Love Ya Betrayal SwaSan SS [ Part 20 Epilogue ] Updated on [Page 57 ] - Page 21

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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow!! So hi voltage drama in the chapter Goldie.šŸ˜‰
Finally Ragini is exposed in front of Swara and Laksh. She deserves this!!😔
And Laksh broke is marriage with Ragini.
Don't know that ab Ragini Sanskar k man mein Swara k liye kya zeher gholegi...!!😔
And what about Swara and Sanskar's love?? I don't think ki Sanskar will accept Swara love.😭 But he should know the truth that Swara is not at fault. Its bcoz of Ragini's own evil deeds that Laksh decided to separate from her! And what about Sanskar and Laksh's friendship??šŸ˜• Really a very big change is going to happen in all the 4s life...!!!😭 Hope that every thing becomes normal soon.😊 Plzz update the next part soon. And thanks for the pm.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...bht sahi kiya ragini ke sath...aisa hi hona chahiye tha bt shyad is ke chakar mei swara aur sanskar ka kuch ni hone wala...thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Goldie ..
I read all the chapters of the ff in one go..
It is really a different and nice concept and u have written it beautifully. ..
Enjoyed reading all parts
Wud love to read the next updates. .
Pls sent me pm if possible
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Posted: 9 years ago
I'm sooo sorry for late comment dear...
I'm having health pblm from past many days so I cant able to come online...

I read both 8& 9...
Wow ...kya ladki yeh Ragini disgusting...
Swara..oh poor girl so innocent...
The way she taunt swara...i want to kill that Ragini..

Oh next part
Amazing simply you rocked it man.
Laksh role superb...kya thappad to Ragini..b***h...they can possessive...but Ragini is different...

Pity swara need someone badly to ease her pain...

Precap..omg...hope sanky don't MU swalak .
..waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Read both the parts... Awesome...
Hate Ragini😔she always blames Swara...
Hope Sanskar doesn't mu swalak...
Waiting to see Sanskar's reaction...
Update soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello Guyz...Thnks fr The Amzing Response..It Means Alot...Here is The Nxt Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It :).


Recap : RagLak Fight,Swara Heart Broken,Ragini Truth Revealed n Laksh Throws Ragini Out of GM..Swara Laksh Heart Broken..


Love Ya Betrayal


PART 10


2 Months Later

Mumbai Airport

A Girl n A Boy who Jst Mumbai were Standing Outside The Mumbai Airport were Waiting fr Their Respective Cars to Come n Pick Them n at the Same Time Both Tur Girl n Boy were Ignoring Each Other,Jst then The Girl . Recieves A Call n was Shocked After Recieving The Call..

Girl : ( Smiles ) Hello Haa Sanjana..Where r U Yaar ?? I have Reached Mumbai n Waiting fr U Outside Mumbai Airport..Come Fast Yaar.. ( Shocked ) WTH !! U r Out of Mumbai..bt Hw Cn U Sanjana ?? U knw ki M Coming to Mumbai..n I Only Knw U in Mumbai..So hw cn U go out of Mumbai All of a Sudden n dat too Widout Informing Me.. ( Worried ) Nw where will I Stay ?? n Wat will I tell Bhai ?? He will get Worried..Ohh God ..Sanjana tune yeh kya kiya ?? ( Calm Down ) Ok Ok..Fine..Np..I understand u myt have got Some Imp Wrk n dats Y u left widout Informing Me..Ok np..i will Manage Some hw..U take care haa.. Haa Kk den Bye.. ( Cuts The Call bt still Worried ).Ohh Bhagwaan Ji..Kiss Musibat main Phassa diya aap ne mujhe ? Nw where will i Stay ?? I dnt knw anyone here in Mumbai other dan Sanjana bt Usne bhi Dhokha dediya..( Worried ) N nw where will I Go Bhagwan Ji..Plzz Help Me..n ( Tensed ) agr Bhai ko pata chala toh He will be Tensed abt Me .abb kya karu ?? .( Continued Blabbering )

As The Girl was Blabbering to Herself The Boy who was Standing Beside Her Heard Everything n Offered Her A Help to which da Girl Refused Making The Boy Angry.

Boy : ( Smiles n Talks Indirectly ) Bhagwaan Ji If Someone is Hearing Me..then tell Her if She wants A Help..She cn Ask Me..M Ready to Help Her..If She wants She cn Stay wid Me in My House..coz ryt nw in Mumbai She cn Only Knws n cn Trust Me after Her Frnd..

