another Day in SwaSan's Life Mumbai was Coming to An End..It was A Normal Evening Like anyother Day...Swara was in Her Room doing Her Office Wrk where as Sanskaar was in His Study doing His Office Wrk..While Both were Bzy in their Own Wrk,They Recieves A Call on their Respective Phones n Seeing da Number both of them Had Bright n A Missing Smile on their Faces n Soon Strtd Talking to The Respective Caller of their Phine...

Swara Swara's Convo


Swara : ( Happy n Picks da Call ) Hellooo Bhai..Hw r U ?? I m Missing U Soo Much.. ( Teary Eyes )

Laksh : Aww My Shona..I too Miss U..bt Y r u Soo Sad ?? U r gona Meet Me in 2 to 3 Dyz na..u r coming Bak na..den Y getting Sad ??

Swara : ( Wipes Her Tears ) Hmm.Yes u r Ryt..bt waise Bhai.. ( Excited ) I have An Exciting News to Share wid U ..or U cn say A Surprise fr U.. (.Giggles n Blushed )

As Swara was Taking wid Laksh, there in Study Sanskaar too was Talking wid Someone wid A Smile n Excitement on His Face..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Ohh Hello Laado..Hw r u ?? R u Taking ur Medicines on Time na ?? U knw U need A COMPLETE BED REST Ryt ?? ( Worried )

Ragini : ( Smiles ) Haa Bhai..M Fine..Dnt Worry..m taking My Medicines on Time n doing Complete Bed Rest..U knw na hw Kamla.Kaaki is ?? She is nt Letting Me do Any Wrk ..So u dnt Worry..U Concentrate on Ur Wrk fr wich u Went. .

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Strangely ) Yes Laado..I will do it..After all its da Most Imp Wrk i have to do ..n I Promise I will give U a Surprise aftrr Returning to U..( Smiles )

Ragini : ( Smiles ) Ok.Good..Accha Bye..Gtg..M in Shopping Mall doing some Shopping..will talk to U Later..

Sanskaar : Ohkk..Np..bt Do Take Care haa..dnt Stress ur self..its nt Good fr ur Health..Understood ??

Ragini : Offoo..Ok Bhai..dnt Worry nw Bye...Live U..

Sanskaar : Ok Bye..Love U too..

Soon Sanskaar n Ragini Cuts The Call n Swara n Laksh on The Other Hand were Still Talking to Eachother Laughing n Enjoying their Conversation..

Laksh : ( Smiles ) Ohh Really ??Surprise ?? N dat too frMe ?? Awsum..Amzing..wats it Shona ?? Tell na..i cnt Wait..

Swara : ( Laughs ) Ohh Come On Bhai..Its A SURPRISE...so Surprise ko Surprise hi rehne do.. ( Giggles )

Laksh : ( Pout Face ) Dats nt Fair Shona..u knw ki after Hearing da Word Surprise ..I cnt wait..den Y did U tell Me wen u dont wanna tell Me ??

Swara : ( Laughs ) Coz...Coz...( Smiles Naughtily )

Laksh : Coz kya Shona ??

Swara : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Coz I Like to IRRITATE U Alot ( Laughs ) Nw Bye...

Laksh : ( Fake Anger ) SHONA !!! U r Srsly Mad..Ok Bye..n waise bhi m in Shopping Mall..Attending a Meeting in da Cafe of that Mall..Talk to U Later..Bye n Take Care Shona..

Swara: Ok Bhai..Np..Bye..n U too Take Care...Love U ..

Laksh : ( Smiles ) Love U too Shona..

Soon Swara n Laksh too Cuts Their Call n Swara too got Bzy in Her Own Wrk Agn Thinking abt Sanskaar n Her Relationship while Blushing n Smiling...

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Kolkata

Royal Mall Palace

After Cutting the Call Laksh Strtd Moving towards the Cafe fr His Meeting n As He was Heading towards The Cafe His Feet Froze on da Spot He was Standing n was Admiring n Staring A Girl in Front of Him Shopping Dully wid Weakness n Sadness on Her Face.while He was Lost in His Own Thots Staring da Girl wid Emotional Feelings inside His Heart...

