Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ] - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww my babies
i cant handle more seperation more.
whats d MU nw????
i am sure ragini has play a key role in it.
hope things are sorted away soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!!1 Awesum update...Aftr a leap evrything got changed..
feeling very sad c swasan lyk dis...
Poor swasan...Ragini s so evil...
She planted seeds of misunderstanding btw dem..😡😡
Feelin 2 kill her...Awesum update...
Lekin choytusa tha...Luvd it so much...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Swara bcme more responsible n mature...
Playful n funloving swara s lost...😭😭😭
Laksh in depression...Swasan ke beech misunderstanding...
Sb ek hi insaan ke vajase..."GREAT RAGINI"😡😡
Ab shayad voh khush hogi..Sbke lyf kharab krne ke baad...
Leap brought so much changes in evryone's lyfs...
Swasan nokjhok ws fantastic...Suprb...
Sanskaar saving swara from dose boys...Suprb yaar..
Lvd dat prt vry much...Emotional update also..
Feelin so sad on swasan's condition...
Do continue dear... Witin 4 d update...

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Wow!!1 Awesum update...Aftr a leap evrything got changed..
feeling very sad c swasan lyk dis...
Poor swasan...Ragini s so evil...
She planted seeds of misunderstanding btw dem..😡😡
Feelin 2 kill her...Awesum update...
Lekin choytusa tha...Luvd it so much...
Thnks so much dear 4 d pm...

Swara bcme more responsible n mature...
Playful n funloving swara s lost...😭😭😭
Laksh in depression...Swasan ke beech misunderstanding...
Sb ek hi insaan ke vajase..."GREAT RAGINI"😡😡
Ab shayad voh khush hogi..Sbke lyf kharab krne ke baad...
Leap brought so much changes in evryone's lyfs...
Swasan nokjhok ws fantastic...Suprb...
Sanskaar saving swara from dose boys...Suprb yaar..
Lvd dat prt vry much...Emotional update also..
Feelin so sad on swasan's condition...
Do continue dear... Witin 4 d update...


Thnks alot Yaar 😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soumi93

Awww my babies
i cant handle more seperation more.
whats d MU nw????
i am sure ragini has play a key role in it.
hope things are sorted away soon.


😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Guyz..M Glad U All r Liking The Current Trck...It Means Alot..Keep Supporting n Loving My Wrk..Anywyz Here is the Nxt Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :).


Recap : 2 Months Leap...SwaSan First Meet Post Leap.


PART 11


Next Morning

Global Conference Hall

It was The Nxt Beautiful Morning fr Mumbai People n fr Swara n Sanskaar who were Present in A Conference Hall Attending An Imp Meeting..Its been 3 Hours n Finally The Imp n Long n Tiring Meeting was Ended n Swara came out of Conference Room wid A Happiness Shown on Her Face while Sanskaar too Slightly Smiled n Admired His Banderiya Forgetting abt Their Differences..

Swara : ( Happiness n Talking on Phone wid Excitement ) Hellooo Bhai..Hum jeet gaye Bhai..Finally Ur Shona has Done it..Yes Bhai..U Guessed it ryt..I have Achieved da Contract..n U knw wat Mr Smith was Really Impressed by Our Presentation n has Also Decided to Sign da Contract.wid U asap..

Laksh : ( Happy ) Ohh Congratulations Shona..i knew it My Shona wud do it ..after all Behen kis ki hai ( Intreprupted )

Swara : Laksh Gadodia ki ( Swara Laksh Both Laughs ) Accha Bhai ( Serious ) Jokes Apart...Tell Me One thing..R u taking ur Depression Tablets ??

Laksh : ( Fumbles ) Woh..Haa Shona I got an Imp Wrk...Call U Later..Byyy ( Intreprupted )

Swara : ( Angry ) Matlab nhi liya ..Y Bhai ?? Y r u Careless ?? Plzz Take Care of Urself...U knw na I cnt Live widout U Bhai..Plzz Take Care Bhai..I dnt knw will U Manage all Alone there..i still have some more time to come bak to Kolkata..Pata nhi hw will U Manage widout Me.Plzz Bhai Take Care..

