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Teddy94

@Teddy94

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Amazing stry...

Their fights r awesome.. N the kiss😳 loved it completely...

Waiting for ur nxt work..

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Sneha Ray

@sneharay

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Superb os..
Really funny nd beautiful..

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soumi gupta

@soumi93

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Its hot and romantic.
do write more.

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iykyk

@iykyk_3

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Nimmi...🤗

This is awesome. My cheeks are hurting 'cause of smiling continuously.😆 SwaSan in a political setting! 😲 Never imagined anything of this sort even in my wildest imaginations.

The 5 year old SwaSan were damn adorable. I just wanted to pull their cheeks. And I loved Ragini and Laksh too in this OS.

"Come'on Sanskar! Let her be. You know cockroaches actually survive a nuclear blast."

I laughed so hard reading this! 🤣

But how long will they stop their best friends from fighting? At last they too had to give up!

But it's good that they had to give up. Otherwise how would Swara and Sanskar have found out a new way to tackle their fights?! 😉

I love the Principal for giving them that punishment. He is a cupid. ❤️

Loved the way you showed the gradual change in their relationship. It was so convincing.

Missed you so dearly my dearest friend. Love you to the milky way and back! ❤️ 😆

Lots and lots of jhappis...🤗🤗🤗

Ashi.

Edited by Cinderella3 - 9 years ago

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Vini224

@Vini224

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Cute,romantic and funny😳

Swasan always at war at with each other and poor Ragya trying to keep peace😆

SwaSan anger and all that punching and kicking leading to the kiss was 😳

Eagerly Waiting to see what genre you're going to tackle next.

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AditiPant

@AditiPant

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Hey nimmi this was great- funny, romantic and frustrating (for ragini an laksh...poor them :P:P:P)

LOL this was so real right from the start to the end...both sanskar and swara trying to kick each others ass at all times...LOL...and poor laksh and ragini trying to get them apart...personally, I always hated politics...but this os is changing my mind... I wish every political story was this hilarious and cool...then it would have surely been a topic of my choice

And they WERE missing each other in their respective initial colleges...they had to...after all they had no one's ass to kick... Ad no one to fight with... And then sanskar and swara working together... And still trying to kick each other's ass...LOL...then swara won...by the margin of one vote...so sad for sanskar... :(:(:( but still, he casted his vote for swara instead of himself... So glad that swara came to know about it... Then the ending was again wow :):):)

Loved the os...return soon...will be waiting eagerly... Till then, love you loads and tc

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nida

@mystery75

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

it was🤣🤣

cant tell how happy and good my sad mood become

it was so ROFL

swasan all the time fighting and ragya bechary🤣

love it

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Prabhleen Arora

@7APK

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

SwaSan Childhood Enemies ...
Amazing OS ...
Loved it ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

That was a mind blowing os 👏
Seriously i loved it
Swasan as children 🤣
And their fight was superb 🤣
Raglak were chance pe romance 😆
And their kissing was 😳
Seriously a beautiful os
Awesomely written 👏