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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 9

Yet another beautiful morning in Goa, sunrays waking up the beautiful Gadodia girls. Swara was first awake. Its not normal but she wasn't going to waste her time In her sleep. She got up with an angelic smile and went directly to the window and watched outside. Just then someone knocked.

Swara opened the door to see her parents wishing her good morning already dressed up.

"Morning" Sharmishta and Shekhar entered giving her a side hug. "you guys r not ready... Ragu get up" sharmishta pulled the blanket that woke up Ragini very easily.

"Morning maa...papa" Ragini greeted in her sleepy voice.

"Morning now come on get up and get ready we r waiting for you guys down. We will have breakfast together.

"Ok you guys go a head we will join you in a while" swara closed the door after thy left and told Ragini she is going to take a bath and strictly told her to not go back to sleep.

"Yar swara how come you get up early which its not your habit.. And yesterday we slept so late." Ragini yawned and lied back.

"Well I'm so excited that I don't even want to sleep and you know na today where we r going so I'm so excited to go there that even my sleep disappeared." Swara shouted excitedly at her sister as she was closing the bathroom door.

After ten mins she came out and woke up Ragini to go and freshen up.

About 30 mins later they come out of their room and headed down to join their parents. While walking down swara saw Ragini checking her phone repeatedly.

"Rags what happened your looking at your phone every time"

"Ha actually today laksh didn't call.. he always calls in the mornings."

"Ohh maybe he is caught up with something or maybe its already late so he might have thought that you r already with maa baba and any ways he will call later so don't worry." Ragini was a bit calm but she was not herself because she was used of starting her day with his phone calls.

They went and sat with their parents and had their breakfast. After that they left for site seeing. The day was very nice and hectic, as always after a lot of enjoinment and fun. The night had came and swaragini went to the beach leaving their tired parents to go back to their room and grab some rest.

Swaragini were walking on the beach. Swara talking non stop when after a while she noticed that Ragini was lost again.

"Yar Ragini here I'm speaking nonstop and you r not even listening to me.. where r you lost" swara shook her lightly.

"no nothing what were you saying sorry I didn't hear you" Ragini answered with a small smile which swara knew it was a fake one.

"hey what wrong you look tensed every thing ok? Is it regarding laksh?" swara turned Ragini to make her face her. Ragini would always share every problem with swara either happy or sad.

"noo.. I mean yes. Actually laksh hasn't called yet and you know na he always calls at these times but look he also didn't call now. I'm really tensed." Ragini shared her stress with swara.

Don't worry... and why don't you call him... come on m sure you can afford credit to talk to him" swara teased her a bit which brought back her smile.

"ok let me call him"

ya plzz.. I cant look at your scary face for so long" swara smiled at her joke letting her smile too. Of course Ragini knew the actual meanings of her statement. She knew very well that swara would never like to see her so sad and it was the same with her.

Ragini took out her phone and started dialing laksh number. But the female voice came saying its not reachable. She shared it with swara which increased her tension. She started blabbering to swara why the phone was not reachable.

"don't worry I have uttara's number let me call her maybe she is with laksh." Swara tried to calm her down and took out her phone and dialed uttara's number but to her surprise it was also not reachable. She told Ragini the same.

After a number times of trying they heard a voice from behind.

"hii girls" first they were scared but then Ragini recognized the voice

"laksh" Ragini turned leaving swara confused

"laksh?" swara thought to her self before she turned.

When they turned they saw him smiling showing all his teeth. Ragini run to him. Laksh using the opportunity he hugged her right away.

"laksh you here.. I mean how come" Ragini asked pulling back from the hug.

"haa actually I just reached.." laksh looking at Swaragini's confused face he continued. "actually I thought to also come and enjoy Goa with you" he turned to Ragini seeing the confusion decreasing.

"laksh that so nice but you r here alone" Ragini asked him

"no actually adarsh babhi uttara and sanskar bhai came too"

hearing to sanskar's name swara's confused look turned to a smiling one.