Laksh : ( Teary Eyes ) Akhir Agayi na Tum mere Saamne Ragini ?? Never thot we cud Meet agn after 2 Months..u used to Call Me Daily fr Updating Me abt OUR UNBRON CHILD wich is Growing inside U..bt Never Expected i cud see U n Our Baby like this...main chahke bhi cnt Forgive U Ragini..Coz wat u have Done wid My Shona na main nhi Bhula sakta..She myt Forgive U..bt Nt Me Ragini..M Sorry. ( Jerks His Thots n goes )

As Laksh was abt to Go Ragini Notices Laksh n Her State was da Same as it was of Laksh Few Minutes Before..Like Laksh She was too Frozen n was Numb at Her Spot n was Staring Laksh wid Teary Eyes n Forgiveness Feelings..

Ragini : ( Teary Eyes n Shocked) LAKSH !!..

As Ragini Called His Name,Laksh who was abt to go Heard His Name frm Ragini n He Unknowingly Turned Towards Her n Both Had A Emotional n A Painful Eye Lock Filled wid All Love n Pain wich They Missed n was Suffering frm..They Unknowingly Stepped towards Eachother wid A Feeling of Embracing Eachother Very Tightly n Affectionately..

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
Khoya khoya inn raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal har lamha
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khudh se yeh kehta rehta hoon
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya

As They Reached Near n Face to Face of Eachother Both Stared Eachother Passionately Yet their Eyes Filled wid Pain n Sorrow..After Staring Eachother Ragini who was Lost in Laksh's Eyes Broke Down n Apolozised to Laksh fr Her Deeds n was Regretting Very Badly where as Laksh was Fuming wid Anger n was nt able to Forgive Ragini even if He wants too..

Ragini : ( Teary Eyes n Heart Broken ) Lllaksshh.Mujhe Maaf kardo..Plzz..I knw ( Stammers ) I was Wrong..maine jo bhi kiya was Wrong..I Treated Shona ( Note Rag First Time Told Swara as Shona ) Very Badly..Alwyz Taunted Her Unnecessary..Bt Plzz Maaf kardo..m Regretting On My Deeds Laksh.. ( Cries n Hugs Laksh Tightly ) Plzz Forgive Me..I knw wat i have Done uske baad I cnt even Expect Forgiveness frm U nor frm Shona..lekin Phir bhi I m Aksing Forgiveness frm U..Plzz Laksh..u dnt knw after Leaving U n Our Home..in these Past 2 Months hw much i m Regretting n I Understood My Mistakes..Plzz Forgive Me na Laksh.. ( Release da Hug ) I Promise U Laksh i wont do anything Agnst Shona nw..Plzz Laksh ( Cries Bitterly )

Laksh who was Listening to Ragini was Also Crying n Wanted to Forgive n take Ragini in His Embrace bt Remembering abt Shona n da Tortures She has Suffered coz of Ragini..He was Unable to Forgive Her..

Laksh : ( Angry ) Listen Ragini..m nt all Interested ur Melo Drama..My Shona has Alrdy Suffered aloy coz of U..n nw i dnt wanna Hurt or take any Risk by Taking U bak..My Duty n Responsibility is Taking Care n Manage all da Expenses of U n Our Baby..dat i will do..I have No Prblm in taking All the Expenses of U..coz its My Duty n i will Fullfill it Honestly..bt other dan that i dnt wanna keeo any Relationship wid U..Sanjhi ?? Nw Excuse Me..I have an Imp Meeting to Attend..so mm Going.. ( Sees Kamla Kaki ) Kaki take Ragini Home..She needs Rest.. ( Stares Ragini Angrily n Goes )

Laksh in Anger after Scolding Ragini Left fr the Meeting Leaving Ragini Heart Broken n Shattered wich was seen by all the People Present in Mall...