Girl : ( Angry n Turns Towards The Boy wid Attitude ).Ohh Hello..Mr Khadus...Me Swara Gadodia dnt need any Help ( Yes the Girl is Our Swara,Mr Khadus ki Banderiya :p )..Swara Gadodia is No More A Simple n An Innocent n A Darpok Girl..She has Chngd Alot n Cn Protect Herself frm any Evils nw..So Bhagwaan Ji Plzz Tell The Boy ki Me Swara Gadodia does nt need any Help..So He cn go to His House..I will Manage My self.. ( Goes frm their wid Her Luggage wid Attitude )

Boy : ( Angry n Speaks Loudly as Swara is Going ) Ok Fine..Miss Banderiya..Do wat ever U want..bt Remember after A While U will Only Come towards Me fr Asking Help..Sanskaar Maheshwari sirf Ek Baar Help Offer Karta hai..uske baad agr Saamne wala Refuses My Help den I dnt Help any more..bt fr U m Ready to Help coz kisi Tym pe we were.. ( Stops wid Teary Eyes bt Composed Himself )..Khair..Byee ( Sits in His Car n Goes )

Swara who was Walking in Attitude too Heard His Talks n was Teary Eyes too n Strts Remembering Her n Sanskaar's Good n Fun Filled Moments Like Sanskaar Saving Her frm Goons,then Sanskaar Falling by Hitting A Table etc n was Lost in Her Own Deep Thots n kept on Walking wid Teary Eyes.

Zindagi Mein Koyi Kabhi Aaye Na Rabba
Aaye Jo Koyi Toh Phir Jaaye Na Rabba
Dene Ho Gar Mujhe Baad Mein Aansoo...
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba ..
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba

On The Other Hand Sanskaar too had Tears in His Eyes while Remembering His Teasing n Fun Moments wid Swara Like His Naughty Dreams,then the Bed Room Scn wen Swara was Ill,their Eye Locks etc n Strtd Weeping Silently widout Being Noticed by His Driver n Stared Outside the Window wid His Goggles on to Avoid being Noticed..

Jaate Jaate Koyi Meri Khushiyon Ko Le Gaya
Suni Suni Akhiyon Ko Gham, Koyi De Gaya )...
Aas Jo Lagaayi Hai, Aankh Bhar Aayi Hai...
Itna Bhi Koyi, Sataaye Na Rabba
Zindagi Mein Koyi...Baad Mein Aansoo...
Toh Pehele Koyi Hasaaye Na Rabba...

Soon While Sanskaar was Passing By Swara in His Car His Eyes Fell on Some Boys who were Walking towards Lost Swara wid A Strange Smile n Eyes on Her..Swara was Completely Unaware of the Boys Heading towards Her as She was Lost in Her Deep Thots Untill She Felt A Strong Grip on Her Shoulders making Her Come Bak to Her Senses n Realized the Situation Around Her..

Sanskaar : ( Smiles n Acts Like Swara's BF ) Hello Baby..Why r U walking on Road Like this ?? M Sorry i knw M Late to Pick U Up..Bt kya karta..U knw na My Meetings n all.bt it doesn't mean ki U Roam on Roads Like This.. ( sees thode Boys in Anger ) Its nt at all Save fr Beautiful Girls Like U to Roam Like this...Anywyz Leave ( Holds Swara's Bag ) Come Sit inside the Car..Lets Go to Our House.. ( Sees Shocked Swara wid A Smile )

Swara : ( Shocked bt Nodes Yes ) Hmm..Chalo..

Soon Both Swara n Sanskaar Reached Sanskaar's Car n Sanskaar Made Swara Sit in Car n Kept Her Luggage in His Dickey n He too Sat in His Car Beside Swara n Both Drove Off to their Destination while The Boys too Ran frm their Seeing Sanskaar's Anger n Angry Face as fast as they could making Sanskaar Relieved n Relaxed..

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Maheshwari House

Soon Both Swara n Sanskaar Reached Sanskaar's House n As they Entered the House Servants Came n Kept their Luggae in their Respective Rooms n Obeyed Sanskaar's Orders like An Obidient Servants..

Sanskaar : ( Bossy Way ) Suresh..Suresh..

Suresh : Yes Sir..Welcome Sir..i have Arranged Ur Room Properly n also had Prepared Ur Meals fr Today..U go n Get Freshen Up..I will Serve Ur Lunch Mean time..

Sanskaar : Hmm Good..accha Listen..Take My Luggage n Keep In My Room n ( Sees Swara ) Take Madam's Luggage too n Keep in Guest Room..n Make Sure She does nt Face any Prblms Here.. Is it Clear ?? ( Strict n Bossy Tone )

Suresh : ( Obeys ) Yes Sir..Sure..

Sanskaar Hmm Fine..nw Get bak to ur Wrk..

