Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ] - Page 15

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!! Awesum update dear..
I knw u r vry angry on me...vry vry sry dear 4 nt able 2 commnt 4 last prts..actually i ws out of town..
Yesterday only i cme bck...frm.nw i will try max 2 commnt regularly..hope u understand dear...kaan pakadke sry...

Cuming 2 update..it ws fantastic...
Lvd it so much..it really rckd..seems lyk actual stry s gonna start now..it s gettin more interesting now...
Hahaha .swara s unblivble...kitna drama krthi he???
It ws awesum...hahaha...sanlak knws abt swara's plan..
Poor swara.usse kya pta uski saari kaarname sanlak jaante he phle... Laksh tellin abt their past lyf n swara's state..
Feelin really bad 4 swara..nw came 2 knw d exact reason of laksh's overprotective nature..
Swara need 2 go 2 shopping..sanlak s bsy...omg!! Ragini s gng vid swara.ab kya hoga swara ki???

Raglak talks ws fantastic..ragini s gettin more stubborn..
Laksh tryin 2 make her understnd...lekin usne thappad maarne klye jaa rhs tha..vo muje teek nhi laga...its my pov..
Ragini s plannin vry evily i think...poor swara...dnt knw wt gonna happen 2 swara..feeling vry scared..sach mein...
Rags s vry evil... Lekin agr swara ko kuch hua laksh pakka usse maaf nhi krega...hope she will realise dat..
Precap seems interesting...changin of 3 lives...
Do continue dear..waitin 4 nxt update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.šŸ‘
But I really don't know what is Ragini's problem?!😔
And OMG!!! What is she going to do with Swara that will change the lives of all the 4??šŸ˜•
Plzz update the next part soon.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Wow!!! Awesum update dear..

I knw u r vry angry on me...vry vry sry dear 4 nt able 2 commnt 4 last prts..actually i ws out of town..
Yesterday only i cme bck...frm.nw i will try max 2 commnt regularly..hope u understand dear...kaan pakadke sry...

Cuming 2 update..it ws fantastic...
Lvd it so much..it really rckd..seems lyk actual stry s gonna start now..it s gettin more interesting now...
Hahaha .swara s unblivble...kitna drama krthi he???
It ws awesum...hahaha...sanlak knws abt swara's plan..
Poor swara.usse kya pta uski saari kaarname sanlak jaante he phle... Laksh tellin abt their past lyf n swara's state..
Feelin really bad 4 swara..nw came 2 knw d exact reason of laksh's overprotective nature..
Swara need 2 go 2 shopping..sanlak s bsy...omg!! Ragini s gng vid swara.ab kya hoga swara ki???

Raglak talks ws fantastic..ragini s gettin more stubborn..
Laksh tryin 2 make her understnd...lekin usne thappad maarne klye jaa rhs tha..vo muje teek nhi laga...its my pov..
Ragini s plannin vry evily i think...poor swara...dnt knw wt gonna happen 2 swara..feeling vry scared..sach mein...
Rags s vry evil... Lekin agr swara ko kuch hua laksh pakka usse maaf nhi krega...hope she will realise dat..
Precap seems interesting...changin of 3 lives...
Do continue dear..waitin 4 nxt update...


Haa m Very Angry 😔 on U..bt its Ok..I understand šŸ˜† n Thnks fr thr Wonderful Appreciation..M Glad u Liked It...Keep Loving My Wrk 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Awesome update.šŸ‘
But I really don't know what is Ragini's problem?!😔
And OMG!!! What is she going to do with Swara that will change the lives of all the 4??šŸ˜•
Plzz update the next part soon.😳


Thnks alot n To Knw hw it will Effect all 4..keep reading my wrk šŸ˜†
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Frnds..Read all ur Comments Thnks Alot fr The Good Response..All r Eager to Knw The Real Betrayal of the Story..All i cn Say is Keep Calm n Keep Reading The Story..The Story has Jst Begun n U will get all ur Answers jn Future Episodes..Jst Wait n Keep Reading n Keep Showering Ur Love on My Wrk...N Nw after My Bak Bak Here is the Nxt Part of My SS #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :)..Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :).

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Recap : Swara Laksh Bond,RagLak Fighting,Ragini Evil Plan n RagLak Patch Up..

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Love Ya Betrayal


PART 07


Plaza Royal Mall

Swara n Ragini Both Reached Mall n Swara seemed Soo Happy n Exicted to Shop after A Really Long Time n As soon As She Reached inside The Mall Swara saw Her some of the Frnds in A Shop went inside the Shop to.Meet Her Frnds n Strtd Her Shopping wid Her Frnds Where as Ragini too Followed Swara n went inside The Shop bt as She Entered She had An Evil Smile on Her Face n Scanned The Entire Shop Carefully n Pretended Normally n Sweetly infront of Swara Making Swara Happy n Exicted..