"ohh so sanskar also came" swara jumped making raglak confused why she sounded so excited

"I mean uttara and adarsh bhai and bhabi also came it would be nice na..." she tried to cover up, herself not knowing why she was so happy with sanskar coming.

"laksh where r the others?" Ragini was so excited to meet the other.

"Ragini forget them and meet me first" laksh started teasing again letting the two smile. "and any way they have went to check in at the hotel they r really tired so they wanted to take rest."

Swara's face turned to a sad one, she wanted to see sanskar so badly. She doesn't know why she is behaving like this but she was liking it too.

"ahhm ok guys I'll leave you two some privacy. Laksh you can drop Ragini later" swara teased them a bit and immediately left them running back to the hotel hopping that he might be still at the reception. Sanskar.

As she entered she was looking all around when she noticed uttara. She run to her knowing that they will be together.

"hii uttara" swara shouted from behind running to hug her. Uttara was also happy to meet her and hugged her back.

"Its so nice to see you guys here."

"ha yar im also happy to be here. And very excited to spend this trip with you guys." uttara replied back with full excitement but she saw swara's eyes searching for something or maybe someone. She waved her hand in front of her eyes "swara what r you searching?"

Swara felt a bit embarrassed " actually I was wandering where pari bhabi and adarsh bhai r?" she tried to sound a bit normal.

"ohh actually they were tired so they already went to their room" swara smiled back at her. just then her eyes saw him. He was approaching them. He reached them and he was also very happy to see her finally after a long time.

"Hii" he forwards his hand and they shook hand. Swara felt the goose bumps and he also felt something but they both decided to ignore it.

"Bhai did you get my keys?"

"Yaa" he handed her the keys and uttara leaved them saying she was tired and she will see them in the morning.

Both where looking at each other not saying anything, after a while sanskar broke the silence.

"how r you"
"good and you"

"ya I'm fine" both where exchanging smiles. "Ahhm I guess Ragini is with laksh"

"ya I thought to leave them alone and not became kababa me hadi and look I saw you guys"

both laughed a bit of course she knew how fast she was running to meet them. Actually HIM.

"Ahh well I guess it quite late and I'm really tired.. see you tmrw...goodnight" sanskar looked at the time and excused him self.

" Ya good night I was also heading to my room" swara answered back.

"Ohh which floor?" he asked normally

"Number 4" she answered as they were going toward the lift.

"Ohh im also on the same floor" he smiled back at her.

They entered the lift and were silent through the whole journey, just smiling at each other. The lift opened and they got out both heading to their rooms saying goodnight for the second time.

Next day a new morning and a new beginning, this time both sisters got up with the first alarm. They wished each other and got up to get ready. Both were excited for the day. While they were busy getting ready Ragini's smiley face turned to a tensed one. She turned and asked swara.

"swara" she shouted which shocked her

"what's wrong why r you shouting... were in the same room" she answered a bit disturbed.

"swara laksh is here so that we can spend time together, but.." she said as she was going towards her.

"but what" swara asked not getting what her sister meant.

"swara we are here for a family holiday"

"I know that Ragini" swara turned and opened the cupboard to take something when it strike her

"ohh shoot it means it would be hard to spend time with them..." She turned to Ragini showing her no idea look I wont be able to spend time with sanskar' swara thought to herself. swara what happened to you why you always relate every thing back to him...' she shook her head and told her self to concentrate and ignored what ever was coming in to her mind.

"swaraa" Ragini shook her asking where she is lost sighing with her hands

"I was thinking how its going to be... any way you don't worry we will think of something" swara smiled sadly and both finished their final touches and headed down to join their parents.

When they reached the dining room swaragini saw their parents seating with someone but they could see who it was. They were facing his back. They looked at each other giving the questioning look then started going towards them. Shekhar noticed them coming and smiled at them. When they reached they wished them good morning then turned to the guy. Both were shocked. The guy and swaragini just kept looking at each other.