Laksh : Accha Meri Maa..i will...Accha tell Me I heard Ur Frnd Sanjana is Out of Mumbai..so where r u Staying ??

Swara : ( Shocked ) Haa..Bhai..hw do u knw ??

Laksh : ( Smiles ) Shona m Ur Elder Brother ..I have Sources My Dear.Haa woh alag baath hai i cud bt Find Where r u Staying..Nw tell me whr n hw r u Staying ??

Swara : ( Fumbles ) Woh..Bhai..main na..Woh.. ( Closed Eyes n Told in One Breath ) SANSKAAR ke Ghar pe ( Opened Her Eyes wid Fear )

Laksh : ( Shocked ) Wat ?? R u Serious Sbona ?? Tum Sabskaar ke Ghar pe ?? Bt Hw ?? Y ?? I mean hw did Sanskaar got ready to Help U ?? ( Worried ) R u Fine na ?

Swara : dat i also dnt knw Bhai..hw did dat Mr Khadus got ready to Help Me..First i Denied Him thinking wat all He n Bhabhi did wid Us..bt Later wen I was going He saw Some Boys Coming Near Me to Tease Me so seeing dat He Helped Me n Since Yesterday m staying in His House..n Dnt Worry m Fine..U knw ur Shona na..She has Chngd alot nw..Accha ok Bye haa..I gtg...Take Care n Kove.Ya..Muwwahh..

Laksh : ( Satisfied ) Ok..Bye n U too Take Care.n Love Ya Too.. ( Cuts da Call n Smiles ) ( Monogue ) I knw Sanskaar tum jitna bhi Naraaz ho Hum se bt wen it Comes to Ur Banderiya..U will do anything to Protect Her...I alrdy knew Shona is Staying in ur Home bt still Pretended as if i dnt knw..to see wat Shona feels abt u even after these 2 Months..n nw m Sure nt Only U bt Shona too feels da Same fr U.bt due to Circumstances u both r Helpless.bas i Hope this Mumbai Trip Clears all ur MU abt My Shona..( Teary Eyes )

As Laksh was Talking to Himself n Praying fr Swara n Sanskaar's Relationship there in Mumbai Swara after Haning the Call Headed towards the Sanskaar's House in His Car wid Sanskaar n As they were Going Swara All of A Sudden Tell Sanskaar to Stop the Car in Surprise making Sanskaar Confused n Shocked..

Swara : ( Screams ) Sanskaarrr..Plzx Stop the Car Right nw..Plzz..Stop. ..

Sanskaar : ( Shocked ) Wat ?? Bt U Swara ?? Have u seen da Road ..its A Bzy Road..y to Stop The Car in Middle of Road all of a Sudden.. ( Confused )

Swara : ( Irritated ) Offo Mr Bhuddhu..who is telling U to Stop da Car in Middle of the Road..U Stop the Car Near dat ( Points towards A Stall ) Ice Cream Stall Plzz ( Watery Mouth ) I wanna have Ice Cream..Plzz Stop...

Sanskaar : ( Surprised ) Wat The !! Fr Ice Cream U Shouted Like A Mad..as if something Serious Happened..U r Srsly Mad Swara..( Angry )

Swara : ( Pout Face ) Haa toh abb I Love Ice Cream toh its nt My Fault na..My Timmy wants to Eat Ice Cream..toh abb isme main kya karu.. ( Turns to Sanskaar n Pleads ) Plzz Plzz Sabskaar..Bring Me Ice Cream na..i wanna Eat Ice Cream Plzz..
Sanskaar : ( Finally Agrees ) Accha Accha Calm Down..U Sit in Car..I will Bring U dat Ice Cream..abb Khush ??

Swara: ( Happy ) Haa..Very Happy..abb jao plzz..warna My Fav Flavour will be Finished..

