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Originally posted by: Helee

beautiful os. I don't know about anyone else but I can only imagine swasan in this story. 😳

Originally posted by: TaaRey_VruShan

Amazing OS
Awesome work, loved it.
Thanks for d PM.

Originally posted by: sur1911

Hii mukta

Its really nice emotional update

Its 2:45 here

N I am crying like I have watched an emotional movie

Yes you made me fell like I am watching a movie while reading

The way you describe each n everyone felling n POV is incredible

His concern her ignorance is right at their places

His mother is also not at all wrong

Its just a mere mu which create blunder

But sometime bad happens to made our relation strong

I can understand girl POV very well

Its very difficult to see our mother in pain

Even I can't see my mother in worry or pain its hurt n ache in my heart

Mother is visible god on earth

But what can any one do life have to go on

N finally she understand it.

She have to live for her mother to fulfill her dream

N finally she did it by his n his mother help

N they get married also

Their friendship is very strong like for everyone crave

You clear n justice with every emotion

Thanks for writing it

Thanks for pm.

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

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Dear Mukta

That was an amazing story - and though you did not use any names, I could not help but read Swara and Sanskaar - you have brought out the poignancy and the pain of Swara so well; Sanskaar's anger at not being there when she needed him the most and his helplessness at watching her fight him - it was a heart wrenching read.

The whole story is about Swara - a strong person not because she showed strength in from of everyone but that she fought a battle that no one knew about and emerged victorious, with support from Sanskaar.

Simply outstanding, keep writing.

love,

Nyna

HI DEAREST NYNA...

Originally posted by: Geethu_sweetie

Hello dear,😊

How r u??

I loved the way the boy supported his girl in every single way.I just loved the characters bonding..👏 Ahh!! Finally the confession just touched my heart..😃

Thank you so much for giving such beautiful writings to us dear..And thanks for the PM..🤗 If it's not your PM, I would have really missed a nice piece of work.

Stay blessed and be happy.❤️

Thanks,

Geetha.

HEY GEETHA😊

I'M FINE DEAR...BIT BUSY IN MY PERSONAL AND PROFESSIONAL LIFE...

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ALL THE LOVELY WORDS YOU SHOWERED ME WITH...THOUGH I DOUBT ABOUT DESERVING THEM BUT STILL IT WON'T CHANGE THE FACT THAT YOU MADE MY DAY WITH THEM.

GLAD TO KNOW YOU FELT IT WAS NICE PIECE OF WORK ❤️

Originally posted by: nishita23

Superb story 👏 u describe every emotions very perfectly. ..loved it. ...keep writing like this

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

beautiful os

Originally posted by: krishuuu

Muktai sweetie...

Awesome update...enjoyed it...

I imagined swasan in this scenario...i cried reading swara condition... but sansku did not let her go after finding her...n restored her back ...it was touching update...

Update soon...

Talia

HELLO EVERYONE THERE...