"girls meet him.. he is sanskar" yes it was non other than sanskar. Sanskar smiled normally not showing any shocked expression where one the other side they were very nervous. Shekhar told them to sit down. After that he told them how he met sanskar.

"actually we met in the lift. He is also here for a holiday with his siblings." Swasan sat opposite to each other and smiled normally when Shekhar was talking and praising sanskar. Where Ragini was going to die out of nervousness. Sanskar noticed her and gestured her not to worry through his eyes. Swara saw that and smiled at his sweet gesture he made to Ragini. About 5-6 mins later laksh and the others came down and spotted sanskar with swaragini he was going toward them when he stopped to see his future sasur sitting with them. Adarsh and others also stopped at laksh and spotted the reason

"is that your future father-in-law?" adarsh asked and laksh nodded

"but bhai is also there" laksh asked confused

"come on lets join him and act normally" adarsh answered then turned to uttara telling her to act as if she doesn't know swaragini. Adarsh knew that if sanskar was there then maybe he might have thought of something so that they don't spoil his plan they decided to act as if they didn't know swaragini.

"sanskar" adarsh called from behind pulling their attention on them.

"oh bhai come let me introduce you" sanskar got up and pulled his brothers. "uncle this is my older cousin brother adarsh and this is his wife Parineeta this is my younger sister uttara and this is your..." swaragini and the others turned to him shockingly but thank god he didn't utter more "I mean my cousin like friend laksh" sanskar smiled naughtily at laksh which was noticed by swara. She was surprised that the guy who she has always seen silent can also tease.

"and bhai this is Shekhar uncle and his wife sharmishta aunty and these r their daughters" sanskar finished up like a good introducer.

They all greeted each other and decided to sit together. Sanskar also told them how he met them in the lift. With that they all had break fast together. All where happy especially raglak. They were happy that laksh first meeting with Shekhar turned to be ok even if without knowing that he is his daughter's boyfriend.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Awesome lovely
Waiting for next update😛
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Lovely updated wow loved the way sans last worked hid magic and thanks for the pm
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Its awesome...waiting for next update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hahahahah...
Amazing...update...i soo wish for some swasan scenes now...jst lve them to thr core ...
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Awesome update
luvd it
continue soon dear ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 10

All were having breakfast normally while chitchatting; uttara and parineeta were talking with swaragini and sharmishta and the men were busy in their talks laksh not like his elder brothers he would never enjoy talking about business outside office unless it was something important. Shekhar is not a big business man but he is well educated and knows a lot about business. He was really impressed with adarsh and sanskar's knowledge. Laksh was busy admiring and staring at Ragini. He wished he had sat next to her. The ladies had been gossiping for non-stop. Pari and uttara got found of sharmishta so much. Uttara had also told swaragini how lucky they were to have such a mom, she told them how she wanted her mom to be like a friend to her and also told them how she is very strict. That's when sharmishta turned her mature mode on and explained who every mother is different to the other but it doesn't mean that she is not a good mom and doesn't know about her children.

"well I'm really impressed with your knowledge no wander the Maheshwari industry has reached at such a height" sanskar had introduced him self fully and also told him that they where the Maheshwari kids. Shekhar was really surprised but he was also impressed that they didn't try to show off and they were very respectful.

"no uncle wherever the industry is all because of bade papa and dad" sanskar answered him.

"Yes after all we r just learning from them" Adarsh added

The two brothers had impressed Shekhar after some talking his gaze turned to laksh who was completely bored. He had came to spend time with Ragini but instead it went the opposite.

"Laksh you look bored... it looks like you r not like your brothers completely" when Shekhar spoke he was able to catch every ones attention including the ladies.

Laksh was shocked with his statement. He could clearly see that Shekhar was really impressed with his brothers and he would also expect him to be like them.