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Mumbai

Maheshwari House

Its Dinner Time n Both Swara n Sanskaar after Talking wid Laksh n Ragini Respectively Came fr Dinner as it was Dinner Time..While Having Dinner Both The Love Birds were Having Under the Table Romance Chupke Chupke Hiding frm the Servants Present there wich Made Swara Lil Scared n Blushed..

Swara : ( Scared n Blushed ) Sanskaar..Plzz Leave..See Suresh is here only..He myt see..plzz Leave Me..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) No Meri Banderiya..hw cn i Leave U soo Easily..Badi Mushkil se Haath aayi ho..n Dnt Worry No one is Seeing Us..See A r Bzy in their Own Wrk..Suresh is Bzy in Serving Dinner, then Ramu Kaka is Bzy in His Own World..n rest Of the Servants r Bzy in Kitchen.. No One is Watching Us..So Chill My Banderiya.. ( Sees Swara's Expressions ) Dnt Believe Me ? Ok den Wait..Let Me Prove U..

Swara : ( Confused ) Prove ?? Bt hw ?? Hw will u Prove Me No one is Watching Us ?? ( Raised Her Eye Brow )

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) Aise ... ( Sees Suresh n Ramu Kaka n Swara is Shocked ) Suresh..Kaka..did U Notice anything Strange n Weird here while Me n Swara were Having Our Dinner ??

Suresh : ( Confused ) Strange ?? No Sir..nthing Strange We saw..U both were Having Dinner na..then Wats Strnage in dat.. ( To Ramu Kaka ) Hain na Kaka ??

Kaka : Haa Sanskaar Beta..Nthing Strange We saw..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily bt Pretends ) Ok Thnk U ..U both cn go n do ur Rest of the Wrk nw..We will Finish Our Dinner n Let u knw..

Suresh,Kaka : Ok Sir..

As soon as Serveants Left fr Kitchen..Sanskaar Turned towards Swara who was Looking at Him wid Wide Mouth Open along wid Her Eyes..Seeing Swara's Expressions Sanskaar Smiled n Shuts Swars Mouth by His Hand through Chin n Smiles Naughtily Winking at Her Making Swara More Shocked n Speechless..

Sanskaar : ( Sees Swara'sExpressions n Smiled Naughtily ) Dekha ( Closed Her Mouth ) Miss Banderiya..i told na No One has Seen anything...n Close Ur Mouth..warna Makhi ander Chalijayegi n will Eat all ur Eaten Food ( Giggles )

Swara : ( Shocked ) Sanskaar..hw Shamless u r ?? Hw cn U Ask Servants abt this..Wat if unhe Samajh aajata toh ??.( Angry )

Sanskaar : Aajaata toh Aajaata..Wats Wrong in that ?? They also knw ki We Love Eachother..So Y to Fear wen They knw abt Our Relationship..n waise bhi U see mny Bollywood Movies na n Un Movies main Ek Bahut Famous Lines hai..Pyaar Kiya Toh Darna Kya..we Love Eachother did nt Commit any Crime..Sanjhi Meri Pyaari Banderiya.. ( Kisses Her Cheeks Romantically n Naughtily )

Swara : ( Shocked n Numb ) Sanskaar. .Kya tha yeh ?? ( Rouches Her Cheeks while Blushing bt Composed ) U r Srsly Mad...m Going..Bye.. ( Fake Anger ) Good Night..

Seeing Swara Going to Her Room Sanskaar Smiled n He too Ran Behind Swara Ordering Servants to Clean the Table in A Bossy Tone ...

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Swara's Room

As Swara Entered Her Room n was abt To Close the Door in Anger n Blushness..Sanskaar Stopped da Door by Holding it n Came inside the Room n Bolt the Door while Staring Swara Naughtily making Swara Shocked n Breathing Heavily...

Swara : ( Blushes ) Sanskaar..wat r u doing ?? Its Quite Late..u should Go n Sleep..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles Naughtily ) M nt Feeling Sleepy Swara..so thot to Spend Some Time wid U ( Moves Towards Swara )

As Sanskaar Moves Towards Her in Slowly Yet Romantically,Swara Blushes n Moves Bak Wards while Breathing Heavily n Blushing...