Sanskaar : ( Shakes His Head in Disbelief n Smiles at Swara's Drama ) Haa Jaraha hu Ruko toh Sahi..( Slowly ) Pagaal ( bt Heard by Swara )

Swara : ( Grin Madly ) Thnk U.. ( Giggles )

5 Mins Later

Sanskaar : Pass The Ice Cream ) Yeh Lo Urs Strawberry cum Vanilla Mix ..

Swara : ( Happy n Takes the Ice cream ) Thnnnkk Uu Mr Khadus..( Asks fr A Share to Sanskaar n Sees Sanskaar seeing Her ) Kya ?? Wat r u seeing Like this at Me ?? ( Forwards the Ice Cream ) Want Some ??

Sanskaar : ( Makes Faces ) No No..U Eat..waise bhi Eating Like A Kid is ur Habit nt Myn..Yewww..

Swara : ( Bzy in Eating ) Ur Wish..maine Offer Kiya tha..bt U only Denied it..later dnt tell ki i did nt Offer..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles ) Haa Nhi Puchuga..

Soon after Some Time Sanskaar Strtd His Car n Headed towards His House while Smiling n Admiring Swara's Childish Behaviour Secretly through His Side Eyes wid An Unknown Smile on His Face.

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Sanskaar's House

Soon Both Swara n Sanskaar Reached Home n Serveants Opened da Door n Took The Bag frm Sanskaar's Hands n informed Sanskaar abt the Lunch..

Servant : Good Afternoon Sir..

Sanskaar : ( Bossy Tone ) Hmm..Is tue Lunch Ready Suresh ??

Suresh : Yes Sir..Lunch is Ready Sir ..

Sanskaar : Hmm Ok..Den U Strt Serving on Table..I wjll get Freshen Up n Come.. ( To Swara ) n Swara U too get Freshen Up...U myt be More Tired Coz of Meeting n other Formalities..

Swara : ( Nodes ) Haa..main bhi jaati hu..

Soon Swara n Sanskaar Went to their Room n Had Chngd into Their Causuals n Had their Lucnh together n Went bak to their Respective Rooms n Strtd Recollecting their Recent Moments wid A Happy Smile n also Recollected their Past Incident wich Completely Chngd their Life Up Side Down making both of them Brk Down Bitterly..

**********FlashBack**********

2 Months Earlier

As Ragini was Broken Down after Laksh's Decision Ragini sees Sanskaar Coming inside Gadodia Mansion through the Mirror of Bar wich was Straight infront of Her Eyes n Seejng Sanskaar Coming Ragini Got An Evil Plan n Strtd Her Drama by wich made Sanskaar shocked n Surprised Unnoticed by Swara n Laksh..

Ragini : ( Angry n Bursted Out ) Khush Swara..R u Happy nw ?? Congratulations Swara Gadodia U r Finally Successful in Brking Ur Bhai's Marriage ..Nw Ur Bhai is Fully Urs..U cn Go fr Shopping,Irritate or Do anything else U want wid Ur Bhai..He is All Urs Nw Swara..or shud I Say Shoonaa ( Pressurize Word Shona ) U r Srsly An Unlucky n A Blooodd ( Intreprupted Cause of Slap )

Laksh : ( Slaps Ragini in Anger Shut Up..Jst Shut Up..Dnt Dare U Utter A Word Agnst My Shona..( Side Hugs Swara Affectionately ) My Shona is Faar Better dan U Ragini Maheshwari.Even If She Hates Someone na She Never Tries to Hurt or Harm Anyone..She Alwyz Tries to Win Their Heart by Her Love n Affection..Bt U r Jst Ridiculous...Nw Jst Get Lost n Go Away frm My Life n My Eye Sight...n Never Show Me Ur Face Agn..Nw Jst Get Lost.. ( Hell Angry )

After Hearing Laksh's Harsh Words Ragini Stood Up n Strtd Going towards The Main Door wid An Evil n A Winning Smile on Her Face n was Lost in Her Evil Thots n Stared Sanskaar who was Standing at Door Fuming in Anger..

