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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
CH-5
Scene start with all Cheering for Swara. SanLak shows thumps up to her. Concert ends. The family members (except dada-dadi, they dont come in such concerts) & Maheshwaris come outside.
They all praise Swara. They drop Gadodia's to baadi & leaves. As they enter MM,just then Adarsh gets a call informing him abt the sell of Baadi. Adarsh was shocked. He tells DP. All were shocked.
DP- What... but how can Mehra sell baadi to some one else.
Adarsh- i dont know papa... but i gotta know that they offered him 15Crores.
Sanskaar- What bhai... 15 crores for a baadi whose face value is just 1.25 crores.
Laksh- It means 12 times the face value...
DP- Which company has buyed it...
Adarsh- Dad its "JR Enterprises"
Sanky- They ... 15 crore is nothing for them.
DP- Question is not that Sanskaar, question is what interest they have in this Baadi that they gave 12 times the face value.
Laksh- May be something...
DP- Any ways... let it be ... They all go to there rooms.
Scene shifts to Mumbai--
Ragini was in office checking the files. ust then Aarti comes.
Aarti- Oye Madam workholic, see the time it 10:00 pm...lets go... Only we two are here.
Ragini- Aarti , just a little work is remaining...
Aarti- RB... work can be finished tommorrow too.. Now lets go.
Ragini closing the file, Okay lets go. They leave.
In the car--
Ragini was driving.
Ragini- Aarti... I have to tell u something.
Aarti- Haa, bol...
Ragini- We both are going to Kolkatta, day after tommorrow & i am thinking to make Kolkatta branch our 2nd head office. What say...
Aarti-- that's a good idea, but... (after few min. silence) Rb.. will u be able to face them. (As she knows her past.)
Ragini (with a scarastic smile)-- They are no one for me.. no one... I have only 2 ppl inmy life i.e. You & Vivaan.
Aarti (to make things normal)-- Haa, woh tumharra ek number ka flirt frnd na, jab dekho tab larkiyo se flirt karta rahta hai.
Ragini smiles & says- Main jaanti hu tum donno ki bilcul nahi bannti, hai na.
Aarti- Aisi baat nahi hai... actually uttana burra bhi nahi hai. Handsome hai...
Ragini looks at her. Aarti realise what she said,
Aarti- Abbb.. Merra matlab. gadha hai woh, khubsurat larki dekhi nahi flirt karne mein lagg jaata hai...
Ragini- accha.. Aur tumhe jalan hotti hai, ki woh tumse flirt nahi karta, right.
Aarti- Wahhi toh..
Ragini laughs...
Aarti (embarrased)- Chal ghar aa gaya.. Bye.
She run out of the car. Ragini parks the car & goes to her house , which is besides Aarti.
Scene shifts to Kolkatta, baadi--
All were having dinner.
Rajiv- Wow dii, aap ne kiya ganna gaya. Mazza aa gaya.
Swara smiles & says- Thanks, chottu bhai...
Rajiv- Dadi, Dadu, aap donno ko bhi wahha honna chahiye thha.
They just smile, a little.
Just then dada starts coughing. Sharmishta was abt to give him water, when dadi stops her. She takes another glass & gives water to Dada ji.
Dadi- Aap thhik hai...
Dada- Haa...
They all complete there food & go to there room.
Scene shifts to Mumbai, Ragini's house--
She was having her dinner. She was all alone. In these 20 yrs she is used to this silence. Even in hostel she used to be silent. During breakfasts, lunch or dinner, she wld take her plate & sit in a corner alone & eat. But atleast there She cld see students chatting & moving here & there, which wld somewhat lessen her lonliness. But here she had no one. Just her.
Her thought chain breaks by a call. Its Vivaan's call--