Swara : ( Blushes ) Sanskaar Plzz..M Feeling Sleepy..U Go.. ( Moves Bak )

While Moving Bakwards Swara Hits Her Leg wid a Bed Corner n Fell On Bed Holding Sanskaar's Hands as Sanskaar had Forwaded His Hands to Help Swara frm Falling on Bed..bt b4 Swara cud Balance Herself Holding Sanskaar's Hands it was Late n both Swara n Sanskaar Fell on Bed wid Sanskaar on Top of Swara Pinning n Blocking Swara's Way through His Hands on Both Sides of Her..As they Fell on Bed Sanskaar who was on Top of Swara Mistakenly n Unknowingly Pecked b Touched Swara's Neck by His Lips Making Swara Shocked n Felt Like Current Passed through Her Spine at First wich later Turned into A Blushing Feeling making Her Two Cheeks Red as Tomato..

Tere Dar Pe Aake Tham Gaye
Naina Namaazi Bann Gaye
Ek Dooje Mein Yun Dhal Ke
Aashiqana Aayat Ban Gaye Main Aur Tum
Kaisi Dil Lagaai Kar Gaye
Rooh Ki Rubaai Bann Gaye
Khaali Khaali Dono Thhe Jo
Thoda Sa Dono Bhar Gaye Main Aur Tum
Chalo Ji Aaj Saaf Saaf Kehta Hoon
Itni Si Baat Hai Mujhe Tumse Pyar Hai...

Seeing Swara's Blushness Sanskaar Smiled Naughtily n Stared Swara n Swara too who Felt Sanskaar's Gaze on Her too Stared Sanskaar n was Lost in His Big n Brown Eyes Completely Forgotting Everything n the World..


Yunhi Nahi Main Tumpe Jaan Deta Hoon
Itni Si Baat Hai Mujhe Tumse Pyar Hai
Chalo Ji Aaj Saaf Saaf Kehta Hoon
Itni Si Baat Hai Mujhe Tumse Pyar Hai
Mujhe Tumse Pyaar Hai..
Lage Na Yeh Dhoop Zaroori
Lage Na Yeh Chaanv Zaroori
Milte Hain Ishq Zameen Par
Ab Do Hi Naam Zaroori Main Aur Tum
Apna Khuda Bhi Hoga
Apna Hi Rab Le Lenge
Khud Ki Bana Ke Duniya
Ye Zindagi Jee Lenge Main Aur Tum
Chalo Ji Aaj Saaf Saaf Kehta Hoon
Itni Si Baat Hai Mujhe Tumse Pyar Hai..

While Both Swara n Sanskaar were Lost in Eachother's Eyes Sanskaar Noticed A Hair Strand on Swara's Face Disturbing Her n seeing da Hair Strand Sanskaar Slowly Caresses Swara's Cheeks Romantically n Went Near The Hair n Tucked it Behind Her Ears making Swara to Breath Heavily n Blush More...Soon Sanskaar's Eyes Fell on Swara's Pink Rosy Lips wich were Bitten by Swara in Nervousness n Seeing Her Lips An Unknown Desire Rised in His Heart n Saw Swara's Eyes fr Permission..Seeing Sanskaar Staring Her Lips Swara Blushed as She Understood wats Coming Nxt to Her n Closed Her Eyes indicating A +ve Sign to Sanskaar..Soon their Lips Met Eachother n were Sucking n Biting Eachother's Lips Softly Yet Passionately..The Gentle n A Soft Kiss Later Turned into A Hungry n A Wild One making both of them Enjoy in Pleasure..

