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SYSHA

@cutenamu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

didu...i am speechless..i can't form the perfect word to describe this piece...it is just awesome,fabulous,all the best words u can imagine...i am spell bound didu sacchi...it is a masterpiece...made me remember some memories from past..its very hard to come out from the trauma of losing someone special,dear one to us..this piece of writing made my day didu..

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awwwsssmmm OS
Loved It
Superbbb
Thanks for the PM

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lekahravi

@lekahravi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

First you're great...
Thanks for not giving names..
ITS good reading she/he..
From starting to end ..tears flowing reading the painful moments they went through..BEST FRIENDS its just giving special name..but I has care,trust,standing with each other in all circumstances..
Yours words are amazing..
Very emotional...
Well written...
Hats off..

Keeping writing ..

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

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Dear Mukta

That was an amazing story - and though you did not use any names, I could not help but read Swara and Sanskaar - you have brought out the poignancy and the pain of Swara so well; Sanskaar's anger at not being there when she needed him the most and his helplessness at watching her fight him - it was a heart wrenching read.

The whole story is about Swara - a strong person not because she showed strength in from of everyone but that she fought a battle that no one knew about and emerged victorious, with support from Sanskaar.

Simply outstanding, keep writing.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Sorry for the late reply

The OS was awesome loved reading it

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Shifa

@ShifaD07

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Amazing OS
Awesome work, loved it.
Thanks for d PM.

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Ginny potter

@Bluehue

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

beautiful os. I don't know about anyone else but I can only imagine swasan in this story. 😳

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Hii mukta

Its really nice emotional update

Its 2:45 here

N I am crying like I have watched an emotional movie

Yes you made me fell like I am watching a movie while reading

The way you describe each n everyone felling n POV is incredible

His concern her ignorance is right at their places

His mother is also not at all wrong

Its just a mere mu which create blunder

But sometime bad happens to made our relation strong

I can understand girl POV very well

Its very difficult to see our mother in pain

Even I can't see my mother in worry or pain its hurt n ache in my heart

Mother is visible god on earth

But what can any one do life have to go on

N finally she understand it.

She have to live for her mother to fulfill her dream

N finally she did it by his n his mother help

N they get married also

Their friendship is very strong like for everyone crave

You clear n justice with every emotion

Thanks for writing it

Thanks for pm.

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Geethu_sweetie

@Geethu_sweetie

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Hello dear,😊

How r u??

I loved the way the boy supported his girl in every single way.I just loved the characters bonding..👏 Ahh!! Finally the confession just touched my heart..😃

Thank you so much for giving such beautiful writings to us dear..And thanks for the PM..🤗 If it's not your PM, I would have really missed a nice piece of work.

Stay blessed and be happy.❤️

Thanks,

Geetha.