Lost in relations- swasan/raglak part 12 updated 18 july - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
hii guys... thanks for the responses that i'm getting. i know that i have not put so much swasan scenes in my updates and i'm going slow with their track. i promise that in the upcoming parts i will try to add as much as possible for both the couples so that i don't disappoint any one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
beautiful chapter. so swasan is attracted to each other. don't worry we wait for swasan scenes. 😳 update soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Nice update somehow I wish sanskaar and lakh show up in goa would be awesome...
Cannot wait for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Hello guys...I wanted to make some things clear that would come up in the upcoming updates. I have chose goa but the truth is I haven't been to india so I know nothing about it...I would like to apologise if you see any thing unusual in the update I would just write how I imagine it to be..
Secondly I really appreciate your comments and I'm happy that u r liking my updates although it's not at a good level of writing. Once again thank you so much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Part 8

It has been 2 days since Ragini has left with her family. Lucky could not deny the fact that he was missing her madly. It was also not possible for him to talk to her very often, as she also had to spend time with her new family. With that laksh had explained him self but after all he is Laksh he had to think of a way to achieve what he wanted, and for now he wanted Ragini.

"Come on lucky think of something that papa will allow you to go" he thought as he was going around his room. Just then sanskar came

"Hey lucky what r u doing. Lets go down dinner is already served" sanskar saw that he was disturbed "lucky is everything ok?" he asked concerned as he moved towards his brother. "Any problem.. Is it regarding Ragini"

"ha bhai.. what else can it be" laksh answered facing sanskar. "I told u that she has left with her family on a holiday"

"Yap so?" sanskar now confused what the problem could be

"So im missing her" laksh shouted back at his brother's confused face

"What" sanskar gave him unbelievable look before he busted out loud laughing

"r u serious... you know you looked so tensed I thought it's a bigger problem but...hahahaha" sanskar could not stop himself from laughing at his younger brother.

Laksh gave him a deadly look to indicate him it was not funny.

"Lucky it has just been a few days and its not like she wont come back... so just chill" he tried to reason him. What did he know that when you r in love such feelings are common.

"Bhai I know that u find it stupid... but wait for your time and you will understand my situation. But as for now please help me I really want to meet her." laksh explained and begged his big bro to help with the idea.

Its true that sanskar doesn't know about love and all and he was never interested in such things but he knew that he had to help his Lucky and he cant see him like that.

"Ok I will think of something and let you know... As for now we have to go down everyone is waiting" sanskar and laksh heeded down and joined the family member for dinner.

Every one was having their meal when they heard sanskar asking Dp.

"bade papa actually I wanted to ask your permission."
ha tell me beta.. what do you want" Dp answered looking at sanskar and the others also looking at him waiting for him to speak.

Sanskar looked at laksh indicating him that he got the idea. Laksh was more eager than Dp to know the idea and if his dad would agree. "Actually bade papa I was thinking now that we don't have so much work at the office and Uttara also has her holidays why don't we all go on a holiday"

"Wow bhai that's a good idea" uttara jumped in all excited. laksh smiled at his brother for giving this idea but it now depended on Dp.

"Well it a good idea but im afraid it wont be possible" he looked at the sad faces of his kid then smiled a little "it wont be possible for us elders to go, but you guys can go" they all smiled at his decision. Dp was a serious kind a guy but its not like he didn't know how to jock with the family.

"Bade papa why aren't you guys going it will be fun" uttara sounded a bit sad that it wont be a family holiday

" actually we have been invited at a friend wedding so we will be going there... you guys go." He explained sweetly to uttara. "by the way where r you guys planning to go?

"Goa" laksh jumped in so fast leaving all confused. Except sanskar. "I mean Goa its a good place. And it closer so" he tried to cover up. By now the youngsters had known the actual reason.

"ok you guys can go"

with that they all had finished their dinner and retreated back to their rooms.

After a few minutes sanskar was in his room as usual working in his laptop when laksh came and gave him a side hug thanking him for the idea.

"I must say bhai you r the best... you came with the idea so fast."

Sanskar smiled at him just then they were joined by Adapari and uttara.

"bhai really I wanted a holiday from so long.. thank you bhai" uttara came and hugged laksh. " because of you finally I get to see goa" uttara stopped and gave him a naughty smile..."actually not because of you by because of Ragini" she smiled at him. "first I thought it was going to be a normal holiday we have always had but when you suggested the place. We all got to know its your idea."

"Seriously laksh you r one of a mad lover." Parineeta smiled and his devar.

They kept on talking and planning their trip here laksh was eager to go as soon as possible. He could not wait any more.

After a lot of discussion and planning they had checked and luckily got tickets for tmrw after noon. With that they all went back to their rooms and started packing.

*****

Here in Goa it was a lovely atmosphere during the night so peaceful compared to its days. Swara and Ragini had decided to go to the beach and relax a bit leaving their tired parents to go to their room. Swaragini were really enjoying the trip. In these two days they have visited some tourist places as planned.

"swara this place is really one of its kind... right?" Ragini sat down next to her sister enjoying the cold breeze and admiring the waves of the sea.