Swara : ( Happpy n Exicted ) Finally Swara Gadodia Bak to ur Favourite Shopping Mall after A Really Long Time..So Come on Lets Strt Shopping.. ( Sees Her Frnds ) Arrey Woow..( Tells Ragini ) Bhabhi see My Few Frnds r also thr in dat Dress Shop..I will Go thr Haa n U Strt Ur Own Shopping..Fr U ..Fr Mr Khadus n Haa fr ( Smiles Naughtily ) Off Course n fr BHAI too.. ( Giggles )..

Ragini : ( Pretends to Smile ) ( Fake Blush ) Kya Swara..Stop it..nw Go n Strt ur Shopping..We need to go Home also..

Swara : ( Laughs ) Haa Ok Ok..Relax..dnt Blush Soo Much..warna Bhai wont be able to do Wrk in Home ..His Video Conference will be Disturbed by Continous Hick Ups ( Giggles )

Ragini : ( Fake Funny Anger ) Swara !!..Badmash..nw Go..

Swara : ( Laughs ) Ok Ok..Fine..M.Going..

After Teasing Ragini Swara goes inside The Shop Happily n while Giggling whereas Ragini too Followed Her n Strtd Her Shopping to nt to Show Her Plan...

Ragini : ( Follows Swara n Scanned The Shop wid Evil Smile )( Monogue ) Jao..Swara Jao..Enjoy ur Last Happy Shopping coz after This Shopping u wont be able Stay Happy phir toh Shopping is Fasar Away My Dear Nanand ( Smiles Wickedly )( Pretends Normally ) Chalo nw Let me also Shop Fr some time coz its A Happy Day fr Me..I will be able to Stay wid My Laksh All Alone frm Today..den He will be Mine n will Concentrate on Me only Fully ( Blushes )

As Both Swara n Ragini were doing Shopping there in Gadodia Mansion Both Laksh n Sanskaar were Bzy in The Celebration of their Successful Business Video Conference regarding A Project on Swara's Name..Both were Happy n Exicted fr The Meeting Success n Celebrated their Success while having A Drink while their Sisters were Bzy Shopping..

Laksh : ( Happpy ) Congratulations Sanskaar..We did it Agn..We Proved Our Partnership is Best Once Agn..( Toast The Drink ) Cheers fr Our Success ( Laughs )

Sanskaar : ( Happy too ) Congratulations to u too Laksh..I alrdy Told U Our Partnership will be da Best One n we cn Win All the Contracts..n see jabse we r in Partnership..We r Winning Only.. ( Toast The Drink too ) Cheers..

Laksh : ( Happpy ) Chalo Lets Drink Fast warna agr Humari Behene aagayi na they wont Let Us Drink More..n Sabse Zaada toh I will Suffer..Coz On One Side I have ur Sis who is My Wife n Other Side My Own Sis..Both will Kill Me if they see Me Drinking .. ( Laughs while Making Fun )

Sanskaar : ( Laughs too ) Srsly..Thnk God M Single..warna My Condition wud be Like U..( Makes Fun of Laksh In Frndly Manner ) bt Both The Girls myt be Having Fun na..i mean they r doing their Fav Tym Pass..SHOPPING !! Both of them Loves Shopping like Hell..Wonder Shop Keeper ka Haal Hoga ( Laughs )

Laksh : ( Remembers His Fyt wid Ragini )( Sad bt Composed Herself ) Ryt they myt kya..m sure they r Having Fun...n while Shopping u knw both of them Forget ki they r Shopping Area n they r Frm Business World..so I have Sent Some Body Guards Bak of them Secretly to Keep An Eye on them..

Sanskaar : ( Understands ) Haa Ryt..Good u sent Body Guards..I knw Laado She Hates Body Guards..

Laksh : N Same wid Shona..Both dnt Like these Protection n all..if i wud Ask them abt Body Guards n all they wud Definitely Deny isiliye I sent Body Guards widout their Knowledge..

Sanskaar : Sahi Kiya..They dnt Understand its fr their Protectiion n Especially jabse we both had joined as Partners in Business Our Competitors are Trying to Harm Us m Our Family..So u did A Gr8 Job by Arranging Secret Security fr Both of them..

While SanLak were Having Fun n were Discussing abt SwaRagini there in Shopping Mall Both Swara n Ragini were Bzy Shopping..As Swara was Shopping wid Her Frnds Happily Ragini Scans The Shop n Puts A Item in Swara's HandBag widout Swara's Notice n Smiles Evilly..After Putting The Item in Swara's Bag Ragini agn Pretends to Shop Normally..

Swara : ( Happy ) Sanju..See hw is this Dress Looking at Me..Nyc kya ??