Ragini- Haa, Vivaan... bolo...
Vivaan- Hii, Rb... all the arrangements are done.
Ragini- thanks...
Vivaan- What.
Ragini- Sorry
Vivaan- Rb...
Ragini- Okay baba no thanks, no sorry... Now tell how u called... at this time.
Vivaan- Voh.. I wanted to confirm that u are coming a day after tommorrow... right..
Ragini- Yes...
Vivaan- So are u coming alone.
(Ragini understood what he wanna ask)
Ragini- Haa, why??
Vivaan- No, just... BTW your frnd is not coming with u?
Ragini (teasing)- Who Vivaan??
Vivaan- Yaar... ur frnd Aarti...
Ragini- ohh. u are talking abt Aarti... BTW that Aarti na who is my frnd & PA also.
Vivaan- Yes...
Ragini- That Aarti with whom u keep on fighting na...
Vivaan- Haa... Ragini... (He was cut off by her)
Ragini- That Aarti whom u call kiddo, right..
Vivaan (totally frustrated)- Haa, yaar... (again was cut off by Ragini)
Ragini- Aarti Whom u love alot?
Vivaan (He was very much frustrated, so without thinking, he says)- Haa, haa ,haa... that Aarti only...
Ragini chukles a little. Vivaan realises what he said.
Vivaan- Woh ... Okay... I will talk to u later... Bye & cuts the call.
Ragini- Arrey Vivaan.. listen... but he cuts the call...
Ragini smiles & goes to sleep.

Next Day--
Scene starts in Baadi--
Gadodia's were having breakfast in there house. There neighbours to doing there work. Just then few ppl enters with lots of flowers. They started decorating baadi with flowers. All were confused. Hearing voices Gadodias to came out.
They also did not understood what was happening...

Screen freezes on there confused faces...

So how is this chapter...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72
nice one CK 👏

waiting for the storm in BAADI by Ragini.


update soon
Edited by Michael13 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
Nice one...
Waiting for Ragini to enter baadi...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
Disgusting people yar. Waiting for shekhar's downfall. I feel admiration as well as pity on Ragini character. Let Ragini be favourite baby of MM. One request pls make it Raglak yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
Nice update...
So tashan gonna begin soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
waiting for story forward..
thnkww for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Wow Ck Ragini in Creates Earthquake Lol
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
Nice update can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Nice update😊
Love the build up but ab jaldi se Ragini ko Gadodias ke saamne lao😆
So Vivian and Aarti like each other😃
I love the trick Ragini used to get Vivian to confess his feelings😆
Really eager for the next part😃😃😃

