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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: _khwaish_
Awsm os..

THANK U SO MUCH KHWAISH.

FOR MAKING ME SIGH IN RELIEF WITH VERY FAST REPLY ON THS OS.😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Really nicely and powerfully written Mukta! I am in between tasks and struggling for time and will try to post more detailed views but just in case still wanted to let you know that I read and am very impressed at how you handled this. The intensity and power of the emotions and all other factors coming through very well!

I hope you don't mind me being brief for now!

Love,

Shruti x

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mukti it was a superb os
I known you didn't have given a name but i have imagine this story on two couples swasan and nibir because i am hard core fan of this two lovely couples. 😳
Beautiful confession 👏

Seriously beautifully written 👏 👏
Loved it ❤️
Do write more os

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome OS Mukta.👏

Although u didn't mention any name in the OS but while reading the OS I was imagining the couple to be my SwaSan.😉 What to do? These days I'm becoming so obsessed with SwaSan.😳 😆Just loved the OS very much. Thank u for the pm.😃

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Nupur

@Nupur_5

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Mukta dear, first of all thank you for the dedication though I already told you there is no need for this! Still you did and I'm so honoured that an amazing writer like you have dedicated one of her beautiful piece to me along with Viji (Who rightfully deserve it)

So lots of love & hugs for this gesture :)

Coming to the OS: I really loved it like I did your every other pieces!

You didn't use name and told us to imagine any couple of our choice! Bt I only could imagine SwaSan NOT just bcoz I'm a diehard SwaSan fan, which I'm ofcourse, but also this couple is so like SwaSan!

Even it looks like to me that you were also saw them as SwaSan while writing this OS, as you used few SwaSan moments along with SwaSan's traits! Like you gave one beautiful love confession which was used by Swara saying Sanskaar that she loves him two, three, four...till INFINITY <3

So it was a SwaSan OS throughout, for me, as well as many others I can bet!

It was such a beautiful piece of writing which I enjoyed immensely!

Swara & Sanskaar's (As I told you already it is SwaSan for me) every feelings were described so beautifully! You penned down their feelings so beautifully poignant, thus took my heart!

Awesome and mindblowing!

I want to say so much more but little busy with exams hence stoping my rambling here!

Love you once again dear :)

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Razia Ajmal

@raaz19

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

It's beautiful...The writing in this o's is very well connected and bold...A power pact piece full of emotions which very from longing to love to trust and mainely the true feeling of trust...

Is see this piece focuses on trust and believing in once self...The added impact of making sure you graphics things with full force and look ahead always only adds to the beauty of this piece. ..

The bond really reminded me of swansan and yes sorry I said it...of course the piece is about any couple but I felt like I could watch them enact this pain and struggle...The bond was epic...

Seriously never fear what you have written is not good...its always amazing time read the depth and message you try to send across. ..

I hope everyone that reads this feels the same. ..that yes like you said never give up hope or chance of happiness as if you let it in life can only be as colourful as you make it...

And in your story that connection is based upon the trust if a forever in eternal bond of friendship...

Loved it...

Sorry to ramble on buddy...muktia you deserve a big round of 🤗 for this piece...

Take care...

Raz

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Tulishikha Biswas

@Dark-Beauty

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Beautifully written

Brilliant work

Love it

Thanks for pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey Mukta my dear 🤗 🤗

Firstly I am so touched by your dedication. It was and will always be a pleasure to be your buddy. 🤗 Keep shining and Best Wishes always for your lovely and successful future, filled with joy and contentment, my dear.

Coming to the OS: such a lovely title, first of all. Silver lining...truly, in the darkest of circumstances there is sometimes someone who serves as an anchor, a bedrock of support.

The way you have etched Swara's intense misery and anguish at losing her mother, her reasons for distancing herself from Sanskaar; and then the resolute, loving way Sanskaar brings Swara back from all that pain: this was superbly described. I don't mind admitting that I was teary in some parts, it was so moving.

The journey of recovering from a shattering loss, of finding happiness and love again, to emerge into the bright sunlight of a satisfying life once again...wonderful touch there.

Lovely read for a Sunday morning...and the message was wonderful...that no matter how dark life looks, there is always a silver lining, a way to come back to better times.

Always stay blessed and keep smiling, my dear.

Lots of Love

Viji

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Aayat23

@Aayat23

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
Really nicely and powerfully written Mukta! I am in between tasks and struggling for time and will try to post more detailed views but just in case still wanted to let you know that I read and am very impressed at how you handled this. The intensity and power of the emotions and all other factors coming through very well!

I hope you don't mind me being brief for now!

Love,

Shruti x

Hi Shruti,

Seriously you read this? 😲I mean like seriously?😲 😳

Take your time because for me length of reply doesn't matter because you made my day with reading and appreciating it.😳

I am still unable to believe that you felt it to be nicely and powerfully written and something like this completely off track impressed you and you saying what I wanted to bring came out nicely and had its desired impact.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT TIME FOR THIS AND LEAVING YOUR PRECIOUS REVIEW😊

STAY BLESSED

MUKTA😊