Laksh turned and looked at Ragini with a tensed look not knowing what to say. It was very evident that he was nervous. No word was coming out of his mouth.

"You are right he is totally not like us" adarsh answered Shekhar looking at laksh.

Raglak were getting more hyper " I mean laksh is the one who is different in our whole family." Laksh looked at his brother with what r you saying.

"Actually laksh doesn't like to mix his personal life with professional that's why he is quite all this time" laksh breathed out felling relief.

"yes uncle" laksh answered with a smile.

"ohh then you will get along with your wife" Shekhar teased him getting a deadly look from sharmishta. Making all laugh.

"well it was nice meeting you guys. we have to leave know see you guys tmrw" Shekhar got up and told swaragini to finish up and come as he is going to call for taxi. He left with sharmishta leaving the youngsters. Just as he left laksh breathed out loudly and sat down.

"thank god... I was feeling so awkward.." he said as he sat down while his brothers laughed at his situation. Laksh got from his seat and went next to Ragini. They talked for a few minutes when swara told her that their parents must be waiting.

"what you guys r leaving" laksh asked with the unbelievable look.

"laksh I guess out of your nervousness you couldn't even hear properly" swara answered him letting out a small laugh that made the other also smile except for raglak.

Listen I'm here to spend time with your sister so figure out a way and handle your parents" laksh came forward and you can say he ordered swara.

"r you ordering me" swara asked with a questioning look

"me and order... who im I to order you... I'm begging you" laksh answered with a cute face that made every one laugh. "plzz swara you always save us and figure out something come on im sure you can think of something now also" laksh gave a pleading look that melted swara but she also had no idea at this point.

"listen I know that you came all the way for my sis but im sure you also know that we're here for a family holiday and there is no way Ragini can come with you because baba doesn't know that we know each other." Swara tried to explain and every one agreed to her point. Raglak were sad that they wont be able to spend time together. Everyone else was also sad to see the lovebirds depressed. All were thinking when Ragini's phone rang.

"hello papa, ha we are coming" with that Ragini disconnected the call and told swara and the others that they r waiting outside.

"by the way I don't understand... I mean you guys r going to meet later na so why r you sad" uttara jumped in and told raglak normally

"exactly I also don't get it and any ways back in Calcutta you guys wont together 24/7 so use your routine here also" swara joined uttara followed by Sanskar.

Adarsh and parineeta could understand their situation so they backed up.

"You guys wont understand.. When you will be in their situation then you will be able to feel how they are feeling know"

"Exactly" laksh shouted at Swasan and uttara leaving them shocked then Adapari and the other laughed at his outburst.

"well now we have to go we will think of something later." Ragini jumped in which made laksh turn to her with a surprised look.

"Ragini you really want to go..."

"no laksh but they r waiting outside if we stay here any longer and see us together they will have a doubt." Ragini answered normally which others agreed it.

"well I have an idea" swara said as she looked at them. They all looked with excitement.

"well what r you waiting for... tell us" sanskar told her that made swara look at him with an annoyed look. She thought how this guy was, sometimes quite, sometimes mischievous and sometimes serious business guy. She had wandered if he had a multiple personality disorder.

"Swara say na what is your idea" Ragini brought her out of her thoughts

tell baba the truth" she splatted out

"what!" they all busted out which scared her for a bit

"swara r you crazy... you want me to tell papa the truth" Ragini gave her the unbelievable look

"swara r you trying to get us together or separate us" laksh shouted at her.

"you asked for an idea so I gave you" swara answered with a cute pout.

"Swara I don't think it's a good idea.. I mean from what I have seen uncle today he looks like a every strict guy" adarsh spoke showing that the idea wasn't good

"no he is not strict" swaragini answered in support of their father. The maheshwaris looked at them with a confused look.

"Ragini I know that your parents had a love marriage but that doesn't mean he will accept our relationship"

"Laksh when did I say that we should tell him" Ragini shouted back

"Your parents had a love marriage" sanskar asked with a smile

"Yes.. cool na" swara answered him with a bigger smile.