Ragini : ( Smiles Evilly ) Abb Dekhna Swara..u Snatched My Love frm Me na n nw I will Snatch Ur LOVE frm U..Thnk.God maine Swara aur Sanju ki baathe sunli thi..i never knew ki woh baath wud be Soo Usefull to Me..Thnk God.. ( Sees Swara Through Side Eyes ) Ur Bad Time has Strtd nw Swara Gadodia..Jst Wait n Watch My Dear Nanand Ji ( Smiles Winningly )

As Ragini was Going Out Lost in Her Thots Sanskaar saw Ragini's Fake Tears n Stormed inside the Gadodia Mansion Filled His Eyes wid Hell Anger n Concern fr Hoe Laado making Swara n Laksh both Shocked n Making Ragini Smile at Her Win..

Sanskaar : ( Stormed inside in Anger ) LAKSH...Hw Dare U Talk to My Laado in such a Way ? n U Slapped Her too ( Side Hugs Ragini in Concern ) R u Ok Laado ?? Tell Me aisa kya hua ?? ( Intreprupted )

Laksh : ( Shocked n Tries to Explain ) Dekh Sanskaar..its nthing Like that as u Think..I did nt Mean to Slap Ragini it was in Anger i Did..Arrey wen U will come to knw abt ur ( Sees Ragini Angrily ) Laado's Deeds na u will also do da Same..

Sanskaar : ( Angry ) Enough Laksh..thr is nthing to Listen nw..Baath jo bhi thi U dnt have Right to Slap Ragini like this..U cud have Talked or Explain Her Calmly..bt There was No Right to Slap My Laado like this.. ( Hell Angry )

Laksh : ( Guilty ) Haa.Sanskaar i kne shud nt have Slapped Ragini like this..bt kya karta She was Bad Mouthing Shona Very Badly n Uper se She has Crossed Every Limits so Slapped Her in Anger..M Sorry..

Sanskaar : ( Angry ) Laksh agr Ghusse main Laado ne kuch keh diya Swara ko so wat was da Big Deal Yaar..Yeh Ek Sis in Law aur Bhabhi ki beech ki baath thi..they cud have Sorted Out Alone..Usme tumhe beech main padhne ki baath nhi thi..

Laksh : ( Angry ) Wat do U mean Sanskaar ?? Agr Ragini Meri Shona ko jo Dil nain kehti rahe n Me being Shona's Brother shud have kept Quite..hw cud I Sanskaar ?? Shona is My Responsibility since Childhood..i have Taken Care of Her as Both Maa n Baba since Yrs..n jst coz M Married nw it doesnt Mean i will Leave My Shona..Jab tak iski Shaadi nhi hoti She is n Will be My Responsibility ..She is Very Sensitive n Me Being Her Brother its My Duty to Support Her..U have No Rights to Interfere in Myn n My Sister's Matter..Samjhe ? ( Angry )

As Sanskaar n Laksh were Fyting Ragini had a Winning Smile on Her Face while Swara Tried to Sort Out the Matter b/e SanLak bt Ended Up Getting Insulted by Sanskaar wich Made Laksh More Angry n Swara Shattered.

Swara : ( Tries to Sort ) Sanskaar..Bhai..Plzz U both Stop Fighting..Alrdy the Matter is Heated Up..n Sanskaar we shud Think hw to Sort Bhai n Bhabhi's Matter instead of Fighting wid eachother..I knw Bhai did a Mistake by Slapping Bhabhi..bt Trust Me He did nt Mean to do it..bas hogaya unse..n Waise bhi Sanskaar in every Marriage all these happens ( Intreprupted )

