THE BROKEN RELATION (CH--8 UPDATED. ON PG-17......) - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: -Claptrap-

Very nice dear...

Happy to see that Ragini is now MD of a company
Feeling sad that Ragiv too went to Triple S team...

Waiting for the next update...:D


glad u liked it...

will update next part soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Shinning_AD

What a lovely story 😊

Poor Ragini she lost everything and was even sent to hostel and after 12th she didn't call and no one was bothered about her 😡😡

But glad she's indepedent now and hope she stays strong 😳😳

So SanLak are swara's best friend .. Interesting

Update soon

thanks anjale... glad u liked it...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Berlin

Hope you update soon :) waiting to read more

will update soon...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Berlin

Hope you update soon :) waiting to read more

yep wait is over... i am going to update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update is here...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
CH--4
Some new entries in this chapter--
Shafaq Naaz-- As in Aarti... Ragini's PA cum neibhour cum friend.She is a bubbly & cheerful person. She is an orphan.
Shaheer Sheikh-- Vivaan Kapoor,He is best friend of Ragini.He manages the Kolkata branch of "JR Enterprises". He is a lawyer too.
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Scene start in Mumbai--
Ragini is talking to Janki's pic.
Ragini- She mom your daughter has grown, she has grown up mom...
"And became a worholic too" a voice comes.
Ragini turns. Its Aarti.
Ragini- Aarti...
Aarti- Yes Mam, your PA is here.
Ragini knows she is miffed with her.
Ragini- Aarti... why are you talking like this?
Aarti- So how shld i talk? Haa... Yesterday whole night u were working here, & today u have 5-7 meetings lined up... RB if u will work so much , who will take care of ur health. Haa.(Yes, Ragini's friends, collegue & employees call her RB)
Ragini- Sorry, meri Maa, galti ho gayi abb maaf karr de.
Aarti- Chhal maaf kiya... Aur haa yeh matt bhulna, main terri PA honne ke saath saath teri dost & neighbour bhi hu.
Ragini- Yep by bad luck...
Aarti- What...
They both laugh.
Scene shifts to Kolkata--
Sanskaar & Laksh reaches baadi. They meet Sharmishta & Shekher.
Sanskaar- Uncle were is Shona, she has her cocert today.
Laksh- Yaa uncle, were is she.
Swara comes down with a guitar.
Swara- Hii guys, i am ready, lets go.
Sanskaar- haa, chhalo... they leave...
They reach the Venue & see the preparations.
Scene shifts to Ragini--
She calls someone.
Ragini- Kaam hua...
Other side- Aaj ho jayyen ga
Ragini- Good, i will be there day after tommorow, i.e. Wednesday.
Otherside- Fine, i will be waiting for u. Bye..
Ragini cuts the call. She goes to her chair & takes out a pic. Its the pic of Shekher.
Ragini- I am coming Mr. Gadodia... And ur fall down starts... Be ready for your destruction. She smriks...
Scene shifts on a road--
A car stops near a house. A hansome man gets down. He looks at the house infront of him. He knocks. A women opens the door.
Man- Is Mr.Mehra at home.
Lady- Yes, plz come..
The man enters & sits on sofa. Lady go to call Mehra. He comes.
Mehra- Hello, who are u.
Man- Hello , Mr. Mehra, i am Vivaan... Vivaan Kapoor.
Mehra- How can i help u.
Vivaan- I will come to the point Mr. Mehra. I wanna buy "Anand Vihaar Baadi" (name of baadi where Gadodia's live)
Mehra- What??? but...i have promised Maheshwaris that i will sell it to them.
Vivaan- Mr Mehra... in business there is no value of promise if u dont have any legal contract & i dont think u have.
Mehra- But... they are giving me 5 crores for baadi, whose face value today is just 1.25 crores..
Vivaan- 8 crores...
Mehra- What???
Vivaan- 10...
Mehra- Actually... woh..
Vivaan- 12...
Mehra is shocked. He was happy from inside.
Vivaan read his expression & gave a knowing look.
Vivaan- Last is 15 crores...
And he was abt to go , when,
Mehra- Okay... fine deal done..
Vivaan- Fine, get the papers ready on JR Enterprises name. And here is your 10 crore, remaining once we get the papers.
They shake hands & Vivaan leaves. He calls Ragini (He is the same person whom Ragini called in the conversation given above)---
Ragini- Yes, Vivaan, i was waiting for ur call.
Vivaan- Congrats RB, work is done.
Ragini smriks & says- that's good... thanks..
Vivaan- Common, sweety, we are frnds... so no
thanks, no sorry...
Ragini- Vivaan... u will not change... flirt ke flirt raho gey tum...
Vivaan- Thanks for the complement...
Ragini- Okay bye... see u soon...
Vivaan- Bye...

Ragini keeps the phone & says- "Just wait & watch Mr. Gadodia, the game begins..."

Scene shifts to Swara's concert--

It was time for performance. Maheshwari & Gadodia's have arrived there. Sanskaar & Laksh were helping Swara in last minute preparations. They wished her luck. Swara comes on stage.

She sings---
O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera

Ishq fikar da chatte balla
Mauj karda ho ke jhalla jeeve...
Ishq mein dil na
Hoyea fakeeri
Maange sab ki
Khair sukayya, jeeve...
Gira deewareee...
Laga lalkareee...
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... Ho dhunki laage ve
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... Ho dhunki laage ve

Tu hawa
Paani aag hai
Tu daga
Daani daag hai
Jo bhi chave tu...
Ban jaave... Re...
Hai bana Mera
Dil khuda
Hai khuda
Kab mujhse juda
Khudko dhoonde
Toh ussko pave re
Gira deeware...
Laga lalkare...
Ishq di masti de
Vich sone de jaage...ye...yeah...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage...ve...
Dhunki dhunki dhunki laage... Ho dhunki laage ve...

O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye meray
O malang hua
Dil ye mera
Hai mast malang hua
Dil ye mera...

All cheers for her... Sanskaar & Laksh shows thumps up to her...
Screen stops on happy faces... As they did not knew what strom is going to come into there lives... To know more... Stay tuned...
So how is the chapter...
Guys give ur feed back in comments... So that i can know ur views...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Awesome dear :) please update soon want to know more! Hope Ragini will destroy SheKhar because he is heartless
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Nice update CK 👍🏼

Looking forward to Ragini's work n incoming storm😆


Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Nice update...
Waiting for Ragini's entry in Kolkatta and in SwaSanLak lives😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Dis is being soo intresting..
plzz updte soon.
Thnkww for pm

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