"Ohh that why during graduation they called you Gadodia" sanskar said as she was going toward swara.

"Yaa and you were surprised how me and Ragini are sisters."

"I must say Shekhar uncle is a nice guy I mean he got married and accepted you" sanskar told swara turning to Ragini and others with a smile.

"No sanskar actually swara is his first daughter" Ragini corrected him with a smile forgetting the tension she had in a second. Leaving all shocked.

"Ohh you mean sharmishta aunty is his first love" parineeta asked Ragini that made her uncomfortable, which was noticed by swara. But Ragini composed herself and nodded.

"What a love story. All this years but they still love each other" uttara said with excitement.

Yaa" swaragini answered and looked at each other exchanging smiles.

All were smiling when laksh got back to the tension they had before

"Guys can we get back to the point" laksh said and brought back all to thinking, but they were disturbed with Shekhar calling them.

"See papa came," Ragini said as she looked at laksh.

All were disappointed that they couldn't come up with any idea. As swaragini was going with their dad they had Laksh calling Shekhar.

"Uncle wait" all looked at laksh with what r you doing look.

"Actually we were thinking why don't we go together" all were shocked at his statement and were nervous what will be Shekhar's reaction.

Laksh saw that he could not get what he meant so he explained more.

"Well we r also going there so why don't we go and after all I'm sure it would be more fun... what say bhai" laksh turned to his brothers asking them to jump in.

"Haa actually that's what we were thinking"

Shekhar was surprised

"Haa ok but how do you guys know where we are going" he asked, I mean he is a father so he had to be suspicious. His question made all scared.

"Ahh actually I had asked swara about some places and she had also told me where you guys were going today" parineeta jumped in looking at swara to cover up

"Ha baba" swara answered. All were relieved and Shekhar had agreed for them to go together. He left and told all to come, as they were already late.

Swaragini and the Maheshwari's were happy that finally they had succeeded.

"Lucky couldn't you come up with this idea from the beginning" sanskar asked him normally

"Ha yar you made us tire our brains for no reason" swara said with a small sarcastic tease.

"I my self don't know how this came up" laksh answered them with a small laugh that made the other also join him.

They joined Shekhar and sharmishta. He had booked another taxi already. Adapari had volunteered to go with Shekhar and sharmishta in one car so that raglak can be together. And the others got in another car.

(Guys im not adding any specific place name because I don't know so pardon me.)

At the front seat next to the driver sanskar had sat followed by swara and uttara at the middle seats and at the back raglak sat together. They all were enjoying the ride. Raglak were busy in their own romance where uttara and swara were busy admiring the city. Sanskar chipped in to swara and uttara's talks at times.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really nice update aww Raglak are sweet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hello guys just wanted to express my happiness over every one who commented.. thank you so much for sparing your precious time to read my story. i'm really sorry that i have not been able to reply your comment as i have already mentioned that i'm not very familiar of how to use the forum i have only been a silent reader and i must say we have very talented writers in the forums as a swasan fan we r very lucky coz when we r not impressed with the episode our writers are always there to make it up... all we have to do is just turn on to the forum.SO HATS OFF TO THEM AND MY BEST WISHE R WITH THEM.
back to my story i know i have been taking long lately and i'm really sorry for that. i have been caught up with family time and relatives and all that i don't get a chance to write. i'm sure you guys understand how it gets when you meet your cousin after so long. things get CRAZY.
i promise i would try my best to post the next part as soon as possible. i have already started it and i'm nearly to finish.
PLZZ BARE ME A BIT MORE

lastly i just want to say plz do comment. your comment would encourage me and also i would love to know your thought, i accept good or bad. plz feel free i would really love to know the parts you guys like also your ideas. i'm sure you guys might fell at some part i have messed up. plz do tell me.


again thank you so much :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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its OK dear take your time... we'll wait. 😳

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