Ek Tum, Ek Main, Teeja Maangu Kya Khuda Se
Dil Doon, Jaan Doon, Kya Doon Itna Bata De
Tera Mera Rishta Hai Saanson Se Bhi Naazuk
Tum Sa, Hum Sa, Koi Duja Na Hoga Na Hua Re
Do Dil Sa Ik Seene Mein Hai Jaise Main Aur Tum
Ab Dono Hum Ik Jeene Mein Hain Jaise Main Aur Tum

As Time Passed Both Swara n Sanskaar Broke The Kiss as they were Out of Breathe n was Panting Heavily..Sanskaar who was Staring Swara Lovingly n was Going out of Control Strtd Leaning Towards Her fr Further Steps bt Seeing Swara Clutching His Shirt n Closing Her Eyes in Nervousness n Scardness Sanskaar Controlled Himself n Jst Kissed Her Forehead Lovingly n Went To His Room Wishing Swara Good Night n Assuring Her He wont Cross His Limits widout Her Concern...

Swara : ( Breathing Heavily n sees Sanskaar Coming Close to Her ) Sanskaarr.Plzz.. ( Nervous )

Sanskaar : ( Sees Swara's Expressions n Composed Himself n Kissed Her Forehead ) Its Ok Swara..Relax..i wont Cross My Limits unless U r Ready fr it..Dnt Worry..Relax n Good Night.

Swara : ( Shocked bt Proud of Sanskaar n Overwhelmed ) Sanskaar..

Sanskaar : Hmm..

Swara : ( Smiles ) Thnks Alot fr Understanding..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles too n Sits Near Swara while Kissing Her Forehead ) Come On Swara..Main nhi Samjhogs toh kaun samjhega tumhe..U Trust Me i wont Cross My Limits jab tak Tum nhi chahti..abb chalo ( Wipes Her Tears ) Wipe ur Tears n Sleep..its Quite Late n Phir Kal u have another Imp Meeting na .. n den We have a Party too ryt..So Sleep Fast ( Makes Swara Sleep Properly )

Swara : ( Smiles n Hugs Sanskaar Tightly wid a Snile ) Thnk U Soo Much ( Kisses Sanskaar's Cheeks ) Good Night..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Good Night..( Caresses Swara's Hairs )

Soon Sanskaar after Making Swara Sleep Peacefully Smiled Looking at Her Angelic n Innocence Face ..While Staring Sanskaar Kissed n Pecked Her Lips n Forehead Lightly n Switched Off The Room Lights n Went towards His Room to Sleep wid A Bright n A Happy Smile on His Thinking Only abt Swara n The Spcl Moments Spent Together..

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Precap : SwaSan in Party...

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Finally Guyz Done wid My Another Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :)...Do Leave ur Valuable Comments n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :). .

#Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago
SwaSan moments were teasing, cute, sweet and romantic.😳 And their kiss.☺️
RagLak moments were emotional... But Ragini deserves it for her evil deeds towards Swara.😡 She doesn't deserves Laksh's forgiveness until and unless Swara forgives her.
Sanskar should really know about what Ragini did with Swara. Really he should know it very soon...😭
Plzz update the next part soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Goldie.. Is Sanskaar planning to make Swara pregnant and leave her alone... Ohh my head is spinning..

Update soon...

With love..

Kam..
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update. 😊 oh god I think sanskar is playing a big and nasty game. hope I m wrong. can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Awesome update Goldie.. Is Sanskaar planning to make Swara pregnant and leave her alone... Ohh my head is spinning..

Update soon...

With love..

Kam..


Thnks alot :)..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Helee

awesome update. 😊 oh god I think sanskar is playing a big and nasty game. hope I m wrong. can't wait for the next chapter.


Thnks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

SwaSan moments were teasing, cute, sweet and romantic.😳 And their kiss.☺️
RagLak moments were emotional... But Ragini deserves it for her evil deeds towards Swara.😡 She doesn't deserves Laksh's forgiveness until and unless Swara forgives her.
Sanskar should really know about what Ragini did with Swara. Really he should know it very soon...😭
Plzz update the next part soon.😳 And thanks for the pm.😃


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
I dunno I feel there's still something wrong with Sanskaar!😕
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnks 😊

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