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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Helee
awesome...! just loved it. 😳

thank you Helee.😳

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nimmi

@Banjaaran25

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: MusicAddict
Woah Nimmi... That was so f****** amazing I tell ya!! It was too good. Another masterpiece of your sheer brilliance and amazing words!! Fabtabulous hun, and I'm so impressed man!! Such a plot..Kudos!* claps wildly*
I was all the time thinking who the hell is the traitor!! It never occured that it may be Sanskaar. I was like it has to be Laksh. But thinking of Sanskaar was completely outta question!! What all shhe didnt call him and he grinned!! Sanskaar was so cool:-)
SwaSan spending all time together was slowly paving the way for deep true love!! Enigma and Open Book!!? I LIKE IT!!
All this time it was Sanskaar?? God!! This is shocking. I mean i was actually stunned for a moment. Then I read it whole and realised. But dude, you really ought to write a crime novel!! You're fab at it<3 Such a plot!! Wouldn't have ever crossed my mind!! Defence?? Amazing buddy!!
The last part of the card was so heart touching!! Just loved it. Hey Nimmi!! Can you please please please please please please write a part of this one where Swara and Sanskaar actually meet like she hopes!! Please Nimmi! And let his name be Sanskaar only!!
Can you write a part two for me?? I loved it tooo xInfinity much
Lots of love
Sakshi!!

thank you so much Sakshi.
🤗.
geee.. you are making me blush now with your compliments and love sweetie.

I am so glad the twist shocked you.
and that you loved the story.

thanks girl.. *big hugs*

don't tempt me Sakshi. I write in extremes only. one shot or pothi size.
I love you babes.. toh chalo will write another part for this story then. Part two.
soon!

Lots and lots and lots of love.❤️

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.FairyDust.

@.FairyDust.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Nimmiii 🤗

Eeekks you started a new Series

And this is the first one i read and OMGG what was this?! I always knew you were good at suspense and thrillers because of Angel and the awesome twists you gave there but this one toh OMMGG so bloody brilliant 😲👏👏

I loved the bonding between Adarsh Swara Laksh and Ragini and then 'Our' Sanskaar too, 'twas so good to read . And the case itself was so intriguing I was literally biting my lower lip off thinking who the traitor would be, I suspected Adarsh and Laksh and for a teeny weeny second Sanskaar too as I'm very well acquainted with your twists 😆 but I banished the thought! And DAMMIT when I read Sanskaar was an imposter I literally had a brain freeze and had to re read that part like 3-4 times till it sunk in 😲😲

I loved the twist, so brilliant it is aajhgfdzrhfg ❤️👏

All of them love their Sanskaar, that made me so proud for some reason 😆 😎

And that part where Sanskaar leaves a pic of him (his only pic) as a memory with his Swara aawww I was legit swooning at this man and his gesture ❤️

And also PLEAASSEE give a sequel to this one, I wanna know how they meet again 😲

Fabulous job nimmi,Keep giving us more such OS's

Love,

Doll

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

thank you so much Sakshi.
🤗.
geee.. you are making me blush now with your compliments and love sweetie.

I am so glad the twist shocked you.
and that you loved the story.

thanks girl.. *big hugs*

don't tempt me Sakshi. I write in extremes only. one shot or pothi size.
I love you babes.. toh chalo will write another part for this story then. Part two.
soon!

Lots and lots and lots of love.❤️

Really will you?? Thank you Thank you Thank you sooo much!! I'll be waiting!!🤗I love you!!

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The.Lannister

@The.Lannister

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Fabulous OS Nimmi! 🤗 I loved it

I had guessed that the mole was Sanskaar but the second twist took me by surprise! Awesome twist that was👏 He was one of the good guys but was just from a different team. And then the ending was so cute😳 This deserves a sequel. I need to know when that "someday" will come in their life when they meet again & how!

Thanks Yukti for suggesting this one otherwise I would have missed out on a good story 🤗

Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

What a mind blowing twist...
Must say , u hv a knack of twists.

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kamila.

@Seriously.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Machi..
🤗.

thank you so much re.

so you guessed it is Sanskaar.busted there😆.
But I am glad I managed to shock you in the end.

Love you back. Muah!</font>

Ha.. Ha... Ha.. Man you imposed doubt seed on Laksh and Adarsh.. When a writer do this then it's definitely not them.. Then my doubt turn on Ragini and Sanskaar.. But that selfie confirmed it.. It's Sanskaar.. I love to solve this kinda enigmas machi... Mmmawh for you giving me this... CBI missed me.. 😆 ..

Love you... You won't change.. Still telling me thanku... Puking.. 🤢

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isha

@ishanita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

I want part 2 hamaari mange puri karo...laal kile pe dharna denge...we want part 2...

What yaar ?

Every tym I read u I think it is d best n nothing can be better than this ...but I always forget that u are nimmi...kasam khaake baithi ho to prove me wrong ...every tym fresh topic ...fresh story...starplus tagline suits u best...rishta wahi soch nayi...

Bw m again going out of topic ...yaar Angel hangover nahin uttar ra...I wanna ask Maddy's new profession which he has now opted?

Love

Ishita...but naam pataali Devi hone m der no large GI if u didn't give part 2 ...ok😆

Edited by ishanita - 9 years ago

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Sanya17

@Sanya17

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 wow such an amazing story I had no idea who was the traitor and I tried not to guess because I smhw knew that the traitor will be someone unexpected and same thing happened I didn't expected this at least not in this way, when I got to know it was sanskar I was so shocked and confused but when read the whole story twice I understood hats off to you.👏👏 I was literally scrolling for more but there was none 😭

But fulfill our demand of part two

Edited by Sanya17 - 9 years ago

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Brilliant!!! I am kind of speechless right now. This is so so good. Wonderful os. please Write one more part where they will meet again. I really want them to meet again. Please continue this one. Will be waiting for their 'someday' :)))

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