"ha Ragini it is a beautiful city. " they were all silent lost in there own thoughts when Ragini's phone rang. "there your BF's call.. god ya he never leaves you alone" swara teased Ragini and told her to pick up the phone.

"yar its not like we talk the whole day" Ragini defended laksh and her self before she picked up the phone. She got up and went a bit away to talk telling swara she would be back.

***

"hello laksh"

"hi Ragini were r u... I missed you"

I missed you 2.. what happened you sound happy"

Of course I'm... you know I'm coming to..." laksh stopped himself. He wanted to surprise Ragini but his excitement was going to betray him.

"your coming to what laksh" Ragini broke his thoughts and brought him back.

"ahh actually ahhm" laksh was stuck with words "ha actually I called to inform you we.. I mean me and bhai have won the contract"

"ohh really congrats" Ragini was happy again but was not going to get convinced so easily "but I heard you said something about coming..."

lucky you r really lucky you have such a genius girlfriend' laksh mocked himself. "baby nothing like that maybe you heard that"

"but" Ragini was cut by laksh

"what yar I called you because I missed you so much and we r busy in such faltu talks" he changed his tone to sound romantic which melted Ragini very easily.

"Ragini how's your trip your enjoying na?"

"haa im really enjoying it here. Im really happy"

"ohh so you don't miss me and me here im missing you so much and thinking that you would be missing me 2 but I guess you don't have time." Laksh started teasing. Letting Ragini smile at his antics.

"you started your melodrama again. By the way I know that you r just trying to gain sympathy so better luck next time Mr. Laksh Maheshwari" Ragini sent out a small laugh.

"You know when I saw you the first time I always thought that you would be those kind of typical girls but today I got to know that we should never judge and reach to conclusion by someone's appearance." Laksh smiled when he was remembering the first time he saw Ragini.

FLASHBACK

It was a lovely morning at the temple. Laksh had decided to finally go and look at it. He was never those kind of people who would usually go and pray, and he never found it necessary to go because they had one in their house. Whenever he would visit temple outside it would always be with the whole family on special occasions.

It was a big day today, he had decided to join the business just like how his brothers did and make his family proud. He didn't want to show that he was nervous so he didn't pray at home and left early in the morning.

He was running up the stairs when all of a sudden he collided with a girl who was holding the arti plate. Luckily he caught her before she could land.

"Im so sorry" he was awestruck with the view. Her eyes that just drew him more into her, he just wanted to keep on staring.

Listen im ok u can let me go now" her melodious voice got him back to reality. He took out his hands and bended down with her and helped her in picking the plate.

"im really sorry I..."

it ok" she gave him back a smile that could easily melt him.

The stood up laksh know admired her from top to bottom her clothing. She wore a simple and typical suite. After scanning her he could simply get out that she is a very traditional girl. Who would never be one of his type but he didn't know what was it that he just couldn't take out his eyes off her.

Hi im laksh" he forwarded his hand hopping she would return the shake.

She looked at his hands and forwarded her hand.

"hi" they shake hands and then she left. Laksh was so busy admiring her that he didn't even notice that she didn't tell her name.

FLASHBACK ENDS

"Hahah very funny" she let out a sarcastic laugh that made him laugh too.

"Laksh I got to go I left swara alone ok bye ill talk to you tmrw.

"Ok bye good night"

Good night" just as she was pulling back she heard his voice

"Listen... I love you" how could he forget to say it.

Me too" Ragini replied

"You too what" laksh teased her a bit more wanting to hear it.

"I love you too... happy" Ragini smiled at his childless act.

"Very" with that they cut the call.

I can't wait to see you tmrw Ragini" laksh smiled and went to sleep.

****

"Done talking with your boyfriend" swara asked as he got up heading towards Ragini. "he always disturbs us... What do you guys talk about that he calls you repeatedly. Don't you run out of topics to talk about?" swara looked at his sister who was smiling back.

"You know what you wont understand until your time comes."
"My time ohh plzz..." swara gave her the unbelievable look. "You know I have decided that I will have an arranged marriage. It's much better than this fiasco. I wont have to hide or talk to him secretly. Actually you know what I won't waste my time talking to him. We will talk after marriage."

Ragini just smilled back at her "ohh what if he asks for your number what would you do."
"easy I would behave like you"

Like me" Ragini was awestruck with her statement.

"haa I know that you r very ahead and not like what every one thinks you to be" swara looked at her sister's face that clearly conveyed her confusion. "I mean to say that you r very traditional but who would know that behind this sweet and simple girl there is a mischievous lady. Who already has a bf and... Should I say more" swara teased her and run leaving Ragini to figure out what she was thinking about.

"Swaraa!!!!" Ragini shouted and run behind her.

With that they went back to their rooms and slept after a hectic day.

******

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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Wonderful update.
Waiting to see SwaSan fall in love.
Laksh is too eager to be with Ragini😆
Liked the bond between the siblings.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
nice chapter. lucky and his sweet love acts. waiting for swasan love story. 😳 continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Beautiful... 👏
Update the nxt one soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
Good update..
Raglak part is superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Read all parts together..
Wonderful updates..
Ur story is really good
Update soon..nd pls pm me

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