P.s. Sorry have been a bit busy so havent commented on d previous chaps, but will do so soon😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
CH-6
Scene starts in Kolkata, Baadi--
Hearing the voices Gadodia's to came out of there house. They see Baadi is being decorated with flowers.
Swara- What's this baba?? Why is our baadi being decorated??
Shekher- I dont know beta...
Rajiv- Dii, i think any of ur mad fan is doing this for u... (he smiles)
Swara glares at him & says- Shut up... Chottu bhai...
Shekher goes towards one man who was decorating the baadi.
Sekher- Yeh, tum logg baadi ko kuy decorate karr rahe ho.
Man- Humme nahhi patta,sirf ittna patta hai ki "JR Enterprises" se order hai...
Shekher- "JR Enterprises"...
Just then Sanskaar & Laksh enters baadi. They see Baadi being decorated. They go towards Gadodia's.
Sanky- Hii, what's happening?
Swara- Hii , Sanskaar & Laksh... Dad has gone to ask.
Just then Shekher comes there,
Sharmishta- What happened Shekher, what did they say?
Shekher- They just said that they got order frm "JR Enterprises"
Laksh- Oh... Uncle... actually JR Enterprises have purchased this baadi.
Swara- What??
Sanskaar- Haa & that too on 15 crores...
Rajiv- 15 cr is 12 times the face value. What's that in our baadi that they gave so much of price.
Sanskaar- No one knows... But for JR 15cr is just a small amt.
Dada- Anyways, i am going to shop. He leaves.
Shekher too leaves.
Dadi (to herself)- Why do i feel that something big is going to happen today?
She goes to her room.
Scene shifts to Ragini--
She is boarding the flight for Kolkata, Aarti too is there. They enter the flight & takes there sit. The flight takes off. Ragini go closes her eyes & goes into a flashback--
Little Ragini was then 4 yrs old & Rajiv was just born. Ragini was sitting with Janki.
Little Ragini- Mumma, bhook laggi hai..
Janki- Accha, toh kya khaana hai merri laddo ko.
Little Ragini- Maggi...
Janki- Ooo... Accha, main abhi laati hu, tum apne chottu bhai ke paas baitho.
She goes & comes with maggi. She makes Ragini eat. Ragini happily sleeps on her lap...
Present---
A sweet smile comes on Ragini 's face. Suddenly she gets flashback of Janki's death. She open eyes with a jerk. She was sweating. Aarti notices.
Aarti- Rb are u Okay... Everything fine...
Ragini- Yaa, i am fine...She gets thinking...
Scene shifts to Baadi--
Sanskaar, Swara, Laksh & Rajiv were talking & laughing.
Sanskaar gets a call from DP. After the call--
Sanskaar- Lucky lets go badde papa has called us to the office.
Sanky & Laksh leaves.
Scene shifts to Vivaan--
Its Kapoor 's house. Vivaan was getting ready. He remembers his & Ragini's conversation & his conffession, a smile comes on his face.
Vivaan -- So miss Kiddo is also coming with RB... Be ready kiddo...
He leaves from his house for airport.
Scene shifts to Airport--
The plane lands on Kolkata airport. Ragini & Aarti get down the plane. They take there luggage.
Ragini thinks-- Ek baar phir ittne saalo baad, iss seher mein waapis aayi hu main, lekin aaj bhi kucch nahi badla. Aur aggar kucch badla toh woh main... Apni barbaadi ke liye tayaar ho jaao Shekher Gadodia... Tumharri barbaadi aayi hai...
She gets out of her thoughts when Aarti shakes her a little.
Aarti- Rb...
Ragini- Haa...
Aarti- Woh duffer nahi aaya abhi tak...
"Mere baare mein baat karr rahi ho" Vivaan says coming near to Aarti's ear frm back.
Aarti turns immediately. Ragini too turns.
Ragini- Vivaan...
Vivaan- Rb...
They hug. Ragini breaks it.
Vivaan- So kaisi ho... Aur Kiddo, how are u..
Aarti (pissing her teeth)- I am not a kiddo, Donkey...
Vivaan- What. u called me a donkey?
Aarti- Yes, donkey...
Vivaan- Rb... i thought ur frnd has eyes but i think she does not have. See to a handsome boy like me , she is calling donkey.
Ragini chuckles a little.
Aarti- Oh... really ... hansome my foot...
Vivaan- See kiddo...
Aarti- Dont call me that donkey...
Vivaan- Kiddo... kiddo... kiddo...
Aarti- You...
Ragini- Okay... dont start here, u both... lets go..
Vivaan- Yaa...
They keep the luggage in car & leaves. They reach Vivaan's house. (Ragini & Aarti wld stay there only. Vivaan 's father died when he was 7 yrs old, & his mother too died 3 yrs back. He was living with his gradmaa, who was on her rishikesh trip.) They enter the house. It has 6 rooms.(One room was for grand maa, one was used as gym & one was Vivaan's room & one was there cook's room... Two guest room were there, one of which was given to Ragini & one to Aarti.) Vivaan shows Aarti & Ragini there rooms. Meanwhile, there cook brings water.
Ragini- Vivaan , were is Dadi??
Vivaan- Rishikesh trip...
Ragini- Ohh..
Vivaan- Okay u both get fresh & then we will talk. Haa...
Ragini & Aarti nods...

Screen stops on Ragini's face...

So how is this chapter...

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