While Sanskaar was Instructing The Servants Swara kept on Staring Him wid Mixed Emotions of Anger,Love,Hatred etc n was Lost in Her Own Thots wid Teary Eyes...

Swara : ( Mixed Feelings )( Monogue ) Hw cn U behave soo Normally Sanskaar ?? U r Behaving as if Nothing Happened 2 Months before..hw cn u ?? Coz of Ur Sis My Bhai is in Depression till nw n U n Ur Sis r Living A Normal Life ?? Srsly Disgusting..Hate Myself fr Loving U Once ... (Tears Fell frm Her Eyes Continously )

As Swara was Lost in Her Own Thots Sanskaar Shaked Her n Brought Swara Out of Her Thots..

Sanskaar : ( Shakes Swara ) Swara..Follow Suresh..He will take U to Guest Room..n U get Freshen Up..Will see u in Dining Area after Halfn Hour fr Lunch ..

Swara: ( Agrees ) Hmm.

Soon SwaSan Went to their Respective Room to Get Freshen Up..While the Other Servants Prepared n Served The Lunch on Table as Per Sanskaar's Instructions.

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4 Hours Later

Time Passed n It was Dinner Time fr Both Swara n Sanskaar bt Inspite of being Dinner Time both were Bzy in their Own Business Wrk in their Respective Rooms n were Lost in their Own Deep Thots while Reminiscing The Past Incidents wich Changed their Entire Life Up.n Down Filled wid Mny Complications n Hardships..

Guest Room

Swara : ( Hatred Feelings ) Sanskaar Y r u Doing all these ?? Wen u knw I Hate U da Most..Coz of Ur Sister My Bhai is Suffering n is in Depression wen He is Alone..I knw..He tries to be Normal in Front of Me bt in Reality He still Misses Bhabhi alot..n wen i came to Ask ur Help in Re Uniting Bhai n Bhabhi U Refused Me to Help coz U think Ur Sister was Ryt at Her Place n If I Leave My Bhai den Only Everything will be Fine. den Y the Hell U Helped Me Today Sanskaar Maheshwari ? I jst Hate U Mr Khadus..n nw by Winning this Project i will Show U i m nt the Same Girl whom U Loved Teasing..Swara Gadodia has Chngd alot..n I will Prove U that Very Soon ( Hatred )

Sanskaar's Room

Sanskaar : Mixed Feeling )( Monogue ) Y Swara ?? Y did U Create A Misunderstanding b/w Laado n Laksh ?? Hw cn U be Soo Selfish Swara ?? Jst coz U want Ur Bhai wid U.. U Spoiled My Laado's Life..n even after all these U n Ur Bhai r Living A Peacefull Life as if nthing Happened..U dnt have any Guilt at all fr Spoiling 4 Lives jst coz of Ur Selfish Reason..Srsly Disgusting..bt Still even after Knwing ur Deeds m nt able to Hate U..Coz I Loved U Swara..Infact I still Love U.n Will Alwyz Keep Loving U till My Last Breath Swara... ( Teary Eyes )

As Both Swara n Sanskaar were Lost in their Deep Thots Their Thots were Disturbed by A Knock on their Respective Doors wich Brought dem Out of their Thots n Headed towards The Dining Table fr Dinner Leaving All their Thots in their Own Mind..Soon Both of them Had their Dinner n went bak to their Respective Rooms to Have A Restfull Sleep as The Nxt Day was Very Imp Day fr them n their Business..

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Precap : Soccha Nhi Hai Abhi ...

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Done wid Another Part of #Love_Ya_Betrayal.Hope U will Like It.. Do Leave ur Valuable Comments in the Comment Box Below n Let Me knw Ur Views abt Todyz Part :).

#Goldie
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update goldie šŸ‘
Poor swasan misunderstanding hogaya hai 😭
Feeling bad for them
Swasan finally maan gaye they are in love but ragini 😔
I hate her
Lakshya depression mai chala gaya vo toh show mai bhi depressed tha na šŸ˜†
Solve the misunderstanding soo. šŸ˜‰
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb update goldie šŸ‘
Poor swasan misunderstanding hogaya hai 😭
Feeling bad for them
Swasan finally maan gaye they are in love but ragini 😔
I hate her
Lakshya depression mai chala gaya vo toh show mai bhi depressed tha na šŸ˜†
Solve the misunderstanding soo. šŸ˜‰
Thanks for pm


Thnks alot 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update..
Thank you for PM..
Contrive soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice work
Poor my baby both (( swasan )love each other so much,
But small misunderstanding creted by ragini break all relationship
Oweasom work šŸ‘

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