Sanskaar : ( Angry ) Bas Swara...Enough..Stop ur Drama of Concern n all..Its coz of U Only Laado n Laksh r Fighting n Coz of U Only Myn n Laksh's Frndship is also Broken..All Coz of U Swara..Srsly Hw Selfish u r Swara.. ( Sees Laado ) i alwzy Noticed Some Tension on Laado's Face wen U were Around Laksh bt i alwyz Ignored it thinking maybe coz Wrk She is Behaving like this..bt Today i came to knw the Real Reason..its U who Tried to Create Rift b/w My Sister n Laksh..Swara i thot u r Innocent bt nw i came to knw ur Real Face..He Cheap U r Swara..Srsly Disgusting...( Hell Angry ) n If U wanna Sort Laado's n Laksh's Married Lifr Prblms na den its Better U Leave them n Go..After Some Days Laksh will Forget U n Will Move On wid Ragini..I Considered U My Good Frnd bt nw Our Frndship is Over n .. ( Intreprupted )

Laksh : ( Angry ) Bas Sanskaar..Bahut boliya tumne..Nw Stop..dnt u Dare Utter A Word agnst My Shona nw..arrey tum kya todoge Dosti ..I Myself Brk Ur n My Frndship n wid Shona too..dnt even Meet My Shona frm nw onwards..nw Get Lost frm My Eye Site wid Ur So Called Laado.. ( Hell Angry )

Sanskaar : ( Shocked n Angry too ) Wah Laksh..Wat a Frndship U Proved Today ... Humari Itni Saalo ki Dosti U Broke in a Second..Wowow.. ( Teary Eyes ) ( To Swara in Anger ) Swara Congratulations..U Broke Laado's Marriage n also Broke My n Laksh's Frndship too..Srsly..Congratulations Swara Gadodia... ( Hatred )( To Ragini ) Chalo Laado..u dnt need to Worry. ..Ur Bhai is Here fr U.( Leaves Gadodia Mansion wid Ragini )

Soon Sanskaar Left the Gadodia Mansion along Wid Ragini who had Evil Smile on Her Face while Sanskaar n Laksh Both had Anger Shown on Their Faces while Swara only Had Tears n Only Tears in Her Eyes Brking Her Completely frm Inside..

********FlashBack Ends*********

Soon Both Swara n Sanskaar who were Present in their Respective Rooms came out of their Thots n Cried Bitterly Remembering their Good n Fun Filled Moments..

Swara : ( Monogue) Y did u do this Sanskaar? ? Atleast u cud have Listened to Me Sanskaar..jab nhi suni meri baath den Y r U Helping n Lostening to Me nw.. ( Teary Eyes ) Main chahke bhi cnt Control My Feelings infront of U...I Still Love U Sanskaar..I Still Really Love U.I Wished i cud Clear all ur Misunderstanding abt Me n Bhai bt ( Angry ) I cnt..coz Even if I Love U Still I cnt Forget ur Harsh Words agnst My Bhai..I Hate U Sanskaar Maheshwari..I Hate U ( Angry )

Sanskaar : ( Monogue ) Swara Y m I nt able to Control Myself infront U..Aaj seeing U Like b4 i cud nt Stop Myself frm Adoring U...U really da Same like u were 2 Months b4..yeh jaante hue bhi ki U r A Selfish Girl i cnt Stop Myself frm Loving U..I cnt Hate U Swara...Coz u r My Life ( Teary Eyes ) bt i cnt even Forget wat u did wid Laado.. ( Mixed Feelings )

Soon afer Recollecting their Past Memories both Swara n Sanskaarr Dozed Off fr A Short Nap after 3 Hours Long n Tiring Meeting wid Tears Continously Flowing frm their Eyes making dem Pale n Dull..

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Precap : SwaSan Nokh Jhokh Agn ..

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Done wid Another Part ..Hope U will Like It :). .Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :).

#Goldie

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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update..
hope everything becomes normal between swasan...
continue soon..
thanks for PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: spatika

awesome update..
hope everything becomes normal between swasan...
continue soon..
thanks for PM..


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update dear
sanskar misunderstood both swalak & broke relation with both ... hope all mu clear soon
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice...to ye hua tha us din...plz do pm me

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