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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks Sree dear! You Res'd so quick- 😳 Hope you enjoy this! Mmmwah!
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Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Vini dear! Thanks so much for the super quick comment! I am so touched! I'll reply you in detail soon too and please don't worry about the unres and time taken and all that! I am just glad you liked this and I am happy the suspense is still somehow maintained! 😉

Lots of love to you xoxo


Thanks Shruti for understanding about the res and unres😊
I just read the chapter again and I don't know why but I feel Annapurna doubts Janaki and is trying to help Swara by trying to ferret out Janaki's truth.I think I'm either too confused or trying to see some ulterior motive in every action.Guess have to wait till you unfold the mystery.But I just love doing all this guessing.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Brace yourself for I will back with an essay!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vini224


Thanks Shruti for understanding about the res and unres😊
I just read the chapter again and I don't know why but I feel Annapurna doubts Janaki and is trying to help Swara by trying to ferret out Janaki's truth.I think I'm either too confused or trying to see some ulterior motive in every action.Guess have to wait till you unfold the mystery.But I just love doing all this guessing.


LOL! OMG- since the past few chapters the theories have been truly mind boggling 😉. I cannot say anything until it is time to reveal matters. Also there were earlier various theories on who the internal real culprit was which seem to have gone quiet now 😉 and I may be throwing too many red herrings hence all the confusion and guessing games! But you know what- I LOVE it! I love all the guesses as they tell me that it could be ANYONE and even if someone gets one guess right and someone else doesn't, I feel relieved that its the guessing and not slipping too much in the script that may cause the theories. Not long now anyway till you know who cannot be trusted and who can, but remember there is always possibility for more than one person too 😉

Lots of love! xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Brace yourself for I will back with an essay!😆


Cannot wait!!! And I will be intrigued to see if you still have doubts about Sharmistha as you were literally one of the only ones who did 😉 xoxo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 30:

Shru 🤗


Swara is all listless & missing Sanskaar badly. Funny that she isnt thinking about her Baba &his safe return at all😛😉😆 So nice of Uttara to spend some time with Swara given that Pawan is still in Maheshpur😆


While I don't like the idea of Ragini being forgiven so easily...even without her asking for it but what Sujata said does make sense. SwaSan have accused her but could not prove her guilty. At the moment I am just happy that Sujju says that she believes SwaSan but like any woman/ mother she wants some peace for her home & children & if that means she has to get forgiveness to an undeserving woman...so be it. But I loved Swara's conditional forgiveness. She will forgive Ragini's past deeds but if she were to repeat it & cause any further harm to Sanskaar or anyone Swara loves there will be no more forgiveness👏 Now it remains to be seen what Ragini does with this unearned & definitely undeserved forgiveness which she has got so easily.


What was Ragini doing in Janaki's room? Did she come just to see her mother or did she plant that message there?


Janaki & AP are such similar creatures but they reacted more like mothers today than Queens. The mother in Janaki was all confused & afraid for her daughter & thus in turn confused Swara with her panic. And on the other hand we have AP. She is Sanskaar's mother & before offering help or advice she wants to know if Swara trusts her son. This is the same woman whose trust in Sanskaar is unshakable. She stood against her own husband for this very son & hence naturally she wants to know if the woman entering her beloved son's life has even a quarter of that faith in him. And Swara doesn't disappoint! 👏 AP must be so proud of Swara & her son's choice👏 I loved how after her initial panic Swara when left to think on her own almost read each & every action of Sanskaar with precision. She knows him so well & hence guesses what he would do & what he wouldn't correctly👏 She chooses to keep faith. But then the topping on the cake is how she tells AP (to even talk to such a woman so clearly fearlessly would require some courage) firmly but politely that she will never agree to be one of two women for a man👏 👏 👏 She will readily leave with a broken heart if he chooses Kavita over her but she will not compromise on her self respect. I will once again repeat what I said in one of my earlier comments: abhimaani ladkiya bahot mil jaati hai par swabhimaani ladkiya nahi milti😳


And now comes the confusing part. Why did AP make her write it all down? Writing it all down is a pretty modern day technique to relieve stress😆 so I dont know what AP is going to do with that letter...hmm dekhte hai😛😆


P.S.: Oh n I loved how Swara went in search of Pawan. She trusts him so much😳 Pawan❤️
Edited by The.Lannister - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for 30😊
Unres

Dear Shru,

This whole chapter was indeed a test - for all of us.

