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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
One more thing.. any chances for part 2?? This was a very meaningful ending but still I feel it's incomplete because Swara and Sanskar didn't unite in the literal sense. You gave us hope.. but iss dil ke liye hope kaafi nhi!!

Waise.. Sanskar in this FF must be October or November born.. hai naa?? All his qualities are similar to that of a Scorpion. The Scorpio sun sign!! He loves his friends and can do anything for them.. And if you make Scorpio your enemy, they would not leave you easily!

PS- I am not a Scorpio but a Pisces.. It's just that this sign amused me very much and Pisces and Scorpions are the Perfect Couple of the zodiac!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Res...Will start unres soon i promise


Hola Nimmi..


I choose to unres on this one next ..Because i really loved this theme dear. Crime and Mystery are my favourite them. The who did it and what happened always keep me interested.



As always you proved what a great writer you are dear. What an awesome story in a single OS..It felt like reading a whole book not just an OS. It was so freaking awesome and i dont have enough words to praise it.




Swara, Lakshya, Ragini and Adarsh the crime unit.When they kept talking about a new guy from the headquarters i guessed it will Sanskar but i for one never expected the twist in the end, you simply surprised me as always.


Let me just tell you how much i loved the crime unit , My favourite got to be Ragini.She looked just like me , i am a nerd not an genius but a nerd. So she had to be my Favourite ,ofcourse Sanskar is the first but Ragini is the close second.



Then you made me doubt everyone except Swara due to the twist and i was hoping it was not Ragini .But Thankfully the crime unit was innocent.. Also how can you give my Sanskar name to another person ,thats unfair.. Chalo i let it go . As Sanskar name is still mysterious.



Coming to SwaSan, i really loved there story and how they become closer during the investigation.. And him even taking an Selfie with her was so sweet. I am going to assume they got there happy ending, if an hound and huntress can get one, if an Numero Uno Assassin and Journalist can get one , i am sure this two can get one too..


You know i loved a neat closed ending , but surprising i liked this one being open ended and kind of left to the assumption not that i would say no if you decided to give me a sequel ,still i am not going to grumble about leaving it open ended for now..



Awesome OS Nimmi dear, I absolutely loved it .. Love ya and let me just tell it once more time then i stop ofcourse you are the sweetest

Love

Nita


Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
Someone's on overdrive mode!😆 You should continue this one...has a potential to be another dhamaakedaar story!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
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Nimmi 🤗

Such a beautiful crime thriller it was 👏

The awesome foursome-- Swara, Ragini , Aadharsh and Lakshya 😊

The murder was really brutal by the way u explained the photos

One fine day an officer comes from the head branch-----Swara thinking how would the guy be
Infact waiting for him ( Nuisance from the headquaters , snob arrogant ass and show off )🤣🤣

Aah.. The way sanskaar countered it 😆

Both are equally impressed with each other...

The bond grows bigger and better and best day by day 😉

The way sanskaar deals when the info is lost by bugging evryone's mobiles including swara's and his own is worth appreciating 👏

Both of them had that immense belief on each other😊

All the one liners u used to describe their emotions were fantastic nimmi 👏

So according to swara , he suspects aadharsh and lakshya 😃

The next day...The bomb...That both the maheshwari brothers are killed...OMG...for a moment i thought is sanskaar thereal culprit as another " original sanskaar" Turns up to their office (I know me being the crazy me)

But the moment ragini starts narrating the "real story " that the murdered mna belonged to defense and sanskaar must have been a part of that force and might have to avenge his friend's death is purely commendable 👏

Swara's respect towards Sanskaar increases by power INFINITY 😳

She keeps on wondering why did he allowed her to click a selfie while opening her car and finds the note " coz i want u to remember me forever"☺️
That was sooo sweet of him yaar



Hey this OS deffo can be converted into a TWOSHOT if u want to...by beinging SWASAN together...😉

Well the choice is urs😃

This was indeed a wonderful OS nimmi

Lots of hugs and jhappis for this 🤗🤗🤗

Update soon

Love,
Prerana😊
Edited by prerulalli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
this was fanf**kingtastic girl!!!!
intelligent boys are sexy as he'll nd when one has the face of vk...then competition is none...
loved loved the plot...just before the climax I was disappointed nd thought he is the traitor...but what a beautiful twist...
totally brilliant...I was hoping sanskar will come meet swara but the end is totally justified too...can't complain...
again..u r brilliant nimmi...added to the list of my favorites... ;)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nimmy wow !!! It's freaking awesome!!! I simply loved it to bits and pieces.

I can see a part 2 coming our way. Please tell me I'm right.

Let Swara meet Sanskar in the second one. And someday means never did you know that?

Sanskar felt like Jack Reacher to me. A ghost. He believes in justice being delivered. That's all he cares for. Sharp one.

Swara and the rest of the team was also good. The reason for leaving behind a picture for her was such a beautiful gesture.

Love

Sree
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Nimmi ❤️
I loved it!! I cn see smth of angel in here
It wd b amazing to hv an ff on this plot plz go on!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Awesome ...
loved it ...

hope that someday comes soon ...

u cant stop here ... you have to continue ...

please ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!!!! This was so sooo good!! Brilliantly written!! I absolutely love suspense thrillers, and here mixed with romance it was superb!!👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res.. Machi... 🤗 ...

Unres...

I'm spellbound... Man I'm left with no words... What an OS it was just first class man... I doubted Sanskaar.. But not like this way... I thought he must be son of eighter one.. But man what a twist... Mind blowing 👏 👏 👏 ... Mmmawh machi...

Love you...



Machi..
🤗.

thank you so much re.

so you guessed it is Sanskaar.busted there😆.
But I am glad I managed to shock you in the end.

Love you back. Muah!



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