Sanju : Haa Swara..its Amzing..Buy it..M Sure ur Mr Khadus will Go Flat on U ( Laughs n Giggles )

Swara : ( Shocked n Blushed too ) Shut Up Sanju..wat r u talking.?? ( Sees Ragini who is Lil Far ) Agr Bhabhi ne sunliya toh Prblm hojayegi..Shut Up..

Sanju : ( Fake Anger ) Ohh Come On Swara..kab tak U will Hide ur Feelings..its High Time U Confess ur Feelings atleast to Sanskaar whom u Love..Baaki ko baadme batana..n waise bhi Ur Bhabhi is Far frm Us..She wont Listen Our Talks..So Chill..Dnt Panic..n Do as I Say..Confess Ur Feelings to ur Lover b4 its Late warna aisa na ho He Finds Someother Girl n Settle n U keep Crying fr Him Like Laila n Other Historical Female Lovers..

Swara : ( Confused ) Laila ?? Bt Sanju As Far As I Knw..All of them Died na ar End..

Sanju : ( Irritated ) Uff Buddhu..i knw They Died..i was jst Telling U an Example Yaar..B4 Dying all of them Cried na..

Swara : ( Bits Her Tongue ) Ohh Yaa..Ok I will Confess My Feelings Today only after Shopping..Nw Happy ??

Sanju : ( Happy ) Haa Happy..infact Super Duper Happy ( Laughs )

As Swara n Her Frnd were Having Fun Ragini comes frm Behind Secretly n Scans thr Surrounding n Puts A Item in Swara's Bag n Pretends Normally n Strts Shopping Agn wid A Evil Smile on Her Face..

Ragini : ( Comes Back of Swara n Puts A Item In Her Bag Secretly )( Monogue ) Haslo Swara..Jitna Enjoy karna hai Enjoy..After Wat i have Done to U..u wont be able to Enjoy agn ( Smiles Wickedly )

While Ragini was Abt to Go Swara Felt Someone Back of Her n Turned Bak n Saw Ragini Back of Her n was Confused Seeing Her Bak of Her n Going Secretly widout Talking to Her..As Ragini was abt to go Swara Called Her Name making Ragini Shocked n Worried ..

Swara : ( Runs Bak as She Felt Someone Bak ) Bhabhi ( Shocked ) ( Monogue ) Wat is Bhabhi doing here bak of me Secretly ?? N if she was bak of Me..Y didn't She Call Me ?? ( Jerks The Tjots ) Offo Swara..U were Talking wid ur Frnds na ..so maybe isiliye She did nt Disturb U.. ( Bt Sweats Suddenly ) Ohh No..Kahi Bhabhi ne Sun toh nhi li Meri aur Sanju ki baath..n maybe dats y she went widout talking to me ...ohh God aaj tu gayi Swara..God Plzz Save Me ( Composed Herself n Calld Ragini ) Bhabhii..

Ragini : ( Smiles Evilly bt Getd Shocked Hearing Her Name n Turns Bak Wid Fake n Fearful Snile ) Haa Swara..kya hua ??

Swara : ( Fear ) Woh Bhabhi..I felt u were Bak of Me..Kuch kaam tha ?? I mean u were bak of me n did nt Call me too..is isiliye...

Ragini : ( Gulped ) Kuch bhi toh nhi Swara..woh Actually i saw u were talking to ur Frnd..so did nt Disturb U..( Scared )

Swara : ( Relieved )( Monogue ) Uff Thnk God..Bhabhi ke baathon se lagraha ki She did nt Listen anything... ( Happpy ) ( To Ragini ) Ohh Accha Bhabhi..Np..

Ragini : ( Relieved too )( Monogue ) Thnk God..Swara did nt see anything..warna i thot My Plan is Fkopped..bt Thnk God..aisa kuch nhi hua..

After Clearing their Doubts Both Swara n Ragini were Relieved n Relaxed n Went Resumed their Own Shopping Yet Agn Wid A Relieved n A Relaxed Smile on theit faces wich were of 2 Different Types While Ragini had A Evil Smile on Her Face On the Other Hand whereas Swara had A Happy n A Excitement Smile on Her Face Unaware abt The Storm or Shock Waiting Fr Her at the End of the Day...


Precap : Change in Lives of 4 :p. ..


Finally Guyz Done wid Another Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.I knw its Short n Nt Upto The Mark..Bt Still Hoping U will Like It..Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :).

#Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Goldie ki bacchi suspence se maar daalna hai kya 😔 šŸ˜†
Nice update šŸ‘
Feeling scared for swara
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Goldie ki bacchi suspence se maar daalna hai kya 😔 šŸ˜†
Nice update šŸ‘
Feeling scared for swara
Update soon


Hehehehehe šŸ˜† n Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
suspense again...
continue soon .
thanks for PM..
Goldie93 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnks alot 😊
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Originally posted by: spatika

awesome update..
suspense again...
continue soon .
thanks for PM..


Thnks alot yaar 😊

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