Well, the start was on an expected note, Swara moping around for Sanskaar and refusing to be cheered despite the combined efforts (at times) of Pawan and Uttara. Then the first encounter - with Sujatha - she appeared to be acting on behalf of Annapurna - who addresses the ''Ragini issue' - which so far everyone has put on the backburner. Swara listens and states that while she will no longer trusts or loves her, she would not do anything to 'upset the applecart' provided Ragini stays within her limits.

Thank you for not making Swara like the serial one who simply goes around forgiving people without a thought.👏

But what caught my attention - Annapurna surely put up Sujata to talk to Swara and Sujata finds that Sanskaar is unreasonable with the guards for Swara (is it her own thought or a reflection of what Annapurna voiced?)

The letter from Kavita (accepting the same for the time being) found in Janaki's room - (the fact that Ragini is hovering around their chambers in their absence - another red herring of yours???). The seal already broken, presumably read by the 'palace traitor' before leaving it where it could reach Swara. But then the message - why do I get the feeling that the letter has been 'dictated' by someone else who planned this letter to reach Swara more than Sanskaar - Kavita would know about Sanskaar he is too honourable to keep a mistress (he gave up everything to marry her) why would he now take her as one? Even Sanskaar's letter was clear, there was no way he would ever take her as a mistress - He is clearly a 'one-woman' man.

Then there was Janaki's reaction - she is worried alright, but she stresses her point that Swara should not go to the Rudranagar temple, which is not feasible in any case as there are guards to watch her. Is she indirectly hinting that if Swara has to go the temple she would have to give the guards a slip??

Finally the encounter with Annapurna - Swara breaks down and confides all about the letter. Annapurna's first reaction is to find out where that letter is and then she wants to know what Swara's reaction to the letter was. She was not expecting such a reiteration of trust and faith in Sanskaar, was she? And then the strange request of having Swara write down a letter to Sanskaar - about her discovery of Kavita's letter, her initial reaction, her subsequent conviction of faith in Sanskaar and her final decision of allowing Sanskaar to choose (this is the no brainer, she believes completely that Sanskaar loves only her and that any rescue of Kavita would be on compassionate grounds). Annapurna has Swara then leave this missive with such a massive potential for manipulation and misinterpretation with her and further also makes Swara promise that she would let no one as to this letter (my mind and heart are screaming - CONSPIRACY) 😡

So Swara convinces Janaki too that she trusts Sanskaar implicitly and promises not to do anything. The last line - they continued to talk till interrupted by Sharmishta, so what does her entry portend?

I was reading the other posts on this thread and chanced on a post where doubts on Sharmishta were expressed, that got me thinking - what twisted warped mind would Sharmishta have to conspire against her own blood (the questions raised were quite pertinent) unless she feels more for Ragini? Even if she did, she could not so deviously scheme against Swara - turning a blind eye towards Ragini's deeds would be sufficient.😕😕

This was clearly Swara's chapter and I hope she continues to be the firm woman determined not to forgive Ragini and has implicit faith in Sanskaar.

love,
Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Whooodunit ! 😆
Absolutely relishing the intrigue Shru ! Read 29 and 30 together and jave lots to share snd guess and ask and comment ! But travelling endlessly for the last few weeks (and at the airport waiting to board even now) has strangled my daily poring over IF.

Res for now.😕😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shru🤗
Like the title of chapter suggests ..Test ..Indeed it was test for swara's love and trust towards sasnkaar and she didn't fall prey to plan

I am just waiting to see how sanskaar would react when he reads letter from swara 😳

Are there any twists here???

I dont know who the traitor is and I dont want to guess it either but Janaki doesnt seem right to me..I may be wrong on that note and it may turn out to be someone unexpected ..waiting for the traitor to be unveiled

My love for Swara is growing leaps and bounds with every chapter, her convo with sujata, annapoorna and janaki at the end just left me with an aww feeling ..⭐️⭐️

Lovely update👏 👏.👏.looking forward for the next chapter

Love
Lucky
Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
chap-30
amaizing updt...
i love every bit of swara's reaction on tht letter also her covo with sujju.
bt bt bt wht annapurna going to do with ths letter??
mujhe koi swasan MU nehi chahiye-kavita,ragini,annapurna koi vi kuch vi kare...
love to see swara's trust on sanskar...
waiting for nxt part.updt soon.thnks 4 pm.

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